KR: Just Another Romeo and Juliet [Ch2 Pg75 Nov03] - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago


Updatin in sometime :)
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<< Banner Credits: Kriti. Thanks Hun. This is just awesome! :* šŸ¤— >>




Sorry about the delay for this one. Hopefully, this won't happen again. Thanks so much for all the lovely comments and encouraging words. It means a lot to us. Not wasting much of you time, here you go with Chapter One. Happy Reading! And we'll see ya'll at the bottom of the page. : )




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C h a p t e r O n e .

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"Vicky! Dude, what the hell do you think you're doing?"


"What? I'm just cleaning this CD!"

"With Collin? Like seriously? Are you out of your mind?"


"Arey haan mere bhai. Yeh toh maine dekha hi nahi. Now what Nil?"


"What do you mean by that?"


"Dekh yaar Simmi. Yeh Vicky apni Kaagu ke saath reh rehke ussi ki tarah ho gaya hai. Look what has he done."


"Arey haan Nil. Chill. Batao toh aakhir hua kya hai?"


"He has cleaned the Final CD for the event with Collin!"


All this while Vicky was standing silently with a glum expression on his face. Hearing Nil's words, she exclaimed with surprise. In no time the whole gang was there shouting on Vicky.


"Kyun shouting on my Baabu you all are?"


"Arey yaar! Firse shuru ho gaya yeh Baabu Kaagu drama."


Hearing this comment Vicky glared at Nil who zipped up his mouth at once. Seeing the situation going out of hand, Swayam suggested everyone to focus and think of something to do.


"What do you mean by karna kya hai?"


"Rinni, just shut up!"


"Simmi, stop panicking. You just have to copy the final track onto a new CD."


Everyone was shocked to get such a response from Rinni. Recovering they hugged her in excitement. It was then Swayam who asked them the important question.


"But woh track hai kiske paas?"


"Bhai. Don't worry. I have it in my laptop. Main abhi jaakar le aati hun."


Taani goes to the locker room and returns with her laptop and a blank CD. They all settle on the stairs of the atrium and start with their work. Sharon skilfully burnt the track onto the CD and in sometime all were seated over there gossiping. As they all were busy in there chats, Vicky took out some chocolates from his bag and gave them to everyone. Rey took two and offered one to Taani. The two shared a long eye lock after this.



Soon the bell rang and all of them proceeded towards the classroom. They settled in their respective seats - Rey with Swayam, Taani with Neha, Nilesh with Vicky, Sharon with Simi, Rinni with Vishakha and Amar with Bharat. The professor barged in and asked them to work on the data sheets given to them in pairs and draw the graphs. Everyone got started. ReYam ended up with a TR and SS on their graphs.



After the class the gang proceeded towards the cafeteria and occupied their favourite spot. Simi and Nilesh went to place the order while the other got into random chats. After some time a verbal fight gained everyone's attention. Rahul was yet again harassing a new-comer, the same way he did some months back. And Sharon being the diva and the beautiful human being she is was filled with rage. She went towards their table and slapped him tight.


"Rahul, this is the last time I am warning. If you ever look at a girl again, I'll make sure you're out of this college. St. Louis does not require creeps like you!"


Patting the girl and looking at her with reassurance, she stormed out of the canteen without looking back even once. Everyone dispersed in different directions for their next class.



Around evening, girls met again at the basketball court where the boys were already busy playing the game. The girls started what they were best at - gossips. The boys were still playing when Rey tripped while running and wounded his elbow. Blood was oozing out from the wound. Seeing this Taani got to her tension mode and went running towards Rey. She took out her handkerchief and tied it properly around Rey's wounded elbow.



Seeing the tense atmosphere the gang called it a day and everyone got back to their homes. Taani was riding with Rey, Sharon and Swayam as usual. While the rest of them got back in the other car.


It was a busy day for our Louisans.


All throughout the night, Sharon was getting this restless feeling but she chose to ignore it and slept if off as tomorrow was another busy day for them. After all 'The Charity Event' is just a few days away.


