ArHi SS*Dil Ibadaat#2* Last Part on pg 11 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the PM. Glad Arnav came and punched Nikhil.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fab updte maria <3

i was scared wen arnav was leaving for office..coz i knew dt ******* will be cmin...

Nd voila speak of da devil nd da devil appears... :@

how badly i wanted to slap him! *hmph*

buh Thank God Arnav came at da right time.. *phew*

nd u Nikhil.. U r soo gonna pay for ur deeds nw.. Ur times OVER! ha!

Thanks for da pm :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on new thread
awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update. Finally nikhil got a well deserved punch! Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nikhil deserves more than just one cuff from Arnav

Arnav should beat him black and blue
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Congratulations on the new thread, yay he hit him, hope he continues in the next update
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Congrats on the new thread!!!! 😃 Awesome update as usual...cant wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful comments🤗🤗means a lot to me, 🤗🤗🤗i am going to update last part of this SS..thank you so much for liking it that much it was my first longest SS i have ever written😛
if you all remember i had promised it would be a Romantic SS..
did i fulfil my promise?do tell me😳
1..i want to ask you something at the end of this SS what did you like most in this SS?
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗
Dil Ibadaat

"You will have to pay for your deeds" Arnav huffed in anger, his voice ringing out clear in the whole room, echoing off the walls. "Wrong timing Arnav'I wish you would've given me some time so I could show you what Nikhil Singh Raizada can do" blood from a wounds on the side of his neck and his cheeks spattered his shirt collar. He bared his teeth and tried to compose his shaking body he stood up, "No fair Arnav Singh Raizada'can't you give your step- brother some time to show what he can do"he said in the horrible mocking voice and Arnav grabbed his collar giving him another punch, "I had never thought you could stoop so low"Arnav shouted with the top of his voice pushing him hard and he collapsed with the wall loosing his balance. "I can do anything to show you down as I want to see you loose everything which is close to your heart" Nikhil let out a mockery laugh turning his gaze towards Khushi and Arnav shoved him in the chest, sending him flying, "don't'--don't even try to look at my wife, I'll kill you"Arnav face was contorted with great rage as he caught his collar giving him another punch and Nikhil collapsed with the floor, a fluid of blood came out from his wounds.

Arnav dropped his eyes at him and Nikhil gave a mockery smile trying to gather his wounded body,Arnav stepped towards him to catch his collar and a stabbing ice-cold pain streaked down his side and turned fiery hot in an instant, "Arnav!!!"Khushi rushed towards him but Arnav stopped her for coming closer to them, "No---Khushi 'stay there"

Nikhil's evil laugh filled the air and Arnav regarded him with a rage "No worries-I know Arnav Singh Raizada will never let me get easily what I want like always so I've been thought a plan"

Arnav took step pressing his hand on his wound and before he could dodge Nikhil, heslashed Arnav with his knife again, sideways, missing his throat by inches.

"Arnav!!!"a terrible scream escaped Khushi's lips and her body shook badly in fear, "No-"

Arnav gasped stopping her from coming nearer to them,Arnav whirled towards Nikhil,The knife in his hand gleaming sharp as a razor in the dull light of the room, "yes---you were wrong Nikhil 'you thought you would separate us'and I'll let you do that"Arnav gasped trying to hold his breath, "you were wrong because you thought you could separate us'you could snatch Khushi from me"

Arnav gasped stepping nearer him, "Arnav don't go nearer him'Arnav please---"Khushi screamed tears rolled down on her cheeks, "you stay there"Arnav stopped her again and Khushi cried nodding her head but she did what he said her to do.

Holding the knife in his hand, Nikhil began to back away, eyes darting. Arnav followed without care, without caution until Nikhil's back hit with the wall, "I've been knew everything about you Nikhil but I want your confession about your sins , I wanted to give you punish for hurting my wife for hurting us"Arnav stared at him in rage and Nikhil laughed out loudly.
"so do you think you can give me punish?"
he showed Arnav the knife smile meaningfully.

