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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Very very beautifully written... The sheer pain anguish and helplessness of Khushi was so wonderfully captured... The torture she is going through is just heart breaking... Well done Zara, it was awesome.

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

People before reading.. have tissues ready..!! Trust me .. because I'm in tears..:'(

that was soo hearttouching .. you wrote it with soo much emotion.. I really feel for khushi and her anguish andc how she tries so hard to keep it away from everyone.. brilliantly written!!

Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago

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Hope

@Hope

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Well written. I want Kushi to be like that in the show to make Arnav realize what his actions were and are doing to her.

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smarty94

@smarty94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

res.

*EDIT*

my first reaction after reading the update ---->

itni dukhyari ending? 😔 the story was great... thats what i really wanna see... ARNAV feeling her pain, comapring it with what he felt during PayAsh wedding with NK around. But noppp, he has sworn to ignore her and just concentrate on his long-lost-forgotten-out-of-nowhere-appearing girlfriend -__-

wish the writer cud get his lost senses back warna yeh ubharta hua show gaya pani mein

Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago

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shorna

@shorna

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

CV's should come here in the forum, adapt some ideas from this brilliant work.

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

wow...what a fabulous OS...at times i feel like hurling something on arnav for being so apathetic towards khushi's pain...why is it that he always realises his folly too late, only to make khushi suffer😭

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9424976

@9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

ANGST I LOVE ANGST I AM FEELING THE ANGST. Really though I feel like this is what I need, I wish we got arnav's point of view in all of this. And I am wondering where does the whole padlocked word mean in this story?? And I wish you could continue it!

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coronapsyche

@coronapsyche

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

*Taking Tissue from ur hand* sob, sob*

Zara- sis, thats sad, so sad!
The silent tears,the sobbibg in the Kitchen of Khushi- I couldnt take it! 😭
I was soo angry at CV for taking away the mighty Asr - who could have read Khushi's mind, eyes😔But now he doesnt even understand his wife's insecurity!! I am beyond hurt!
Sorry for venting out too much but I had to say this😔
Awesme Update,Zara👏That 'silent treatment' -is what Arnav needs right now to wake up his mind😔
Hugs,Yaar🤗

Edited by coronapsyche - 12 years ago

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Desi-
RES

edited...

THAT was EPIC!

NOW THAT is the type of suffering that Arnav needs!!!!!! I want to see it! I want to smile as I see him suffer for everything he has done!!!!!

Yep, i'm sadistic right now!!!!!

Zara, honey! YOU RULE!!!!!!!!! I WISH!!! WISH I COULD WRITE SUCH DEVESTATING ANGST!!!!!

thanks for liking sis, but the bit i highlighted in bold above...😲

I think your the best angst writer in the world sis!!!

xxx

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: 9424976
ANGST I LOVE ANGST I AM FEELING THE ANGST. Really though I feel like this is what I need, I wish we got arnav's point of view in all of this. And I am wondering where does the whole padlocked word mean in this story?? And I wish you could continue it!

urm i thought it would be obvious. Sorry for not making it more obvious. It was about Khushi's feelings and emotions being locked from the world.