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Posted: 12 years ago
The conversation between the two was written beautifully ! I loved it to the core , not very cheesy yet romantic, is what only you can do! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...it was very sweet...Swayam teasing Sharon and Sharon blushing...awwiieee 😳 beautifully penned down update...Dadi seems to be good but at the end the cliffhanger... :( Ahh anyway update soon dear... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally a update ...it was awesome but chotu for me 😒i wanted to read more ..
comimg to the update it was so sweet ans cute ,i liked swaron's video chat and their convo ❤️
waiting for dadi's reaction ... wasit necessary to end like this ?
amazing update and plz do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update :-) loved how Sharon was a bit worried talking to Swayam's Dadi, seriously a cliffhanger please update soon :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved d update..
d vedio chat part was cute..
😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
I want an update! 😡

Mihiks, you are such a lazy women! Plesh update no? 😳


-Marium
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Posted: 12 years ago
not fair... u left us hanging in the mid-air, now update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
I didn't know you had updated this SS🤔 Anyway, it was very nice. The first part was really funny..😆 Sharon seems to be more serious about this relationship than Swayam though😛 I liked the conversation but I didn't like Swayam's possessiveness. It came across as too much. I mean she could have got a message from Simmi, Rinni anyone ..not just a guy. So what if it is 9:30? 😕 Apart from that I really liked everything else. I hope his dadi does like her. His dadi seems sweet so maybe she will. Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

I haven't proof read it..Please tolerate the errors/

Chapter 17

Swayam's dadi nodded her head affirmatively.

"Thanks a lot dadi!" Swayam was overjoyed.

"She's a bit modern, but yeah, every girl has an inbuilt daughter in law inside her. So I accept her."

Swayam was a bit embarrassed. These kinds of talks always made him smile idiotically.

"Thanks dadi. This coming from you is really nice…" He got up to go as he had finished his dinner. He picked up his plate but dadi stopped him.

"I'll keep it Swayam. You go."

"No dadi. I'll keep it."

"Okay if you want to…" His dadi agreed.

Swayam carried his and his grandmother's plates to the kitchen and then he went to his bed. He was about to sleep when a beep alerted him. It was Sharon's message.

"Does she like me?" she asked.

Swayam didn't give her the exact answer but he only replied "good night love. ;)" He knew that she would understand it.

Sharon definitely understood what he meant and she mentally thanked god for the same. She switched off her phone and then happily went to bed.

Next day, co incidentally Swayam and Sharon entered the college at the same time. Sharon looked at him. He was looking fresh and happy.

"Good morning." She greeted him.

"My morning has definitely begun on a good note. Now the whole day ought to be good." He smiled and winked at her.

She blushed and looked down.

"Love the way your cheeks turn pink Sharon!" He teased her.

"Shut up." She playfully hit him. "Let's go. We are getting late."

They didn't realize that all this while someone was watching them. It was Rey. He still looked glum and morose.

"Rey" Swayam called out to him when he realized that all this while he was lurking there. Rey didn't listen to him. Instead he didn't pay attention and walked the other way.

"Swayam , give him some time… Trust me, he'll be fine."

Swayam didn't listen and just kept walking, dejectedly. Rey was his best friend and he could not afford to lose his friendship at any cost.


It was 5 in the evening and everyone except Rey was there in the rehearsal hall. Kriya was feeling better and hence she decided to attend college. She hadn't seen Rey either.

"Hey guys..." Rey entered the rehearsal hall and he didn't show a trace of awkwardness on seeing Swayam and Sharon together.

Swayam and Sharon were sitting next to each other and both of them didn't budge even a bit on seeing Rey enter the rehearsal hall, even though Swayam felt like doing the same, and he whispered the same to Sharon too.

"No" Sharon said. "I said he'll be fine. And don't you dare to contradict me Mr. Shekhawat."

Although they were not stuck to each other, they were sitting quite close. Rey should have felt uncomfortable on seeing that, but he was a thorough professional. He knew how to keep his professional and personal life separate.

"Okay guys…" Kriya began. "There's a formal event coming up next week. So for that, we have to prepare a performance. Our dance team has to, what do you guys suggest, Rey and Swayam?"

"I think we should go for freestyle only... What say? It would be better. Most of us have freestyle as their forte…" Rey said.

"Yeah Rey is right… We should go for something which most of us excel at… That way we won't be able to make a mess…"

"Okay… so freestyle it is… And what about the decorations?" Kriya enquired.

"Leave them to me." Sharon spoke, in a rough tone than usual, got up and then walked out of the rehearsal hall.

"What's wrong with Sharon?" Kriya asked.

Rey wondered the same. Swayam thought about if for some time and then he knew exactly what was wrong with her.

