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Posted: 12 years ago
hey buddy it was such a beautiful post...it made my hrt beat faster wen khushi strtd feeling insecured..i cud feel arnav's pain deep dwn my hrt...
ur words made me feel the aroma of intense n true luv...
n tht last picture finally made me cry...oh to remember their loss all ova again..to cry togthr n forgt those lonely days...to b there for each other...they neeed to go thru this toh it cud hav been avoided...bt tht little thing u came up...so insignificant yet so imp...so minute a detail yt sumthing tht gves the story an entire new depth...
i am astounded...all i got to say is..
APPLAUDS APPLAUDS APPLAUDS!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
great long update absolutely awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you...for a wonderful update...loved it.
Finally our little aashna is fine and out of danger. I am still waiting for her and arnav to hit it off. I have a feeling that once aashna finds her father, she would forget her mother. Arnav would spoil her completely.šŸ˜‰
Naina is surprised to see khushi and arnav together..to see the care which he has for her and the amount of trust which she has once again out in him. Her feelings best replect out thoughts as readers which we have for the couple...pure admiration of the bond which you have potrayed.😊
Loved how you have written about Arnav's first experience of holding his daughter. Him being nervous while khushi trying to help him. It just showed that khushi not only trusted him with herself but also trusts him with her daughter.
Now all they need in their relationship is better communication to avoid awkwardness. Aranv left because he thought Karan and K were coming so khushi mught feel awkward in asking him to leave while she would shut down the whole world just to spend time with him...her world.šŸ˜•
Its good that arnav had khushi talked to each other and clarified this misunderstanding. their love and passion will heal their wounds and sometime reopen the old ones aswell. But the need to leave the past behind.
Waiting to see what arnav's reaction will be😭 on seeing the baby's pic. Because in all of this, he has not had a chance to react properly, he has just been worried about khushi, keeping his feelings aside. Hope that this time khushi will be there to support him.
Waiting for the next part eagerly...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
KC first of all sorry for the late comment. I did see your pm 2-3 days ago but was in Chicago for a conf could not get time to read.

Its fantastic.Just superb. The way you write about Khushi's insecurity is so logical. RElationship though based on love need time for complete trust and faith to grow. Here they have gone through hell. WHen I see this FF I keep feeling even the makers have not got the hang of teh characters as you have.

The update showed the dilemma faced by Arnav yet did not make him look weak or un-arnav like. A man madly in love yet unable to find the right way to express it owing to the repercussions his past actions have had on the person he loves the most.

Also the way he is hesitant aroudn Aashna, he loves her now bcos khushi loves her. It will be interesting to see how their relationship progresses.

I m curious abt the rest of the Raizada family. They still do not know right that Arnav met khushi..

applause dear..

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely..😊
mindblowing...every singe line written explains their feelings so beautifully or may i say perfectly...!!
hats off to you KC...and THANKYOU for such an amazing update...=))
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya123

