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Rita

@rjhaveri

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

I thought it was a sweet one, the start was scary but the ending ended up very cute. I thought Khushi was gone and he had gone insane imagining her.

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Aisha

@.Aisha.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Awww..this was so cute!(Don't call it crappy, young lady😳):D But I must admit, when I started reading this, I thought Khushi was dead or something😕 You always shock your readers😛

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

hehehe
it wasnt crappyy it wass cute!!!
the os scared me
that maybe khushi iss dead
o maybe she left!!!!
but wow u never fail to surprise me:P

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Arshifan4life

@Arshifan4life

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Awww sooo sweet I wish everyone gets a husband like Arnab

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

it was cute! not crappy!!!

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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

after reading the first line, I was dreading to read any further! then I mastered my heart n carried on! 😳 that was sooo beautiful! he became a Ghar jamai for her!! I loved it!!!

you calling this crap??? 😲 😲 Girl you seriously don't know how talented you are!!

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

it wasnt crappy at all instead it was so beautifully written with plenty of originality:)

u r a very talented writer and i simply love ur work

this os very sweet, it shows the beautiful bond between a husband and wife and how they cant leave without each other

u should definitely write these kinds of things from time to time, they make us remember how beautiful love can be:)

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panck

@panck

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Very nice..

But I must say you have extremely high expectations from Arnavji..three kids WOW

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maazia

@maazia

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Aww. Sweet. He loves her so much. I must say, in the beginning i was wondering if you were going to show that his family had been in an accident or something of that sort. But then was happily surprised.
Lovely story.