Arhi: Desert Rose #3 Chapter 23 updated page 120

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Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#891

No! I hope Arnav gets Khushi back and grovels to her!

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#892

YOU UPDATED!! Thank God! I was dying to know what would happen next! And it didn't disappoint! Yes things happened very soon but I'm glad this Shyam chapter is over...or is it? LOL! :D It was a great chapter! I just hope that this Khushi disappearing thing is a misunderstanding and that she hasn't actually left!! :P Loved it! Can you update the next one soon?? Please? :)

P.S Please continue writing ArHi FFs..because I will be living my life through these FFs..so please! :)

Edited by Nehasupnfan - 12 years ago

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lovelyangel

@lovelyangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#893

I was busy taking exams for quite some time now. Hence, I was unable to comment on wonderful and fabulous updates of DR.

The way you write love making scenes...omg so so sensous. Noops, I never imagine them😆.

Khushi's confrontation with Shyam, Shyam's narration of all his crimes with pride and no remorse, Arnav eavesdropping the whole conversation, Khushi's try to run away from Shyam's danger to save her life and to expose Shyam's reality; Shyam catching her up and Arnav finally making a grand and heroic entry and beating the life out of Shyam. Finally police arriving and taking Shyam to the place he deserves the most.There was so much happening in this update. It was so filmy and full of action. You wrote Khushi's emotions and thoughts brilliantly.

So, Anjali has finally realized her mistake. Both siblings are free from the demon named Shyam. Filth of Shyam is out of their lives, rotting behind the bars. All this is so much satisfying to read.

Ooops Khushi you have left Arnav...positive point is that now is Arnav's turn to woo you. Now he will search for you and try to win you back. He would realize the importance of verbal declaration of his overwhelming passion of love. So, this is good turn of events.

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Aparna Mohan

@zoyadarkrose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#894

Finally. .all the truth is out & shyam got caught.I can't believe Anjali knew about shyam & still didnt react!!
I loved how you weaved the story,all the pieces falling into place at the end.Now only Arnav -Khushi confrontation is left,can't wait 😊

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Barun_Riti_LMH

@Barun_Riti_LMH

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Posted: 12 years ago

#895

Fabulous update...
Khusi really left...!!!
I hope arnav wil findout her...
Update next soon...

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#896

omg what an update ...mindblowing stuff ...glad to see shaym being delt with ...wonder if arnav can find kushi in time...continue soon...

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#897

Wow that was amazing.. Just perfect mixture of everything.. I was fearing that this was the last update of a beautiful story..

May be khushi is still there and this letter is the one she wrote yesterday..

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#898

Nice update...oh no khushi left...feeling bad for arnav...hope he finds her soon

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#899

Oh I knew he will come too! I trust arnav ...but why did Khushi go away does she not realise that he loves her...go arnav find your happiness...you both deserve it...

Loved this part , loved her confidence in him...now it s the wait for the next update that I dislike!