SwaRon SS: Come and Heal Me (LAST part - page 22)

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

IT WAS AMAZING UPDATE..IAM EXCITED FOR NEXT UPDATE .NOW THE STORY IS VERY INTERESTING .PLEASE UPDATE SOON

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Rashmi

@mrash

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

There you are with one more awesome update 👏

You are just too good at it girl 👍🏼

bechare SwARON... MUs aur judai unka pichchha hi nahi chhodate... 😭

Originally posted by: act12

@ mrash: I think your the first person who I highlighted Sharon's promise So you deserve a BIG HUG for that lol. Thank you for liking this part! Haha I took your advice and I concentrated just on writing that's why I am replying so late. But thank you very much for reading and commenting on it!

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Thanks for the reply dear. But always keep my advice in mind 😉 We prefer UPDATE than REPLY.

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Read both the chapters in one go, sorry couldn't comment on the second part, I was busy with studies🤔

Part 2

Well for a moment even I thought it was Sharon's engagement, but thank goodness I read the third part as well. To imagine Sharon getting engaged to someone else other than Swayam-That hurts. But the degree of pain is less than Swayam of course, beautifully written. The pain could get into me, I really loved the way you described how bad Swayam felt not because she was happy with someone else by her side, but due to the fact that he couldn't make her happy or blush when he was by her side. In the end again loved it the way you wrote when he felt he was the reason for her unhappiness. Painstakingly beautiful part👍🏼

Part 3

You write so beautifully Jiya, really, had an emotional ride while reading the update.To see Sharon blushing and all happy with Karan was confusing, I really thought she had got over Swayam. But it looks like there is something more than what I'm thinking with respect to what made Sharon cut all the strings from Swayam as well as from her past. For a moment I thought maybe this is it, and Swayam and Sharon can never be together. Trust me the thought itself sank my heart but it was momentary cause after reading your note in the end I'm relieved that they will end up being together!! Hopefully !!Because as per me they are really meant to be together. Looking forward to read the next part, since its going to be on Sharon's POV.

PS: Well I really think you are an awesome writer. Your writing is alluring which has a nice grip on the readers. And by that I ain't flattering you😎

Would LOVE to read more of your works on SwaRon in the near future😳

Thanks for both the PM"s

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Speelbound!!!!*sigh* swayam and sharon parting ways😭 Yaar after reading your updates na I am feeling so heartbroken🥺 How can fate be so cruel to them💔 I am glad spark, even after so many years remained in them. The narration where swayam closed his eyes upon hearing sharon callin his name brought tears to my eyes😭 How can they love eachother and then parting ways is the most horrid thing can happen to them.🤢 I Know sharon will be having valid reason for deserting swayam but when will he come to know that 🥺Awww I am totally depressed.

Well jiya, let me tell you, it is one of the perfect update ever👍🏼. YOu are an excellent wirter😳😳 The scenes made be tearful, and pulled many strings in my heart. The way you make a reader visualize the whole scenario is something only a great writer can do. It makes my heart bleed to see swaron at loggerhead but yaar you have made us readers to sit back sigh with apprehension that what is going to happen next. will they meet again and so many other questions too arises in our mind. It means you have left us with a cliff hanger😉, well thanks again for a wonderful update, you made me cry along with swaron, made me think what was the real reason for sharon to leave him and you gave me hope for swaron when sharon ran behind them. Well waiting for your long long updates jaldi karna plzzz

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Awesome update as i would term it as! i loved it to the core.this is for the first time i am commenting here. so wanna tell you how much i love this work of yours. this is not the first piece of yours which i am going through i have read your OS Confession too.i have always admired it. this one is just the same as much alluring as that.i love how you pen down emotions and their precise effect.your writing style is deceptive much. the marvelous moments which you wrote down are commendable.looking forward to the next update.

P.S:Do PM me for the update next time.

P.P.S:i wanna ask this question to not only you but all those writers who drag the character to be precise Sharon here to the place where the two(Swayam and Rey) are conversing at the wrong time? why not when they were conversing about how much Swayam missed her and how he felt. WHY?

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Trouble_Magnet

@Trouble_Magnet

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Hey Jiya..:)

Nice update..:)

I am glad that it wasn't Sharon's engagement
but I still wonder why she had been so comfortable with Karan🤓

it was so heartbreaking to see Swayam so helpless :(
It was like an emotional roller coaster ride

beautifully penned..😊
looking forward to see what is in store next

Do continue soon..
Thank you for the PM :)

Edited by troublemagnet - 12 years ago

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

I have fallen in love with your ss!!😃

All the updates were absolutely fantastic!!

Can u pls pm me whenever you update??

Thanks,

Vedika

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Amazing update jiya !!

fantastically written chapter .

seeing sharon happy with karan was a little confusing and painful even for us along with swayam.

i couldn't imagine the reason as to why will she forget her past , swayam and the bond they shared.

the part were swayam and sharon take each others name was beautifully hurtful. the emotions were very well described .

swayam leaving the party hall with saying anything was expected but sharon to run after him and listen to conversation between rey and swayam was quite unexpected.

Its actually not sharon and karan engagement is a huge superise and that too a pleasant one :)

i really wanna read sharons POV on this.

eagerly waiting for the next part , update soon..

thanks for the PM.

Jiya u are a fab writer , keep up the good work !