*Awarded* Arhi FF: A New Khushi - Ch 1-26 *COMPLETED*

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alishbasadori

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Posted: 12 years ago

#911

May i hav the link for ur blog dear !

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#912

Finally started reading...😊..

Read parts 1-5, But looks like I have a lot to catch up on !

I was surprised you started with the Sheetal track. But looking at the date you started this story, I realise it coincides with the time that track was on air.

I like your Khushi. She is funny, vulnerable and independent in her own way.

Khushi wants to work...and that too not in AR. Poor Girl! I hope Arnav sees how much pain he is giving his wife.

I love the bit where she realises Sheetal's Karva chauth plan and spoils it for her.That was very Khushi like.😆

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#913

Originally posted by: Afya
Finally started reading...😊..
Read parts 1-5, But looks like I have a lot to catch up on !

I was surprised you started with the Sheetal track. But looking at the date you started this story, I realise it coincides with the time that track was on air.

I like your Khushi. She is funny, vulnerable and independent in her own way.

Khushi wants to work...and that too not in AR. Poor Girl! I hope Arnav sees how much pain he is giving his wife.

I love the bit where she realises Sheetal's Karva chauth plan and spoils it for her.That was very Khushi like.😆

Afya..you will love it!

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Afya

@Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#914

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Afya..you will love it!

I am sure I will, Vandana. I will also love the one you are about to write😉

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Afya

@Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#915

Read Chapter 6-7😊

Hate Sheetal! I hope she is kicked out very soon.

How sweet of Arnav to watch 'Hum Aapke Hain Kaun' with her, just to give her company!😊

Bubble bath and Khushi in Arnav's shirt...Ahem...What can I say! Quite hot!😳

Loved how jealous Arnav gets seeing Khushi dressed up in a skirt for her first day at Rohan's office.😆. Poor Arnav! I can imagine his face when Rohan tells him that their parents were considering getting Khushi married to him.😆

Sorry, Sami, I am reading at snail's pace. But I will get there.

I also may be able to read more from next week, now that i might take a break from writing soon. Vandana decides.

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#916

Sami 🤗

Main aagayi...Phew done all the way till chapter 26.

What can i say sam i loved it. Instead of ANK this could have been called IPK -The way it should have been.

You had a sheetal right in the beginning and see none of us got irritated and angry for the simple reason that you made your khushi a strong and independent women who decided to stand firm and fight for her husband rather than let that bit*h walk all over her.

Can i just tell you that i am in love with this Khushi.

She is smart, intelligent and knows how to stand her ground. 👍🏼

Wish the CVs had your skills to give us something like this rather than what horror we had to witness in the last 2 mths.

Love you girl for writing this and sharing this with us 🤗

And i will take this back as the story forward of the serial that i fell in love with.

What can i say about this super cute, romantic and the best hubby ever Arnav. I love the way he always affirms his love for khushi every single time, but more i loved the fact that he is aware that Sheetal is affecting khushi and his relationship. And i loved the way he put her in place.

I loved the way how he wants khushi to become independent and a women of today. I loved his concern for khushi and how he took care in rectifying all the things. Thanks for the Clothes, the card, the lingerie and the car. You gave everything to Khushi which Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada truly deserved.

I know there are times when Arnav is the stubborn mule but frankly i have always had a soft spot for the ASR in Arnav. I just love that man. BAS. I loved how we got to see once again glimpses of

Mr. Possessive Singh Raizada. He is so super cute i tell you.

I loved how you made Arnav take care of his sick wife that was to swoon for, perfect i tell you.

And finally I wish i was part of this journey right from the beginning cause i am sure i would have loved reading and commenting on this for sure.

Sorry sam i wish i could do a chap to chap comment but alas i am slightly pressed for time and i hope you will understand.

Ok waiting for the blog link but i am proceeding ahead.

Can't wait to read the rest dear 😃

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PreenaRak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#917

Wow. This is d first time am texting u. Olz dont feel offended, its bcos i was busy reading ur work in one go at my interval time. U r doing really well. Well abt last chapters i liked d way Arnav explained khusi hw dependent he was of her n hw much he wished her to let him take care of her. Superb. Would like to hav some intimate scenes between them. And one more request dont make khusi too bold. Let her b smart but still naive. Thanku u for writing such a wonderful story

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PreenaRak

@PreenaRak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#918

Hi sami, chapters r bcoming intersting. Keep goin. Would like to have link to ur mature blog. Pls snt me d link. Thank u

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Bhavz21_ArShi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#919

I have just started to read ur work work read all the chapters in one go have to say mind blowing story can't wait to read more

Please PM and if possible can u send me the blog link

Thanks :D