Review for update-30
This update was mesmerizing. Big steps in story writing usually make the writer a bit emotional while writing. 😳
The start itself was so serene. You chose the perfect place for pre-wedding meet. A beach where one can listen his/her own heart beats in rhyme with wave sounds.
Manu!! You took me to poetic land where I usually become philosopher..😳😆
Shakti is such a cute angel. Her happiness lie with small things. I just love the way you bound words for making this beautiful piece. All the beach scene was awesome.
phattooo...hahaha..that is an open invitation to Kunwar to get revenge in most loving manner.😆
Their touch and kisses, they said volumes for their bond.☺️
The last part was so sensous...They were on ways where usually lover lost the control or a way back. Their desire for each other is on peak and that's how lovers convey the love without words. The want and desire for every bit of his/her lover.
Last part was so well written and described that I thoroughly hail you.
Amazing update...amazing writer...amazing time I have spent reading this...😃
Muhaazzz...
