OS.IPK... N my tears are red..as my heart bleeds.2

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Arpita Mukherjee

@arpita20

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

fantastic
so heart touching
lots of muuuah to you fazila di

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AR_EternalLove

@AR_EternalLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

awww fazyy it was soo emotional...

loved it...but why farmhouse?

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smiley24

@smiley24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

loved it

plz continue soon

i would love to read more

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riafna

@riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

I felt the same she will leave themm... And you wrote os on the same... Same pitch lol...
Nice OS Fuzzyy... I like the farmhouse part lol

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kkgs

@kkgs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

its so nice written nd ab arnav ki khushi se rudeness bahot rula ri h hope show m b jaldi se ye sital ment nthing ho jaye..:P

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mehak

@mehak06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

I think itz high time khushi leave for gupta house... wenever khushi goes away arnav realise his mistakes soon..and d asr in him rises... but i wud love to c how wil d truth unfold..

Edited by mehak06 - 12 years ago

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boisecrazy

@boisecrazy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

This is how it should be in the show, but unfortunately, it is not...

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

loved it

wished this happened in the show

But if Khushi left in the show Arnav wouldn't even miss Khushi

He is to wrapped up in Aarav and Shital, he even forgets he has a wife

He didn't even know she was missing from the basketball court

Shitty Arnav you deserve a few slaps

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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Wow That was nice. Loved it.

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

plzzz do me a favour...send dis to d CVs nd let them knw how to xecute a love story...nywaz i love dis OS...a much needed one 4 now...aftr reading d last line,my gutter mind has already started to work...lolzzz :D... But on a serius note kudoos to u...u r really an awsum writer...

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