Khushi goes missing...:COMPLETE!Epilogue Pg 38

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rima

@rima

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+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#241

God bless you for this story

I came to the forum after ages

and I fell in love with Arnav and Khushi's true love story made even more beautiful by you

Thank you

fabulous writing

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#242

amazing one ...
loved it
hats off

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Read it the second time and still could not skip any portion!

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

What a lovely story.

Glad i came across it.

You tackled the issue in a very mature way.

Please do PM me if you write something else.

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Lovely story. will come back with more comments.

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Crisp, lovely, mature and so completely adorable!

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Wonderful! Simply wonderful :)

From the beginning of the show we had been privy to Khushi dare her extremely mature moments and those were something I missed greatly towards the end of the show

But you fixed that :) and so nicely too!

You've taken the Sheetal track and turned it into something beautiful, something that lead to new beginning for both, something that caused them to finally open up to one another and realize each other's worth.

Once again, amazing story :)

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smilejans

@smilejans

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Loved this story, turning modern khushi in mature way.

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#249

That wad such an awesome story
Loved the khushi here

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#250

Res

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Such a simple and beautiful tale...

I normally do not read a story that deals with the Sheetal track as to me that track was anti to the very essence of ArHi...

But I went ahead and gave this story a go because the opening lines caught my attention well and am glad I did...

Arnav and Khushi are a passionate and an intense couple. But that fuels attraction. Marriage needs understanding, communication and a desire to grow together and grow old together. This is what this story was all about. Bravo! 👍🏼

And what took the cake was the very end of the story, when in a few lines you charted their lifetime together and how they left this world together having led a fulfilled life, one brimming with love.

Kaash show main yehi dikha dete... Sigh...

Good job 👏

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago