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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hetalt29

Amazing update ! 😃

thanks hetal ! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: upasna_mishti

hehe ! haaan ! mast tha na ! 😳😭😊



inne saare emotions saath mein.????

gajab...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rubykriyansh

Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!

thanks ruby ! glad u liked yaar ! 😊


Originally posted by: K.R_ackraal

AWESome UPDAtes...loved both of dem...

K.R scenes NO words...
UPdate sOOn...

thanks ! (:
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anyaa_KriYaansh

beautifulll update dearr!!:)

KriYaansh toghether !!yayy:$
thannxxx for pm ...:)
update soon ..

thanka aanya ! (:
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Upasna.. As I said earlie.. Ur a brilliant writer.. N m really proud to b ur reader d reader of Prodigy!!
Damn.. U'v left me speechless!!


@ blushing ~! .. 😳

Wht an update.. I mean... Wow!

Kriya's mental state.. U portrayed it brilliantly.. D way she took ovr her mum's shawl to feel d warmth..
N Reyaansh on d othr side.. He knows kriya loves him too bt on nt findin her anywhr.. A guilt overcame him tht he might hav hurt her.. Kriya was all worried fr Reyaansh n Reyaansh.. All he needed tht time is to tok to kriya!!!



D way she ran to his arms pourin out her all pain n anger..
Haye!

Really . i felt bit awkward .. at the time when iw rote that part , i thought .. may be .. it would look out of the league .. as you now the story is bit bold and Rey can't go her home anytime . but then i just took those thought's off and wrote that part ..

"Kriya ... I'am sorry ..." He whispered , to which she cried even harder . He could not tolerate her cries anymore , and he cupped her face .He was shocked to see those red finger print's on his face .




He cried . She cried more . He kissed that cheek , once , twice , thrice ... He kissed her cheek until the pain was gone . "Kriya ... I .. Lo..ve.. you ..." he sobbed .


She kissed his Adam's apple and whispered .." Love you too .." And she cried . He cried even harder...

These few lines took my heart my breath away!!
N again I ended up crying 😭 😭 😭

D best confession eva!!

That mean to me a lot ! seriously !

Aghhh.. Dat kartikh.. Ba**** phr se aa gya!
Hosh he has dat guts in him to tk kriya away n fornicate on hr... Aghhh.. M gonna kill him... His name only boils my blood 😡 😡 😡

hehe mine's too !

Bt karthik.. Now Reyaansh is thr wid her as her shield!!

Thnkgod.. Tht old watchman came.. Bottle sir pr kyn maara.. He shud hv stabbd his stomach..

Old is gold ! 😎

M so waitin to c whts nxt !


Update soon plz..





Okay ! Finnaly quoting ur comment palakh di !😳

I'm blushing rite now 🤣 .. gawd huh ! u made me blush ! :P
Thankew so much .. really like for ur comment ! 😊


Will damn surely update damn soon ! before i go offline ! 😊 😉

Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
tu na sirf shaffy ko lambe replies deti hai...

gandi... 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24



inne saare emotions saath mein.????

gajab...

☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

tu na sirf shaffy ko lambe replies deti hai...

gandi... 😔

Matlab ab hum dono ko connect karne ke liye lambe lambe .. comment's ki zarurat hai ?? .. silence speak's more than your word's .. and your lover's tooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
par palak di ka inna chhota reply kyun diya???

when she gave a lon comment...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju

Amazing Update Upi..

It was superb..
Finally Rey is der to save Kriya from that idiot cruel creature Kartik..

thanks silk di ! 🤗

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