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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#381

My comment from chapter 13 to the final chapter 16.

Thanks God... Both baby and Khushi are saved. It must be so hard for Arnav to choose between his wife and baby.

Khushi did the hardest thing by forgiving him, forgeting what he had done to her, giving him a second chance and offering him a new life with their baby. Not many people are capable and strong to do the same. She accepted Arnav completely with his flaws, wrongdoings, sins... If I were her, I couldn't forgive and love the man who made so many unforgivable mistakes. That's why, for me it was so difficult to understand Khushi but she is different. When Khushi Kumari Gupta forgave, she forgave completely and when she loved, she loved unconditionally...

Shyam got what he deserved for betraying Anjali. On the other hand, finally Anjali found a honest partner. Aman has already proven how nice human being he was, in Khushi's situation. I'm sure he will be a loyal husband for Anjali and a great father for Dev. It was a shocking fact for me to know that Aman is Dev's biological father. Even if he hadn't been his biological father, even if Dev had been Shyam's child, I have no doubt that Aman would have loved Dev like his own son.

The way you narrated the story helped me to change my opinion about Arnav. After reading Destroyed, I lost all my hopes about a happy future for Khushi. But Zehra, you managed to bring light and happiness into Khushi's life by showing her Arnav's caring and loving side by blessing her with Raizada Parivar's love, by giving her a chance to become mother.

I've waited for a long time to read the story and finally was able to do it. Thanks again Zehra for re-posting it.

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Angeline124

@Angeline124

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#382

Wowww thanks for the repost of dis.I hav been waiting for thisso long. Thank you. it's an amazing one. Finally our arshi together.

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Maham Iqbal

@candyjan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#383

awesome story dear

i seriously love this story soo much

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#384

uff!!! i can never have enough of reading this story. This the best redemption story i ever read.

thanks for reposting it again zehra api.

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#385

With all due respect to the author and the great fan of destroy and unconditional, I dnt know how one can accept a husband who r@pe his wife every single day ( as mention), leaving out all the manipulation Arnav did... But I just got one thought, " r@pe is something unforgivable"... Idk but it's really disturbing and send chill to my bones. And not that I dnT agreed with khushi, that everyone deserve a second chance but a man to fall so low and humanity left him, is unforgivable.

Sorry but that's my honest pov...

But writing wise and where emotions are unfold was amazing, it just bring tears to your eyes and if one read this story without tears then u should really make acheck up...😆 But jokes apart it was an amazing piece of work, it's just that I dnT agreed with the way a woman was treated...

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ShiningHearts

@ShiningHearts

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#386

thanks fr reposting it.:)

Fabulous Story!!!

Loved it so much.<3

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#387

Beautifully written 👏
Loved it

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#388

Destroyed : a very powerful word which brings out the extreme emotions just hearing/reading/thinking about it...and a word that should be used in rarity...history is replete with events that cascaded ultimately to this one word and anyone and everyone is quite helpless in front of it.

Unconditional: another very powerful word which again brings out the extreme feelings alongwith mixed ones of disbelief and all those reactions between the extremities of positivity and negativity...

These two words can be used in both positive and negative situations but when used there nothing left to say or do or feel after it...

To weave a story around these two words and to come out of it unscathed is no less than a Herculean task and I must say that you have done it with aplomb ... I went through all those emotions that you expected and also those that you would not have expected when I read both the stories in a go and I must say that I'm thankful that I read them in a go otherwise to stay with the aftereffects of each of the update is definitely not my cup of tea... I do salute to all those ardent followers of this story who came back to read each and every update as and when it was posted and to sustain the onslaughts of all those emotions...

Thanx Zehra for the stories 😳

ps @note I do request Saiyyu(Rasgulla_sp) to let go of the rebellious feel towards the two stories and help with the proof-read as I would definitely love to read the sequel 😉

Edited by amus5 - 10 years ago

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#389

Amazing plot.

Sorry double posting. Full Comment posted below.

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#390

I am just speechless. I have read many fan-factions on Arnav and Khushi and many times I disliked Arnav but for the first time when I read Destroyed, I just hated Arnav ( being an hard core fan of Arnav singh raizada and Barun I never thought someday I may feel hate for this character 😳).

I was thinking no matter what he will do in 'Unconditional', he can never redeem himself and strongly felt that Khushi should not forgive him. But after reading this I am happy that Khushi has given him a second chance.

Thanks for such writing such a wonderful story. 👏 Love you dear for re-posting it so that I can read it. 😃