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Posted: 12 years ago
I am over whelmed..speechless but have this aching desire to let you know how I feel after reading this story..I found it a few hours back n read all of it in one go..Khushi my lovely khushi..I cried..again n again..the psychologist was right Arnav needed help..the tragedy is that he could only get it by helping khushi..n he could only help her after he destroyed her..the darkness she felt was like a living, breathing entity..no..I want arnav to suffer more..the scars dont go..the stiches may bring together the pieces but the tear remains..its not this easy..by easy i dont mean what he did was easy..it must've required phenomenal patience, hope, will power, mainly to stop himself from killing himself n love..so much love...but self realisation doesnt make it alright..nothing does..khushi is practical n forgiving..bcoz of her conditioning n inherent goodness as a human being...the tears she knew he shed must've told her of his state of mind...as you said she remembered each n every word he shared with her after she was brought back from the hospital...his efforts..his love..ok fine you convinced me he deserves forgiveness but only after a lifetime of making it up to her😊

now that the ranting is done n i am feeling decidedly lighter in the heart...you. are. a. fabulous. writer. God Bless.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow zehra what can I say, this was one hell of a story 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
⭐️ ...it was such a heart wrenching story ...😭

since Arnav reformed,cancelled d HIT on him!😊
nice flow & pace of d story..love ur work
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such a beautifully written story...love your writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it read it in one go
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was a real nice one. Thank god khushi did give arnav a second chance! i wanted t story to cont a little more to know how things are bet them...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb story..Read both destroyed and its sequal in one go...An apt ending to the story..Very well written...
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Posted: 12 years ago
tumne index gaayab kar diya toh kya,as if I can let go reading them again...Read Destroyed and Unconditional again...they are awesome dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all the parts. I loved it. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
mind blowing story .. Jst finished reading .. Luved it..

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