ARSHI DARK SS: ~ESCORT~ Chap 01 Pg 01 19/10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oops m so sorry.. Unresing my post after so long.. Really really sorry..
Wow! New SS ! New concept.. Khusi as a dark character.. Nice innovation! Thanks Shona33 for suggesting it..
Its really great to see A Female Dark Character..i found it rare.. When a protagonist female character is dark.. I think its the first time among all the Arshi ff's till now...
Love u didbhai.. U're too good...
Arnav's pov was brilliant.
What I liked most is, DARKNESS cant snatch one's inner-INNOCENCE... it can merely add BOLDNESS and MUCH NEEDED CONFIDENCE.. Loved this... This thought took over my mind... Thanks for such a beautiful SS... I found it beautiful bcoz Arnie saw her innocence...?
Didibhai for how long is she in the escort business...
Khusi as an Escort was shock of my life.. And Arnie has surely done someting worse to her...
And you said the story is 'LITTLE' dark! How much dark r u thinking to give us???
Awesome concept.. So innovative..
Thanks for the PM..
Update soon and take care...
And durgotsaber onek onek priti o shubhechchha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new SS mate


one question only one question .



why DARK ?😕

Edited by naddiya26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmmm,i am started...

'vodka',woah,this s.s. is going to be something ha,the very first scene shows how straight this s.s. is gonna be!

but wait,the start was Arnav's,oops,i meant ASR's POV..interesting it is!

and there she comes!(i was lying on my bed while reading this,and my pillow which i had placed on my chest was moving up-down,my heart was going all dhak-dhak,no kidding..😆)

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okay,so Khushi an escort and- - - wait- - - what did i read- - - oops! she would have been doing this,its has job,why am i so shocked!

well,she turned 'THE ASR' down,i mean "THE ASR",Madhu-Di,you see,only i can't get him,argh,and this Khushi,turning him down when she is getting a ready made meal!so dumb,well,her choice ..😛

OMG,she must have been well experience as she can just smell and decide the satisfaction level a male can provide!☺️

Khushi is surely professional,but ASR is ASR,he know how to get what he wants!

what the- - *rubs eyes* did i read they have already been together!woah,now this is something..i already love your stories,and now what its dark,i toh will surely love it,and above all that,these past threads bonding them,mystery,i like it..😉

100 thousand!?!?!?!?!?! am sure he would tag her priceless!☺️

so deal sealed!great,so i guess its started..☺️

FIRE AND FLAME together now!
when i read that ASR dint have an issue in being seeing with her,or that he dint feel ashamed,i was like-wow!what guts!so confident,well,any doubts why i love to read this 'ASR' character?


and then a kiss,what a perfect start to the story,at the end of chapter one.!bravo!
too good Di..

okay,i just read that as its on request,so this is an s.s.,awaiting the next part..

sooner or later,whenever you update,i DEMAND a pm,okay,atleast, accept my REQUEST for a pm asap from the moment you update..😳

thanks for sharing a new concept,love you and your ideas..

thanks for sharing,thanks for the pm ..😊
Edited by trivedishraddha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes yes yes yes am to happy to have made it to page one. . .boo to others who res before me. .😡
another dark s.s.! am dead..🤢
but why s.s.,make it an ff if time and ideas permit. . .😊

(i love you and your dark fictions and dark ASR,you know that right? ☺️)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: naddiya26

congrats for new SS mate



one question only one question .

why DARK ?😕


coz one od my reade wanted me to write a dark Khushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh!my stars are favoring me,or your fans sleeping,two posts on your first page!
okay,anyways,let my finger work,as it is a dark s.s.,am going nuts,and will become one if i don't read and comment!😆
be right back!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg this was amazing
cnt wait to read more

appy tujhay chuttion main be chain nahi still updating huh???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh!my very lucky indeed!first to be on your 2nd page of first thread!
well,now i think am spamming,i definitely don't want to get out from
your good books...😆
but one question,

i won't ask-
Why a dark one?

but would ask-
Why s.s.?

is it because you just wanted to share your ideas through this fiction.,but at the same time write other fictions too?is it that's why why that this is a s.s.?

i guess yes..😊
well,am sure you will rock it here too,waiting to read more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: trivedishraddha

oh!my very lucky indeed!first to be on your 2nd page of first thread!
well,now i think am spamming,i definitely don't want to get out from
your good books...😆
but one question,

i won't ask-
Why a dark one?

but would ask-
Why s.s.?

is it because you just wanted to share your ideas through this fiction.,but at the same time write other fictions too?is it that's why why that this is a s.s.?

i guess yes..😊
well,am sure you will rock it here too,waiting to read more..


well i dont want to think much in this line actually. already got loads so its a very short story. and i should learn to write short ones coz i end up writing FFs otu of my SS. this one i will stick to SS and 3-6 chaps max
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Appy,

Great Concept.. I must say you are the Queen of Dark FF's

Madhu

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