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Posted: 12 years ago
it was a superb update...⭐️


i was foolish to miss it!!!!loved all the scenes..good job 👍🏼


Rathore is such a naughty person 😃


so riya now at arjun'place and he made her to lift the suitcases😆


omg!!no water in her room and in d other d door locked😲


poor riya literally cried her hearts out


but she threw all the soaps and shampoos😲 😆


fnally she made the tea!!!



dartboard scene was superr👏


arjun so impressed by riya's hardwork😉he even made her hit the dart☺️


he is really a perfct shooter!


lol..riya slept upside down😆


and arjun dared riya to button his shirts.!!!surely blushed inside😳


waiting for the precap!!


thanks for the pm
Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it! amazing story! plz continue soon and thanks for the pm x
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey prava...thanks for the update...


Ok so arjun and riya having food...and riya not use to spicy food...and wow dart board scene awesome...ye to kamal ka hai...ariya ki fight din ho ya raat hamesh hi cute hoti hai...i like it...

WHAT...sar ke jagah pair...riya is really a brat...par ye kya arjun uthane ke liye pani kun dala...jaise aag mein ghee...


Wow sach mein first time kosh ki khushi hi sab se alag hoti hai...aur jab princess riya ye feel kar rHi hai to sweet to hona hai hai...

OMG..OMG...arjun shirtless standing front of riya...haye...mein to mar gayi...aur ye kya riya arjun ke button laga rahi ahi...koi doctor ko bulao yaar...mein bahot jald mar jaungi...

PRECAP...

Ab har koi ek hi try mein achha cook to nahi ban sak ta na...disaster ho jate hai...


New hero...cocorch,...jaldi update please...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey,
Sorry for late comments, was away from IF for a couple of weeks due to studies...
Just read all your updates...

I loved the updates... I am loving this story its really interesting...
Pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey I love the story...can you plz pm me when you update thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

hi everybody...here is yet another part of my ff...hope you all will like it..

And sorry for being late..

PART 13 A:

Both of them have their morning breakfast. Arjun was about to go out but he casually checks his pockets, he forgot to take his wallet. He was about to go to his room to get wallet but he sees ria and says,

Ria go to my room and bring my wallet. And no more arguments now just go and bring the wallet ria.

Ria goes to arjun's room and searches for wallet but she does not find it and she screams from the room,

Arjun where is wallet?

Arjun answers Ria, I'ts in wardrobe just check it.

Ria says ok.😊

Ria opens arjun wardrobe and is shocked to see his wardrobe. It was so neat. Everything was in order and perfectly placed. She thinks, I will make this arjun clean my wardrobe too 😆and starts searching for wallet. Finally she finds the wallet and removes it.

But suddenly while removing the wallet, something falls down and makes noice. Ria sees it, it was a beautiful ring.😊

She admires the ring. It was a platinum ring with a solitaire diamond. She couldn't stop herself from wearing that ring. Finally she puts the ring to her ring finger.

The ring was looking so perfect in her finger as if it was designed for her finger.😛

Just arjun calls ria, Ria did you get my wallet.

Ria says yes, and she tries to remove the ring but surprising the ring stuck up in her finger. She was unable to remove it.

Arjun was calling ria after a while finally he comes there and sees ria struggling with something. He goes near ria and asks what happened.

Ria says nothing and gives his wallet. She was hiding her other hand.

Arjun notices some change in ria and asks why are you hiding your hand, he goes near her and pulls her hand and sees the ring on her finger. He was so angry😡 and he asks what is this ria? Why you wore this ring.

Ria was now a bit afraid and to change the topic she says,

Whose ring is this? Arjun doesn't answer and she says,

"Chori chori chup ke chup ke"😉

Arjun fumes in anger and was more irritated when ria said this and he forcefully pulls the ring out of her finger so harshly that riya gets hurt and she winced in pain..

Aaahhh..

Arjun took the ring and put it back safely in the wardrobe and said don't touch my things henceforth. He was about to go when he notices the that her finger was bleeding. He immediately brings the first aid box. And says sorry ria..😊

Ria again asks whose ring is this? Do you have girl friend.

Arjun: Shut up ria! Don't mess with me.

Arjun was about to say Gauri and all there come there.

Ria immediately goes near gauri and hugs her. Gauri krish and Ria were sitting together and all other sitting aside. They chit chat for a while and gauri and ria leave to kitchen.

Ria: Gauri from where shall we start.

Gauri we will start from cutting vegetables and give ria vegetables and explained her what to do. Ria nods as if she understood everything, but she was confused.😕

Ria: Gauri shall I ask you something.

Gauri : Ya sure

Ria: Gauri, you and arjun seem friendly do you know why arjun's wears that bandage, I even saw a ring in his room today.

Gauri: She was surprised by ria's question and asks why do you want know about that?

Ria: Don't get me wrong. I just saw and asked him, but that Akadu yelled at me. So I am asking you.

Gauri: give him some time you will know him better. Did you cut vegetables.

Ria: Not yet. In the confusion state finally she takes cabbage in her hand and wonders how to cut this. She first peels the first layer and she sees that the layers were repeated again. So one by one she removes all the layers of cabbage and says to gauri,

Gauri what is this how to cut it.😆

Gauri turns to ria and sees the cabbage peels and controls her laugh and shows ria how to cut the vegetables.

Ria: this is so easy.

After they are done with vegetables, Gauri takes some wheat flour and ask ria to knead it. Ria asks how? Gauri tells with the help of water and continues with her work.

Ria takes water and pours in the flour and she puts so much water that, water was floating on the flour and ria puts the hand in the flour and starts to knead.

But all the flour sticks to her fingers and she says eyeewww..😆

Gauri turns to her and sees ria had put more water in the flour and she says ria water is more so add some flour and was about to give the flour container when she cockroach and drop the container and flour fell on gauri. And she screams

Cockroach!! Cockroach!!😆

Ria sees it and both are screaming.

Rathore: this is gauri's voice why is she screaming, hope is safe😛

Arjun: stop it rathore even ria is screaming, hope both are safe and both of them were going towards kitchen when ria starts roaming in the house screaming Cockroach. She is climbing sofa, chair running around.

Arjun is running behind her.

Rathore goes to kitchen and sees gauri and ask what happened. And she innocently says Cockroach and hugs him.

Rathore: what is this gauri you are ACP's wife and you afraid of cockroach.

Gauri: so what!! They look so scary..😳

Ria was running around and screaming top of her voice and finally she martches to her room and arjun follows her. In the chase both of them fall on bed. Ria was lying down and arjun was lying on top of her and calmps her mouth'😉

To be continued'

PRECAP 1: Neerav follow ria

PRECAP 2: Ria in Saree.😊


hope you all liked it...

I know its a bit short update. I will update part B soon..

if you have liked it..plz do hit the like button and leave your comments...

Next part:Part 13b

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70443999

NOTE: on page 47...please see..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3265198/ff-taming-of-the-shrew-upt-part21-page-102?pn=47



My other work..on RishBala(Drashti and Vivian)..people you can just look in there...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3303974/ff-jab-we-met-upt-pt4-pg-13-14-balraj-in-action

Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey me first

kya baat hai prava dear
instead of cutting cabbiage she
pealed it 🤣


wow arjun hardly took riyas ring
so sad 😭


gouri hugs rathod wow so sweet ❤️


precap sounds intersting
continue soon
Edited by shrutisweety - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update :) loved it
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update😊
Edited by kavana_n - 12 years ago

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