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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Interesting one, you updated after so long. :(

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5armad

@5armad

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

I have complete faith in Arnav Beast Raizada. He's going to handle any MUs that even try to occur. He just has to kiss Khushi's mouth shut :)

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: charlotte74

You know Farheen, it takes lot of passion and mental effort to make the characters memorable for readers. I think the CVs no longer have passion for something they created. Now, they just want to get it over with.
I wish I could meet the writer and tell him that in order to show insecurity there is no need to make Arnav behave like an insensitive fool. Even if he were perfectly fine with Khushi, it is Shitall's behaviour that would make her insecure. Insecurities are born in a person's mind because of perceptions. Trying made it SO OBVIOUS is just juvenile.

-Kavi

U r so right... I am no writer but even I know that a writer has to give her/himself up to make a character... Ok Arnav is angry with her to ignore her but what abt Khushi I mean she had a DNA test done of her husband and then to make it up to him a normal wife would have do a candle light dinner or something more private but she organised a basket ball match and Arnav went in fuelling her insecurities more... Arnav only asked abt her disappearance when nani started comparing his childhood with that brat( I absolutely loathe that little boy for treating Khushi so disrespectfully) why can't the cvs show Khushi's breakdown like a normal person rather than turning her into a family jester.

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Starting from Jenny's arrival. She is all good-natured & genuine not mean at all.

This trip & visit made me double minded reagarding Arnav-Khushi's relationship but when he carried her in his arms in front of Jenny, I felt awesome. He do cares though he say it aloud in words or not.

His way of giving money to Khushi touched my heart. He didn't show that she has no money or she didn't need to ask him. She just got without any words.😊

Arnav is so jealous of Manav and I'm sure its because Khushi didn't tell him what they were talking about in the garden during anjali's birthday party.

I'm sure if Khushi had heard their whole conversation she would have heard some good things too to make her smile.

But Shyam is such a creep. I got scared for a minute when he stood there blocking the entrance. After witnessing Arnav's hostility towards Manav, Khushi must confide in Arnav. More importantly because its not her intution anymore, shyam has said it loud in clear words. She also needs to tell how Shyam is trying to make her think that Arnav is responsible for Lavanya's death. This man is dangerous and Arnav only can handle him.

This was an amazing update. The way you describe the nature, architecture is amazing. Just curious to know if you have visited Rajasthan or you belong from there as your description is superb.

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

what an absolutely fantastic update and what an extremely torturous end. arnav is possessive about khushi too, can't she see that? god! if only they could use their mouths to tell each other their feelings

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Azzmaira

@kookoo864

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

Shyam is so sinister, how can he just trot like that, he should really get a reality check. Creep!
Wonder what Arnav is going to do with Khushi now, the way he left that place with Khushi, looks like they are going to have a big fight.
Thanks for pm!

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sias2

@sias2

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

loved the update..
shyam is getting on my nerves..i hate him..
is Arnav really jealous or is he angry with manav?
Khushi should tell him about shyam..
thanks for the pm

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#388

MU.. MU.. all the way... hope Shyam does nothing bad to Khushi...

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#389

great update

just one little complaint

the updates are few and far in between

its a lovely story and i hope to read it a lot more

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#390

Wow it was fantastic.. Hurt Khushi, obsessive Shyam , protective n caring Manav, and a jealous Arnav..and the description of the place was fabulous. All in all a power packed update...