OS.IPK... N my tears are red..as my heart bleeds.2

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Malvika18

@Malvika18

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Wonderful part Fuzzy! Read two of these in one go.. 😃

Gosh! This is really worth it. Lovely write up!

Really emotional and beautifully presented. Loved it loads. <3

Keep updating. :)

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Arooma

@Bubbles76

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

its veryyy veryyy goood 😊... well i think u shud send this to CVs ... atleast they shud show khushi doing somthing like this to relaize arnav how pmuch she is suffering 😭

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bavucute

@bavucute

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

phir sey farm house wow...exciting 😉

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@Fazila~

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Bubbles76
its veryyy veryyy goood 😊... well i think u shud send this to CVs ... atleast they shud show khushi doing somthing like this to relaize arnav how pmuch she is suffering 😭

i did go n click like there plz

http://forum32.com/profile/comments/810/fazila

go her n click on comment by fazila n then click like if u like it...😊

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@ashmir24

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Fazila~
how about a swimming pool dear...the way its going...we need a swimming pool...😭

Actually you cracked me up🤣

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

This was tooo lovely dmanit,,,,,Khushi's POV was good, but I think Arnav;s dialog needed much more punch and had to b a bit longer even...its just my opinion...

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Awesome!

Arnav really needs a shock from Khushi. As she is around he can't value her. I strongly believe Khushi should leave him and make him realise his love for Khushi.Though Shit-all meant nothing, but no wife can tolerate her hubby being so friendly with another woman and if she is his ex, then it's obvious to feel pain.

I understand Khushi's insecurity. May be she doesn't know she is 100 time prettier than Shit-all. If she would dress up like her, no Shit-all could come a little close to her. And Arnav mesmerised by her beauty at the very first sight. He didn't even looked at those sexy models on the ramp. Or moreover Arnav loved her not only becoz of Khushi's beauty but also for her simplicity, her craziness and for her pure heart.

I'm happy that finally he came to get her back. More happy that they went to the farm house rather than go back to RM. RM is not a good place for Arshi. Hamesha tension in RM and Arnav becomes unromantic there too.

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@Fazila~

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: ashmir24

Actually you cracked me up🤣

😆 gooddd

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@Fazila~

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: sohara
Awesome!
Arnav really needs a shock from Khushi. As she is around he can't value her. I strongly believe Khushi should leave him and make him realise his love for Khushi.Though Shit-all meant nothing, but no wife can tolerate her hubby being so friendly with another woman and if she is his ex, then it's obvious to feel pain.
I understand Khushi's insecurity. May be she doesn't know she is 100 time prettier than Shit-all. If she would dress up like her, no Shit-all could come a little close to her. And Arnav mesmerised by her beauty at the very first sight. He didn't even looked at those sexy models on the ramp. Or moreover Arnav loved her not only becoz of Khushi's beauty but also for her simplicity, her craziness and for her pure heart.
I'm happy that finally he came to get her back. More happy that they went to the farm house rather than go back to RM. RM is not a good place for Arshi. Hamesha tension in RM and Arnav becomes unromantic there too.

she doesnt know...shes insecure ... she doesnt know he cant live without her...ya they should move to farm house or gh hahahaha😆😉