Arhi: Desert Rose #3 Chapter 23 updated page 120 - Page 36

U have taken yr reader on tour of Rajshtan with all that detailed discription that you have provided ... It was fabulous ..,, oh poor khushi poor poor khushi she is just gona get in to the sacrificing avtar now ... oh I just sooo hope that she also share this with manav what Shyam had just told her cuz he all ready knows someof it sooo it will help her a lil. .,,

Nice update ... Looking forward to read more
Thank you

Interesting update.

I liked Jenny. She's smart and sensible, and her conversation with Arnav was totally like that between two old friends. I understand Arnav's hesitation to share the details about his marriage, though I have the feeling that Khushi may have again jumped the gun in this case, like she had with Ria. But then, can't really blame her, because Arnav's personality does not really encourage open communication either. Another loop in the giant jalebi of their relationship.

I am glad Khushi now knows what Shyam wants with her. But I think she's strong enough to handle it, though I really hope that she tells Manav, at least. Though again that could backfire, considering Arnav's very obvious jealousy about their friendliness. But at least he's feeling furious and possessive right now, so I hope Arnav responds in some way to Manav's parting shot.

What's wrong with Anjali again? Shyam isn't poisoning her, is he? I must say this is one super-creepy creep you have created. Especially since he seems perfectly capable of physically harming Khushi if he gets the chance. Slimy snake.🤢

I loved your detailed descriptions of all the places they visited, the shopping they did. Very picturesque.

O GOD AGAIN A BIG MISUNDERSTANDING IS ON ITS WAYS!😲

i was mentally biting my nails while reading the update. just had me at the edge of my seat...

kushi is in love

Originally posted by: farheen75

Really Charlotte I am so happy to hear that at least we don't have to see mindless and stupid antics of Khushi in the FFs... What Khushi is doing in the show is so infuriating that I haven't watched a single epi this week and not at all looking forward to the maha epi as well.

By the way Charlotte have u noticed that u have already reached 20 chapters and still the story is going so strong and getting more interesting with every update... There is so much u can explore in Arnav and Khushi's relationship and I love this aspect of your stories... U know I still read DND every other week and still want to comment abt so many things in their interactions with each other like what Khushi could have said more to Arnav and Arnav to her.

What a fabulous update
Loved the description of Rajasthan - the fort, shopping all came alive for me. My family is form Rajasthan and I have visited Bikaner many times.
Arnav is confusing Khushi (and me) - does he care for her or is she just someone he was "forced" to marry.
Poor Manav - how does he fit into this whole scenario? Why does Arnav despise him?
Why is Anjali ill?
Is it because of Shyam?
It is so interesting that I find Shyam totally contemptible in your FF but am currently channelling my inner Anjali and chanting, "humme Shyamji lauta do" for the real IPK in which I cannot stand the current track.
It is the amazing talent in the FF that keeps me hooked to IF because my interest in IPK waned a while ago.
Keep up the great work

Originally posted by: charlotte74

Thanks pancake!

It is Pankaj actually and yes I am a girl. Real life can be stranger than fiction sometimes.

Hey Charlotte, I caught up with this story recently and I am hooked. I love the storyline and the way you have characterised them. Your descriptions of the place are vivid and mighty pretty. There's not much I can say but I am really looking forward to reading more...😊