Karma,

Edited in Purple...
Would you believe me if I told you that I've already read chapter 30 about 10 times?
No - not because I dont want to - but because - I still can't believe someone likes my FF SO MUCH. Thanks!
You probably wouldn't if you knew how busy I was during the past 3 days. Even with so much to do and so much stuff going on, I couldn't help but read the update again and again. I woke up early, stayed up late, accessed IF on my phone while in the car and what not... just to be able to read this beautiful chapter of this extraordinary story.
Again - very hard to believe that someone can love this story to such extent. I don't know what else to say...Shukriya! Waking up early and staying up late? Thank you. Can't express what I feel every time I hear that from you...
I have one unfinished book and three other unread/new books on my Kindle that I willingly bought with the intention to read. However I cannot get myself to go back and finish the unfinished book or start reading one of the unread books. This is a result of not being able to get myself to stop reading this story. I just can't get enough of it, Girgit. I really can't.
Then Don't. Keep reading it over and over again. :)
I would like to clarify that I don't go back and re-read chapters for the mature content. I would like to point out that regardless of the mature content, this story stands out. However, with that being said, I would like to compliment you that I haven't come across an author who possesses the ability to write amative scenes the way you do.
Even if you do read it for the mature content - I am fine with that as well...since I am the one who wrote it...lol. Thank you again...
No matter how many times I've already read every chapter, I will still go and re-read your work. Why? Because this story has gotten into my blood and the more I read it, the more I learn about what the story really means. Every time I re-read this story, I discover something new about it, EVERY SINGLE TIME.
Do share one day all the new things you learn about the story...I would like to know as well...I have rarely re-read anything and yet again - I am surprised that you re-read my story. What more do I say...
Every time I read your work, I'm in awe of you. I can't help but wonder how one author can execute EVERYTHING in their story so PERFECTLY... right from the characters and their emotions to the description of the setting of the scene, EVERY SINGLE THING and thus, enabling the reader to actually VISUALIZE the scene.
I wish I could come up with something to express in words on how flattered I am by your wonderful thoughts about this FF. I am so happy that you like the way I write this FF and grateful that you appreciate my work...
You outdo yourself with each subsequent chapter and thus it goes without saying that chapter 30 is my favorite chapter in this FF so far. With every single emotion so beautifully depicted, this chapter is deep and real without even a hint of trite.
I am glad that I have lived up to your expectations...and happy that you liked this chapter so much...
THANK YOU Karma! Thank you for taking out the time and putting in the effort to write such a long update of more than 8000 words just for your readers. I am really grateful; yet, I would like to tell you that even though THAT IS A LOT OF WRITING FOR YOU AS AN AUTHOR, IT COULD NEVER BE A LOT OF READING FOR YOUR READERS. YOUR READERS SIMPLY CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF THIS STORY!
Anything for a reader like you...thanks for letting me that know no matter how much I get carried away...you will always appreciate my effort...
There is this one thing about your work, the importance of which, I CANNOT EMPHASIZE ENOUGH: You are an author with an unparalleled understanding of complex human emotions and an unbelievably amazing ability to convey them to your readers.According to me, this is one of your most important strengths as an author.
No one has ever pointed that about me as a author - so thanks for informing me my strength - will def. come in handy when I write in future. It's very impressive that you not only read the update and like it - you can also pin-point the strenghts and weaknesses of the author - something not everyone is able to do - Highly impressed - I must say!!
Your writing style is so natural, without even a hint of contrivance. You are gifted, Girgit. You are BORN TO SHINE. I hope someone makes you realize your true potential soon if you haven't realized it already.
You are at it. I won't be surprised if I DO shine one day - it will be because of you.
Karma, I hope you aren't feeling that I tell you the same things in each comment and that my feedback is repetitive/dull. Believe me, whatever I just wrote, came out straight from my heart.
Never - your Unresses are treat to read! EVERY SINGLE TIME! I am being honest.
It's actually super late at night here (3 o' clock in the morning) and I'm dead tired and my drink isn't helping. I'm so sleepy that my eyes are heavy, red and watery. Despite that, I couldn't stop myself from dropping in this comment (I'm sure you are aware that you and your work have this effect on people)!
No no no no no - let's not mess with your health - I won't like it!
Gurl, like I've told you before, English isn't my first language. So I hope you will excuse my poor grammar/writing style/vocabulary etc. In case you came across anything untoward in the comment, I want you to know that I meant well but was probably unable to articulate myself coherently/cogently.
STOP!!
Trust me when I say this, of whatever I've read in life so far, this incredible and eloquently told story is my FAVORITE.
It's the BEST thing someone has ever said about this FF...THANK YOU!!
Before I post this comment, I would like to share a few lines of a song with you and for you...
My wish, for you, is that this life becomes all that you want it to,
Your dreams stay big, and your worries stay small,
You never need to carry more than you can hold,
And while you're out there getting where you're getting to,
I hope you know somebody loves you, and wants the same things too,
Yeah, this, is my wish.
Thank you for this wonderful lyrics...
I appreciate it - from the bottom of my heart...
I wish the same - I know I should have come up with something creative - but obviously I couldn't...so I am going to use these same words...It may not be original but I MEAN IT!!
(Here's the link, should you want to listen to the song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6eCYb0X9iqM)
Karma, you are UNLIKE ANY OTHER. Incomparable. Unforgettable. Irreplaceable.
Thank you!! I really hope that NO ONE can replace my importance in your life. If someone ever does - I am going to hunt that person down and then rest you will find out when it happens...lol
And it goes without saying (or saying) that you hold an important place in my life as well...
Your wings already exist. All you need to do is fly. <3
In training buddy...thanks to you!!
I think this was crappiest reply to your wonderful Unres - do forgive me but you write such wonderful things that no matter how much I try - I can't get myself to beat that. Not that it's a competition but - I wish I could have come up with something better than just replying to your words. Maybe one day - I can get half as creative as you and reply properly. Until then - issi se kaam chalao...
Sorry buddy!
-KC

I want to thank you over and over again but I haven't figured out how yet...so all I want to let you know that I DID read your UNRESS - I WILL reply to your wonderful words - ONLY when I am able to come up with something...
Until then - forgive me - I just can't get myself to say anything right now - pretty overwhelmed by this wonderful UNRESS and the lyrics...
Until I figure out what to say - THANK YOU...
Will come back to it and I guess - Edit and thank you properly...
Until then - Thank you sey kaam chalao...
If I ever become 'someone' in this life - I will NEVER forget to thank you for your push...
-KC
Edited by karmachameleon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow...
It was just "INCREDIBLE"...
god i cant even tell u how much i luvd dis update...
U r super duper amazing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Karma karma karma karma karma chameleon,
You come and go, you come and go.
Loving would be easy if your colors were like my dreams,
Red gold and green, red gold and green.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Marvelous!.just went to all the maha update. Wonderful. N khushi's pain was so hurting me
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
thank u so much 4 d maha update

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