ArSha FF-daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf#3 Link#4 pg 150 - Page 11

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha

1stly mania... CONGRATULATIONSSS for your 3rd thread... *hugs* ... U truly deserve it... :D .. U hv no idea hw mch i ws waiting for ur update... Finally... Hehehe... Okay nw coming to ur update..soo...Starting frm d start...when i saw d wedding venue...i ws like...woah...that was... Beautiful mania...i mean it ws hst d way a grl wud want... Jst perfect... I wish meri marriage b aisi jagah pe ho.. *dreaming... Ok ok going on... I loved your update... D way u described der feelings..der love..der passion towards each othr... Gosh.. You left me dumbstruck... I dnt knw wat u personally feel for this update bt frm my side... it came out just d way u wanted it to be... "PERFECT" ... No more words for dis awesomeee...beautiful...flawless update manu... Biggg hugsss to u... :)

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Hii. . . .
Congrats 4 the new thread. . . .
And u were right it was damm sizzling update. . .

Originally posted by: SanjArShi-ASR

Awsoem And Romantic Update...Finally Arsha is a Married Couple...great...waiting for the next Update...

Originally posted by: SanjArShi-ASR

and bhul gayi...Congrats for the new thread...

Originally posted by: kvarsha

awesome updateee...

jst simply loved ittt...

thnx 4 pm😃

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

Hey ...

Great update ...

Very beautifully written ...

Loved it ...

Waiting for next ...

Update soon ...

Thnx for pm ...

Congrats 4 the new thread. . . .

Originally posted by: rubykriyansh

Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Congo 4 d new thread ..!
Thanks 4 d pm ..!
Update soon ..!

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

oh my...such a beautiful update...their pure love embellished with the honey of sensuality...simply exhilarating and stunning...loved it...congoz for new thread.

Originally posted by: rock_ruvi

Congrats 4 the new thread. . . .
nice update

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

Review for update-30

This update was mesmerizing. Big steps in story writing usually make the writer a bit emotional while writing. 😳

The start itself was so serene. You chose the perfect place for pre-wedding meet. A beach where one can listen his/her own heart beats in rhyme with wave sounds.

Manu!! You took me to poetic land where I usually become philosopher..😳😆

Shakti is such a cute angel. Her happiness lie with small things. I just love the way you bound words for making this beautiful piece. All the beach scene was awesome.

phattooo...hahaha..that is an open invitation to Kunwar to get revenge in most loving manner.😆

Their touch and kisses, they said volumes for their bond.☺️

The last part was so sensous...They were on ways where usually lover lost the control or a way back. Their desire for each other is on peak and that's how lovers convey the love without words. The want and desire for every bit of his/her lover.

Last part was so well written and described that I thoroughly hail you.

Amazing update...amazing writer...amazing time I have spent reading this...😃

Muhaazzz...