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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it!!!!
my whole comment got deleted😭
anyway love kbv he is screwd and smart!!!
arshi made up soo fast !!!!
awesome update!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks for the PM.

This is such a well written, thought out and layered tale. Each update draws me in deeper.

I am very impressed by Khushi's insight into the man she married, this floored me, "Joy, happiness, love, jealousy or anger; her husband expressed it with sex".

Certain questions come up time and again so thought I would ask,

Is Arnav Khushi's first cousin and if so how CAN they get married?

Who/What is Suraj and what are his intentions/motives/desires?

Wonder what next?

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Posted: 12 years ago
I feel sad for Khushi. Poor thing, even with all that love, she has reached a dead end. Resigned. And that is the worst thing to happen to someone like her - spirited and fierce. Maybe if she talks to Arnav about how she feels, they might be able to make some progress.

They seem to have moved on from that horrible incident, but they have much severe issues that still need to be addressed. But the intensity and passion with which Arnav loves Khushi is simply heart warming. And thats what makes us hope that this relationship may actually work out in the end.

Suraj. The man is scary. Its so difficult to predict his moves, and that only makes it worse. He won't stop until he is stopped. Its good that KBV is on alert mode. Like Khan said, KBV is a shark.

Also, I had a little doubt with regard to the story - I have mentioned that on my comment in Pg 26. Please have a look when you have time and get back to me ?

Great update Kalyaani. I absolutely LOVE this story :)
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Girls think from their heart...
Kbv is very practical...what he thought and did for his daughter...wasn't wrong from his pov...but still the truth is going to break her...
Great update!
Arnav ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant update..

Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...as always...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update!good to know that KBV is keeping an eye on Suraj!
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a beautiful weekend treat kalyaani, thnks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww...loved the romance😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here I was checking your second thread whenever I got a chance, thinking you might be really busy to update and more importantly not realizing that you might have started a new thread ( was too busy in worrying to look at the page no:s there...)Stupid me 😭
And here you have updated THREE more chapters...So much has happened during my absence...😭
But now I know...😊

Enough of whining...getting back to your updates...

So both Arnav and Khushi saw Suraj in chap 38. I liked Khushi's understanding and concern towards her husband when she spotted Suraj in the cafe. She surely didn't want to upset her husband and used her best weapon to handle the situation. When I was wondering how come Arnav didn't notice Suraj's presence, being the attentive and intelligent man he is, you cleared my doubts with the very last paragraph... both of them wanted to avoid Suraj, for their own reasons!
Chapter 39 is a blasting update (although I am happy somehow I got the opportunity to read 39 and 40 in a row. Otherwise I surely would have an cardiac arrest with the anticipation of what is going to happen next after reading the Chap. 39!!!). When I was reading 37th chapter, I so badly wanted to understand what is going on in Arnav's mind. True..You have planted the idea in my mind that theirs was a marriage of convenience...But somewhere down the line I had the feeling that it had to be at least little bit more than that for Arnav. No, I didn't except him to be in love with Khushi, it would have been so unlike of the character. But I felt he must have been attracted to Khushi in some way. I so wanted to clarify my thoughts! I always have lots of faith on the writer that you are, to unfold the characters and the circumstances in the most enthralling way and you didn't disappoint me! Now I understand Arnav's reasons for concealing the truth. And I was also correct with the pre-marriage "attraction" part, physical attraction is very well suited with Arnav's character.
I am glad they are back to normal again, although in between the two chapters I was totally having a panic attack (I know it was a matter of few minutes, but still...). I liked your take on KBV which fits to the T with the imagination in my head, "the dynamic-wise-old man-personality" (Sorry I know it is the authors right to imagine their characters, but i always have this crazy imaginations regarding the ones I read..!). But for me the most highlighting bit of this chapter is again Khushi's understanding of her husband. She knows her man, even though he is hesitant to let her in, still she understands him. I loved how she connected the dots and realize that he must have seen Suraj despite of her attempts..
Waiting to see how the rest is going to unfold...

Edited by anu41982 - 12 years ago

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