"I'll be back guys." Swayam said and got up. Needless to say, he went behind her.

Sharon walked through the corridor periodically wiping her tears. She wanted to sit alone for some time. She straight away went to the fire escape.

It was true that she didn't dance professionally. But that was only for a reason. She used to dance once in a blue moon. Dancing for her meant, refreshing her memories, which she didn't want to. Even that day she had danced to remove her stress. But thank god for Swayam was there with her, otherwise she would have started crying.

There was an extremely vague, yet a strong memory about dance in her mind. Which was associated with her parents. Her parents loved her a lot. But she loved dance, which they didn't support. The main reason was because of studies. She loved dance but they wanted her to study more, which she didn't. She wasn't an all rounder, just an average student and both her parents were all rounders. They wanted her to become an all rounder too, but she just wasn't interested in studies.

And then came a time, when she came to know that her mom had cancer. Her mom was in her final stage and Sharon was nearly close to breaking down entirely. Sharon tried spending as much time as she could, with her mom. She stayed away from dance, because she knew her parents didn't like dancing, especially her mom. And from then, she became serious, extremely serious and focused only on studies and disposed dance entirely. At least, she tried to.

But who can change, what is destined to happen?

She sat on the steps of fire escape, thinking about the past and occasionally sobbing. She was so engrossed in herself that she didn't realize the door opening and someone entering.

It was Swayam. Swayam folded his hands and stood there, giving her some time to regain her composure. He knew that she was upset about something related to dance, but he didn't know exactly what was up with her.

She sniffled, and Swayam then realized that she was crying. He didn't say anything but just walked down the steps and sat beside her.

He felt sorry for her. But he could neither talk to her, nor say anything to her because he didn't know the reason. He only knew that it had something to do with dance. He didn't say anything, but just pulled her into a warm hug.

Sharon realized that he was sitting near her, but she wanted to stay alone. She didn't want anyone to sympathize with her, not even her boyfriend. As soon as he hugged her, she responded and enveloped her hands around his.

Swayam rubbed soothing circles on her back. She was still sobbing and as expected, she wet his jacket.

Sharon then realized what she was doing. She didn't want to share her feelings about this matter with anyone. She didn't want to break apart, but forcefully enough, she broke the hug and rubbed her eyes. This time, she was going to control her tears.

"Sharon…."

"No Swayam… Before you say anything, I'd like you to know that I don't like anybody asking me about this matter. And especially you. Please don't ask me why I came from there. I won't be able to reply properly." She said as a teardrop made its way out of her eye, even though she tried to control it.

"I won't. But I am only here to say…"

"Say what? Swayam, please go from here… I need time, I need time to regain my composure. Please go. I am requesting you."

"Sharon… even I am here to request you something."

She faced him. "Request what?"

Swayam took a deep breath and then said. "That you ought to perform with us in the formal event."

Sharon got up. "No way… Are you crazy? I won't do such a thing."

"But why?"

"I don't think you should know about it."

"Don't you trust me Sharon?"

Sharon turned to face him. "I do. But I haven't shared this with anyone else. And I don't want to share it with anyone. Please try and understand Swayam."

Swayam thought for a moment and then got up. "Fine." He nodded. "It's up to you if you want to tell it to me or not. I just wanted to request you to perform at the event. But if you value your ego more than the college's reputation, I can't help it."

Sharon looked at him. Her brow corrugated. "What? Ego? Where did that come from?"

"Your ego is here. You don't want to perform, god knows why. You are thinking about yourself Sharon. Don't you get that you are a great dancer? And what would happen if you dance? Nothing! You are flawless when it comes to dancing Sharon but who is there to tell you that? And even if anyone does tell you that, you won't listen. Because at the end of the day, you feel you are right. I know you have a long history associated with your dance matter Sharon but you have to move on. Till how much time are you planning to sit and mourn over it? Why don't you move on in life Sharon???"

Sharon was quiet for all this time. She couldn't believe he had said it. How could he? Without even knowing the reason, he had blabbered everything he shouldn't have.

"It's ego. You are right." She spoke, sarcasm and anger evident in her voice and left without even giving him a second look.

Swayam realized all that he had said. He didn't know about her past. Maybe there was something huge that was keeping her away from dance. He shouldn't have said so much. He could have explained everything in a calm and composed way too. Maybe he was too harsh on her…He had to talk to her again.

So? How was it? I hope you liked it.

P.S I am planning to finish this SS by the end of next week, because I am going out of town after that. So you can expect regular updates. 😃

Please leave your long comments and do hit the like tab!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Yipee!!!
I commented early this time!!
Beautiful update!!
Sharon had such a bad past nd you penned it so well!!
I had tears when read this update, full of emotion!!
Keep up the gr8 work!!
Do update soon nd thanks for the PM.

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