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Posted: 10 years ago
Can you please make that sequel happen?? make it an angsty-free one so that your sister can proof read it for you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful ending with so many stories being revealed. I liked that Dev is Aman and Anjali's son and that Shyam is being taken care of.
I really don't understand how Khushi forgave him so easily but kudos to her.
I do hope that you write it's sequel soon like the one you have mentioned in your note. In the meantime give us a OS on them at least.
It was truly an emotional reading. Thanks once again Zehra :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi zehra!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

I really dunno how to thank u fr postin this two stories of urs*I'm sayin this after thanking u in some of my prev posts...uff!..kkk...once again thanq!!!eee...lemme come out of this thanq! Thanq! thing!😡*

I was very eager to read this story!!after searching 150+ pages of each thread(lemme remind UNCONDITIONAL TOPIC WAS CLOSED) after reading some 2-3 chapters via quotes' and predictin story thru readers comments, ofcrs after too many stalking etc etc I'm finally here...😃

Commenting on UNCONDITIONAL AFTER COMPLETELY READING IT...

Thanq*ada raamaaa!!*

Its good that I have read ur other stories b4 reading this!...now I can understand b/w the lines..

Arnav had been a monster towards khushi..anyone cud hav said he was psycho if there isn't a reason behind...well that doesn't mean his behaviour is right towards his wife!...even tho he is married to her just a chain doesn't give him a right to bed her against her will!..against!!well considering that part she didn't even had a chance to talk to him! let alone say what she wished!

Cutting her hair, pretending to go to another women b4 her eyes after...!, Hysterectomy was heights!!!even tho a sane part of me said its just a fiction my IF part was constantly crying(literally!..ofcrs after reading both prequel & sequel)

Aman and anjali!...its good that aman was supportive to khushi and at the same tym was loyal to his boss..how nobel of him!he gave up his love...!*people do have rocks in head at tyms*atlast he had some courage to corner anjali!...*sneaky!sneaky...being wid arnav singh raizada thot him one thing! to utilize whta's offered at the door*

OMG!..his guilt consumed him after getting to know the truth!...😭

*a persons biggest enemy is his/her guilt*😕

his tears, agony , nani's wrds abt his existence...he wud have died thousand tyms!..starting from being a caretaker to being lyk a stranger sitting in the park..ur simple wrds have conveyed a lot of emotions that really made me cry!!!!!😭

Using those metaphors to describe khushi's state of mind!!!!!zehra what can I say abt u and ur writing skills..if u ever stop visiting IF count on me as a person who will miss u*I wish u leaving doesn't happen! why am'I even including this*wanna say*!!!

U have used the words exist in English dictionary beautifully!!!!!!!perfect comparison!!!

Good work!👏

These quels' are good in their own way..😊

I cud give u a standing ovation to u!👏...no wonder people opt this as a sadest story ever!!!!

Its worth waiting..what do you guyz say it in hindi??...yeah!..'sabar ka phal meeta hota' ryt?...well I enjoyed reading with tears!!

What I can't digest is he was forgiven just lyk that*in the show too*...but we will never want our loved ones to be punished isn't it..if that's what we want then we just love ourself not that person!

U said*not here ofcrs* all mistakes doesn't need to be cancelled by punishments..isn't it???

Well that suits here*arnav* and there*khushi* too!...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Mindblowing one
Thanks for your pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

I do have a sequel in mind for this story. I have even named it in my head. But I haven't typed it for two reasons:-
1. My sister hated Destroyed and Unconitional and she refuses to proofread the sequel if I write it!
2. Currently, I am not in the state of mind to write a heavy duty story. So...


Thank you all for reading this story 😳


Also, I have left a lot to the reader's imagination 😃


Sorry if I have disappointed you 😭


Thank you so much for being with me since Destroyed.


8 Threads


24 Chapters


Around 8000 comments


Over 10000 likes


Many stalkers


Thank you😃



Lazy jee⭐️... I loved 'Unconditional'. It was a relief to read it after 'Destroyed'.
You are right, you left a lot to, us readers imagination.. but definitely more detailed than destroyed. So, probably the sequel will be more details as that the pattern you have taken to. Which brings me to the next...
If you have a sequence please start with it ASAP. Don't mind Rasgulla. I will plead to her on your behalf. She will definitely agree to proofread.

So, please so start with the next. I just can't seem to have enough of you and of your plotting. 😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello Zehra. Hats off to u for the amazing no correct that exceptionally good sequel. Read both n u took me to heights of emotions in both stories.
Thanks so much for all the efforts you have made to make arshi special even after so many months.

Take care. God bless.

Sri
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Posted: 10 years ago
hii know i sound like a broken record u realy one of my fav arshi writers the best part of this story is nani n anjali arnav n khushi r the best but i really loved nani n anj u have made me cry jahapana tusi great ho loved this work of your n will keep rereading it thk u n have a great 2015👏ps u need not reply just wanted to thk u n make me love is another of my fav
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great sequence dear! Just saw that you already reposted this while I was on holidays! Thanks a lot... I know most of the readers hate both stories but I really love them! Unique stories unique ways of writing! Mind blowing and very rare. Please don't stop giving us Arshi stories we love you for that. Have a great New Year! Big hug from Switzerland from Chanya.
Edited by Chanyaforever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for reposting this...im one of the stalker to ur stories😆
i jst completed reading this one , i think 6 th time hahahha...

and i love all ur stories bt i dint read some stories..plz repost them soon

thank u

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Posted: 10 years ago
i can read it again n again n again!...each time i love it more n more n more(if thats even possible!)

i m inactive in IF but i was waiting for u to repost this one. in my current situation, rereading destroyed n unconditional was the best gift on this new year😃

i alys wanted more of this ss...i wanted to know what khushi's unconditional love did to arnav, how arnav rised frm his destruction...i want to read what happens after their happily ever after. even if if write a os based on this ss, i ll read it many times...so u can only imagine how much i ll love to read a sequal😃...take time, all the waiting ll b worth but i do hope u write one:))

Happy New year...wish u in this nes year to remain happy n jayful❤️

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