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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
congrats for new thread🤗
Loved the update...
akash i hate u for the interruption😡
finally kushi voiced her doubts about riya ...
what was the last line about??😕
cant wait for next update!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
That was a beautiful chapter! I loved the comfortable camaraderie between Khushi and Dr. Manav. Glad that he saved Khushi from that creep in the last moment.

By now Shyam must have realized that Khushi is by no means interested in any kind of a relationship with him, other than what propriety allows. What he pulled off with Lavanya, will not be possible with Khushi. And yet, he would not stop trying. One persistent perv he is. I hope he got the message loud and clear when Khushi sat in the garden with Dr. Manav, while she had avoided being with Shyam the entire time.

Then what does the creep do? He tries to play the same trick on Arnav...and it works.

But the best thing (according to me) in today's update was Arnav's confession. That made my day. And what followed was mind-blowing!😉 But Akash had to interrupt!!!😡

But overall, it was a fun read. I read your replies to some of the posts and it seems that Arnav's anger does not mean too much trouble at this point...so looking forward to the next update.

Please Please Please don't let the creep create any more misunderstandings between our sweethearts!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Please don't take a week between updates. We love this story.

I have no idea why I connect with this story. But I do. That is to your credit as a writer. each of your characters has alive of their own and no matter how much I hate shyam, I know i have to wait for the story to play out.

Congratulations on writing such a wonderful story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
oh gosh!! you left at a climax!! and so did the serial... how am I gonna sleep now 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Dam you Akash, I mean DAM YOU MAN! 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
Hahahahahaahahahahaha I LOVED THIS UPDATE. ☺️ They both want eachother so badly, but I smell the seeds of misunderstanding being sown! 😭 First with Dr. Manav, then that snake Shyam and now with the designer thing 😲 I am curious to know though why that would make him angry, unless he thinks all this is a ploy for her to get ahead 😲
I am happy though that he cleared up the Ria thing, Khushi doubting him was breaking my heart and I love that Khushi has a brain not only suspecting Shyam but also confiding in someone about it👏. And amen we finall get confirmation that Dr. Manav is in love with Anjali, I can't wait to see that unfold. 😳
Ok so let me go catch my breath after that scene on the bed, 🤢 I tell you, the way you write a love scene leaves gasoing for breath! 😆👏
AGAIN- DAM YOU AKASH! 😡
Thanks for the update and pm and pls update soon! 🤗
Edited by NallyAarviFan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
that was freaking hot. honestly the admission was a surprise, so clear and truthful
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
i think she had some kind of connection with lavanya... she has seen her earlier... i can remember i read something like that...

is that y arnav is angry with khushi???

pls update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: peepli

R..

Thanks for the pm ..but still 😭 😆



Edited:
Somebody is having wet dreams 😆

Mami s behaviour towards payal wad expected, but not on such harsh lines..anjali s inability to conceive sounds fishy..finally khushi disclosed her fears to somebody..

how did the dress khushi wore seem inviting to arnav?? Because it was red??? Good , Arnav cleared the air regarding Ria, before continuing with the ..erm..unwrapping, otherwise the act would have bordered on forced intimacy...

What is akash s problem..just because he is too immatured for married life, doesn't mean everybody is.. 😆
Why is Arnav angry that khushi worked as a designer before..

The dialogue of the day : I haven't been with ria or anyone else since the time you stormed into my life.. 👏 ..loved it


The dress was inviting to Arnav because of the buttons silly 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: niharika111

That was a beautiful chapter! I loved the comfortable camaraderie between Khushi and Dr. Manav. Glad that he saved Khushi from that creep in the last moment.


By now Shyam must have realized that Khushi is by no means interested in any kind of a relationship with him, other than what propriety allows. What he pulled off with Lavanya, will not be possible with Khushi. And yet, he would not stop trying. One persistent perv he is. I hope he got the message loud and clear when Khushi sat in the garden with Dr. Manav, while she had avoided being with Shyam the entire time.

Then what does the creep do? He tries to play the same trick on Arnav...and it works.

But the best thing (according to me) in today's update was Arnav's confession. That made my day. And what followed was mind-blowing!😉 But Akash had to interrupt!!!😡

But overall, it was a fun read. I read your replies to some of the posts and it seems that Arnav's anger does not mean too much trouble at this point...so looking forward to the next update.

Please Please Please don't let the creep create any more misunderstandings between our sweethearts!





Yes...Arnav's anger is not to worried about at all. He is a little irked but nothing more than that 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: segad

Please don't take a week between updates. We love this story.


I have no idea why I connect with this story. But I do. That is to your credit as a writer. each of your characters has alive of their own and no matter how much I hate shyam, I know i have to wait for the story to play out.

Congratulations on writing such a wonderful story


Thankyou for such beautiful words :-)

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