Short OS : We Missed The Moment...Part 5 CONCLUDED

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laksh65

@laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

very nicely written,

i expect when khushi recovers she does not forgive him easily she should stay away from him even if she end up staying under same roof with him, he should realize that he cannot take her for granted just because she does not say anything.

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Gosh i am so greedy..but i want another update..hehe

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Oh my I just read this n it's brilliant

N yah Arnav is right he was so ignorant he pushed her to this limit

Waiting for the next part

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Lovely update... I wish that we could see this intense drama in the show rather than the mindless comedy.

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abavi

@abavi

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

well written... the first aid and the hospital scenes were all well explained...

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neha

@nehusashhh

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

zumba dis really gud!! sumthin wich i liked aftr dat stupid comedy ruined my mud!!!!

nehusashhh

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Brilliant, so ,uh pain and emotion. Loved it!

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Beautifully Written!👏

Thank God She's Alright!

I'm really pissed with current Shit-Al track. 😡

Hope Everything gets better soon!

Love,

Jiji

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@A...

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

tht was very emotional n i felt tht loss of Arnav ... It was devasting n sad part. As always, yur writing is amazing n brilliant... Gud luck!!!

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lilbirdie

@lilbirdie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Beautfully written!!!!!!!!
Well dun...
Do update the nxt part...

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