Arhi SS Chamkili. Link to thread#2 and AN on Pg-135. 01-7-14.

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musicfan5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Amazing story...love the way u potrayed the characters...Khushi's pain..the way she hides it behind her smile...ASR's anger...his outburst and then regret...

felt like strangling Pooja...😡

please update soon...eagerly waiting for the next part...

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

You said you would update in 2-3 days. It's already 15th Jan. please update b

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lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Read your SS umpteen times. Such wonderful writing and the way you bring to life the feelings of Khushi, her turmoil, her fears and anguish is awesome.

The disturbed feelings of Arnav where he has totally forgotten his wife, Khushi; Arnav does not sense her anymore. His thoughts are more and more engrossed with Sheetal and Aarav. How to please them, take care of them.

Khushi is so lost and so demoralized and she feels that she is an encumbrance in Arnav's happiness. She wants to forget her feelings, her happiness. Though he does remember Khushi, in guilt but just for a moment and then his thoughts are back with Sheetal and Aarav.

Now that Khushi has left, poor soul. What is going to become of her. Will it bring Arnav to his senses or onceagain he will disregard his wife and attend to Sheetal and Aarav.

Please update soon, waiting for the next chapter.

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Still waiting on the next chapter!!

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Plz update soon...U left it at a cliffhanger...eagerly waiting for next chap...

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lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Your last post was on 8th of January. Today is the 29, exactly 20 days have passed. Please update soon. Want to know if Khushi is safe.

😭

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Srija,

What happened dear? You said you would be posting soon the 4th chapter. Please update soon.

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lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Given up... will not check again 😭

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lara3110

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Arnav turned back,

"Khushi I..."

But she was gone.

Where did she go, where did she vanish ??? Please update, It has been so long. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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Srija Singh

@srija.singh04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Hey guys!

So m finally back and this time for good😊 I know I had promised an update last month itself and that 😊I am way behind in my updates but no worries now, cz my exams, vacations, and even my cousin's wedding is done with and I feel like I have all the time in the world.

So...

You can expect an update...

Sometime today😳

Yes friends I am finally done with most of the 4th part and just d last part remains. So await it, u r definitely getting it today😊