Arshi FF: My Enemy's Baby (thread 2 on pg 159) 10/29/2014) - Page 57

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Posted: 12 years ago
wah wah

nice teaser.Good job done..awaiting next update

On a funny note i was thinking if Khushi wud say him

I dont want my son to be a rapists son. What drama is this.Is it a daily soap on star plus???.First u kill me mentally in all posiible ways by your abuse.then u kidnap me,torture me for days and today u come and make food for me..as if master chef show is going on.

How can u be a father to a baby developing in the womb of a bitch ,a prsotitute according to u??. Starnge onn the kidnap day u told me that u want my death. So is poison mixed in food prepared by u to kill me.??Come on u can tell me directly..if that makes u happy? Ok...next time bring food but i will mix poison in it,, So please stop your affection drama..You look better harrasing and torturing me..That will give u good TRP's i mean ur satisfaction. So stop pretending.
Its so simple iam sufeering and my life is uncertain ahead.Your mission is achieved.So what now? Ok ur motive is to see me suffer na,,Ok i will suffer staying in amala aunty's home too. I wil cry whole day, lead a miserable life..U can come and chek there..too.Its the same thing staying here and there.Its just that there my son will feel better.

So ur motive is solved .I will record my crying moments aslong m alive and send u so that u can rejoice.Happy now.. so let me go to amla aunty's home



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Posted: 12 years ago

EXCELLENT, BUT YOU FORGET TO MENTION THAT AMONG ALL THE CRIMES AND TORTURE COMMITTED BY ARNAV THE WORST WAS RAPE YES RAPE. THIS IS CARDINAL SIN IN THE EYES OF GOD AND MAN. AND I THINK AS AN AUTHORE IT IS OUR MORAL RESPONSIBILITY THAT WE SHOULD HIGHLITE THE CRIMES AND THE TORTURE THAT IS COMMITEED AGAINST WOMEN.

SO WHEN KHUSHI IS REMINDING ARNAV ALL THE TORTURES THAT HE HAS DONE KHUSHI SHOULD ALSO SAY THAT SHE WOULD NOT LIKE HER SON TO BE RAPIST.

IT A HUMBLE REQUEST TO YOU TO JOIN INDIA MOVEMENT AGAINST THE CRIME WHICH IS COMMITTED AGAINST WOMEN. NOT BY SWORD BUT BY PEN.

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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent teaser...looking forward to the next chapter ...

wish she would tell him on his face what a crime he has done by raping her constantly...

he might have his own reasons but no reason is good enough that can justify rape...it is the most henious crime
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow
unbelievable fabulous teaser
can t wait for the update ..
plz pm me the nxt chap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome teaser loved it
Can't wait pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW!!!!
what a teaser!!!!!!!!!
w8ng for update!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg love the teasr
waiting 4 this update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav will regret badly for his sins.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome teaser...
waiting for ur update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey
he love his di
i hope some how they find out that shyame was in fault
and that she does not forgive arnav fast
but i believe in ur writing
so make my day
love u😉

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