"yes you'll get punished but before you'll tell me why did you do that?" Arnav gasped, his face was contorted with rage, hate, "because-I HATE YOU Arnav Singh Raizada"Nikhil shouted with immense hatred on the top of his voice and Arnav felt himself stiff, bewildered for a moment, "because of you I could never get what I wanted-you snatch my mother'she always loved you more than me'you snatched my parents love from me'they gives you all their property as you're their obedient son and what I get? NOTHING---I am like a beggar in front of you'I couldn't do anything without your permission and when Khushi joined our office I realized she was the girl who made for me'but you snatched her too---you snatched my love'before I could tell her what I feel for her you'd been announced that you both were going to get married..Ah!!What I could do except to kill you,I tried to kill you not once but twice'But you were lucky as I couldn't get success in my plan--- but I couldn't let you win so easily so I forced Khushi to leave you or else I would've killed you and she did the same'she left you on the very first day of your wedding" he gave an evil grin and before he could sense Arnav's attack, Arnav caught his wrist and slashed him with his own knife Nikhil shrieked ,The knife dropped to the floor from his hand.Arnav was upon him. They stumbled in jerky, ungainly circles, grappling, until Nikhil lost his footing and thudded backward onto the hard floor.Red rage consumed Arnav, and a deep, scorching hate, He beat him with his fists until he realized Khushi shriek, "Arnav"

"Khushi"Arnav screamed rushing towards her and save her from falling down as she had been unconcious.

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"Khushi" a familiar soft, husky voice slowly penetrating into her ears and she fluttered her lashes and opened her eyes lifting them at him and her breath stuck in her throat and panic rushed in her veins to see the bandage wrapped around his shoulder and his arm, "Arnav"she let out a gasp of panic lifting her head, "I'm fine jaan"he gave an assurance smile made her lay down again with his one hand "but you were ---injured'what happened to your shoulder 'Arnav are you al---"

"Shh!!"

She panicked speaking in one breath and Arnav pressed his palm over her cheek caressing her skin to calm down her, "I'm absolutely fine, he couldn't harm me" he spoke softly caressing her face and she sat and hugged him tightly letting her fear to flow in the form of tears, "Khushi I'm fine'it's not good for your health, for our baby --please don't cry" he rubbed her back lovingly to calm her, "I was so scared Arnav ,I would die without you" he pulled back quickly and cradled her face , "don't say it again'you're my life Khushi'you're my reason to live" he leaned to kiss her forehead , "I'm sorry Arnav I hid truth, I didn't tell you about Nikhil I was so scared, I couldn't have let him to harm you, I'm sorry'please forg---"

"Shh"

Before she could complete her words Arnav kept his finger to stop her to say further, "Whatever happened it was written in our fate we couldn't change that'whatever Nikhil did he has been getting punished for that, he is in police custody I have been provided all the proofs against him now he wouldn't come back again in our life'Never"Arnav kissed her hands and then leaned to kiss her forehead, she smiled hiding her face in his chest "I love you Arnav"she whispered in her same love-filled voice and he smiled kissing her forehead, "I love you too Khushi and I'll with you always we will be together always'you --me and our baby"

She pulled back and a smile of contentment spread over their faces, she leaned and pressed her lips over his'it was long passionate kiss full of love'trust and it was not just a kiss but a promise of eternity too that they will be together always'

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here is Last update--i hope you'll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Beautiful update can't believe its just ended will miss it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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stupid net connection went off while i was writing comment on this
anyway back to your story
hmm the fav bit was the whole story but if i had to pick there were two instances
like the time when they both were back together
even though arnie didnt know the reason why she left him he realised that she still loves him no matter what
and the second one was when he found out the truth of his brother being the one who separated them
it was just touching the whole story
and i loved it how arnie realised that his khushi had always loved him no matter what and that all this separation was because someone was blackmailing her of his well being
hmm so all ended well then
and now he can live peacefully with his wife and their baby haan
what a perfect ending to the story
cheers for the pm

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