SwaRon SS: Come and Heal Me (LAST part - page 22) - Page 16

unres...
part 5(b)
Im nt.getting words to commemt...*speechless*
what to say...it was jst perfect...
at starting i was lyk... 😭 ...sharon...died...oh no... 😭 😭
bt as i read futher i ws reliefd...thnk god ..
swaybt stl it was an emtional one...his mum died...nd also the flshbck ws emtnl...
bt agn the ending ws perfct...
nd wht to say abt ur writing skills..jst marvellous...!!
would luv to read more by u...will b waiting fr ur nxt wrk...:)

Of cors I agree that this was not a lighthearted SS & i luvd it more coz i luvd the emotional intensity which pervaded the storyline...indeed it was a relief that both came together and had a future to look forward to...i thoroughly enjoyed the witing style u employed here esp the last part...pls do continue writing more 😊

One of the most emotional write ups on india forums

EDITED MY COMMENT

Oh my I have so much to write on this ss...right now I am just speechless...so lend me some time...I vl surely unres it soon..:D

{Reserved} Would read both the parts and come back soon! :D

How do manage to write so flawlessly.?

The last two updates were like an emotional roller coaster ride for me

Beautiful and heart-touching SS..

Do write more..:)

Thank you for the PM..

I know I m late but I need some time to comment on this marvellous work of yours...:)
There r many ff n ss in this forum but some stories remain fresh in our mind forever.This story will also remain one of my fav.
Coming to last update
Well I already guess the reason why sharon left her dil dosti n dance but the way you presented it was commendable.When I start reading it I mentally prepared myself for a sad ending.I don't like sad ending but still I thought to give it a try as I m really become a big fan of ur writting.But my sad smile converted into grin when I ended reading the chapter.Sharon's emotions was beautifully described.We always get reyam bonding in this ss but this part justified sharey friend which i liked the most.Rey as a friend play a perfect role in this ss for both swayam n sharon.I really loved the line where both swayam n sharon asked does it ever stop hurting.U played with the lines very well I must say..:p.Swayam's reaction after knowing about truth was really painfull.It hurt him to see her love fighting with life but its good that now he will be there with her.Their phone convo was really nice swayam optimistic attitude give strength to sharon n now they r together always there for each other.N as we all know everything good thing came to an end.This ss also end here.But I want to say one last thing to you that your style of writting is really different n beautifully.Keep writting such stuff n i hope u come with a new swaron ss soon.
Sadiya

Sooo sorry for the late comment...exams coming up😭