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Hey peeps. Scroll down for a small note! =)

Edited by Aquilia_Aditi - 12 years ago
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<< Banner Credits: Kriti. Thanks Hun. This is just awesome! :* šŸ¤— >>



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Well there it is. Our latest attempt and the much awaited Chapter One of this Fic. We know it's a bad place to stop. But being the devil I am and Pihu she is, we will continue with more next time. Please let us know what you think, and if we should continue this story line. Thanks for reading. : )



Why we are writing this note is to let you all know that this is a KriYaansh Fan Fic. Last time we were bombarded with questions like are you sure this is a KR FF and stuff as such. Please try and understand. This is important for the story to go on. We request you all to go with the flow. One day you'll know why we did this the way we're doing it. Be patient. We are not insane to write a TR FF under KR's title. So please calm down and keep showering your love on us.



Most of you know it already, but we are still telling you that we are very demanding. So the next update would be given somewhere around Page 50 and after some 45 likes!


So all our dear spammers, get set go. You know what to do now. Happy spamming! xD


Also, we've added the banner made by Kriti [Kritid3lover]. Do let us know whether you like it or not. x)


Want a PM? Add IceCrystals. to your buddy list. PMs for this part will be sent tomorrow! =]



Adios

Love, Aditi and Palak


Xoxo

Edited by Aquilia_Aditi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res
Unres !


Holla !
So,here is d first part of our ff.. It feels great to c dat u all liked it buh still m not at all happy wid d reviews we got !

I kno,d demand hs been completed on d third day aftr d update itself buh m yet not satisfied Dis is d first time,I'v tried my hand in writing so I really expect some gud reviews.. Its disheartenin to c such less comments..

Leme not go emotional.. Buh is it dat bad????!!!
Ohki.. Now I understn wht all writers actually wants to convey whn they write notes n all...

N as Aditi said,still thr r likes to b completed n also we wud lik to hav atleast 25-30 comments regardin d update.. N also,I wud request.. Vaish,Mish n Sapna to gv their Reviews.. N also,d ppl who hv res'd thr comments are requested to unres it thn only we r goin to gv an update...

Seriously,it almost took 2months to convince Aditi to continue dis one as Was really excited n now feelin lik It wudnt tk evn a single minute to discontinue it !

So.. Aftr all ths bhaashan.. M expectin some gud things to happen ! šŸ˜›

Edited by Pihu.k11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update
Little confusing
Waiting for kriya entry


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved iot
but it was short...
next time longer one
and ha ho sake toh TR ko cut hi kardena..šŸ˜†
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
short one bt cute update.
enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cleanin cd with colin😲🤣
ta rey ka llhh😔
1 doubt iss ff mai rey hv never met kria or kria rey ka dil thoda tha na...waha se???plz answer..
Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved it is (:

**EDITED :

So, after waiting for about 3 months or more, the first chapter has finally made it's way! šŸ˜† You guys better speed up the next time! 😔

Anyhow, coming back to the update. I can see this story developing into a fine piece in it's future, and only if you pledge to update regularly!

Albeit, I loved the way you expressed the happenings in the college. But, yeah, please do use paragraph breakers like {***} whenever the scene switches or leave an extra line, as it gets pretty confusing! šŸ˜•


Well I think the girl who Rahul was teasing must be Kria and I am very much excited to read ahead.

Thanks for the reminder, but I doubt I received a PM! So, the first thing I will do is add IceCrystals. in my buddy list! 😳


Cheers! And please be soon with the update, me waiting! šŸ˜†

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally 1st chappy ka muhurat ho hi gya janamon baad šŸ˜†
started wid vicky's goof-ups . . . . . . Wat could've been better šŸ˜›
lol . . . . Colin se cd? 😲
play toh kar ke dekhte . . . . Shayad chal jaye 🤪
aditi, sach bata . . . Tune ye apna personal experience daala hai kya? 🤣
isme kagu ki kya galti . . . . . Vicky to hai hi dumb šŸ˜•
wat was that rahul's segment . . . . . . Relation nhi samajh aaya uska story se... 😳
I guess sharon is in contact wid kriya . . . . Kuch toh chakkar hai is tension me šŸ˜‰
rey drawing TR . . . . Arrgghh 😔
Dil tod diya mera . . . . Bhul hi gya na kriya ko 🄺
ye taani ka patta jaldi kaat na . . . . . Iski guest appearance bhi bahot pakau lagti hai 🤢
banner to ekdam jhakkas hai 🄳

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