*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS: A Jalebi-fied Tale

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

Even though I asked for the 2nd concept to be developed into a story first, I am so glad that you started with this...kya concept hai...mmmuaaah.

And angry bristling Arnav because he does not know how to handle his feelings for Khushi and he has feelings galore for her; does not not know why he wants to probably hurt Dhruv physically for being close to Khushi, and a Khushi who hides her concern for him under a veil of jibes, gradually getting baffled by his rudeness...wow...what a mouth-watering combo...

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Lavanya

@lav.0301

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

haha...arnav is already jealous of Dhruv...c'mn Dhruv b careful...😛😛😛

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Just read the whole thing. I couldn't stop smiling. Titli, the name is as cute as the person. Loved the way everyone supporting her and your concept of the story

Update soon

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sree1993

@sree1993

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

What's wrong with Arnav?poor Khushi😭

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

I find Arnav cute and adorable at a point of time when he's jealous...and then I want to tell him off for irritating and hurting my Khushi next!!

Dammit...itne mood swings kyun Arnav babua???

Ohh I absolutely lub Mami's eenglishh!! Its so maadern I say!!😆

Dhruv...back off!! Arnav's hurting Khushi because you are getting cozy!!!😕

I'm pretty sure Arnav got something for Khushi too...itna bhi bura nahi ho sakte ho tum Arnav!!!😃

Thanks for the pm!!

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binimoti

@binimoti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

This is quiteba version of what the waale jalebiyaan lejayengey, very nice update thanks for pm

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

started reading on Sunday night and finished on mOnday morning! you know Family interference!

OK. Reading once I would say Arnav is mean. But somehow I have this feeling that there is more to the story.
Now will read it again ASAP to check for hidden meanings! 😉

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undercoverhappy

@undercoverhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

Arnav adored the Guptas minus 1 😃 minus 1 is the one he loves

"Hari Prakash! Hari Prakash!" Arnav bellowed and everyone at the table stilled and prayed for Hari Prakash.😆

"Ji... jii Arnav Bhaiyya!" Hari Prakash stuttered. POOR HP

"Dhruv wants to give you something" Arnav looked slyly at Dhruv.🤣

"What Arnav?" Dhruv asked confused.🤣

"Hari Prakash made the dal" Arnav replied glaring at Dhruv and then his eyes fell on Khushi's face.🤣

Arnav is angry at Kushi why?

I love Anjali and her ideas and Druv is drooling over Kushi making Arnav angry is perfect 👏

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soulstarspirit

@soulstarspirit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#369

just read the two parts..i must say very interesting 😉
Am loving it..Arnav-Khushi-Dhruv awesome trio 😉
Update soon..And thank u for pm 😛 😃

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#370

Oh boy, Arnav can't decide whether he loves or hates Khushi... Felt really bad for Khushi, poor girl :( Zehra, hope you're going to make Arnav pay for his cruelty...