ArSha FF-daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf#3 Link#4 pg 150

magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Meesocute
awesome ff...
luved it...kuwar is such a sweetheart
plshh update next part...
and do pm me

Thanks 😊

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magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

Hey,

Okay, so there it is. Uh, I really don't know about this, it kinda took on a life of its own. I'm especially unsure about the last two parts. Anyway, it is what it is. Wow M babbling 😆😆

Please review and tell me what you think!

I apologize for any grammar and/or spelling mistakes.

Luv

Mania 😊

This update is dedicated to

hetal29 & Kitttu1309

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magical_mania

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Posted: 12 years ago

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khushboo

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awww...cant tell you how much i loved this update

The way you describe shakti...her feelings,excitement,joy is brilliant !

Everything in this is so beautifully described...and how can i forget kunwar,😳his loving and caring nature...I love him for this !

You have used beautiful lines and conversations about babies ...this part was too cute :)ARSH and SHAMA ...lovely names

loved their talks about "adorable" "You're such a baby sometimes."...very true

the line "A pregnancy...got boring" ,this one have my heart

too good...thanx 4 d pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

how u alwz manage to write so beautifull...

it was from Shakti's POV...

her emotions n feelings...

n as usual Kunwar is just "Adorable"

he is so caring n loving...

n i jus love their lill flirty section...

fab update...

update the next part soon...

thnx 4 the pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

Beautiful one dear...loved it...thnx for d PM

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GoldenLuna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#797

amazing update...

beautifully written...

loved it...

thnx for pm..

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#798

loved d update explained each n everythin in such a sweet way...
its really superb...
loved carin kunwar n d way she kept seein d ultra sound photo of their baby n videos..
loved d choice of names arsh n shama..
really kunwar s "adorable"
n even ur work s adorable its simple cute n d way kunwar cried wen he heard d 1st kick of d baby was superb...
loved d update...

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