MG- Roothe Piya-Manaoo kaise#2 link THREAD 3

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

superb parts
bt past uff more i knew past more me hating geet nt too musk bt na nt liking her behavior
bt story hai toh kuj b hoga haina... sab sweet sweet b accha nhi lgta na😆😆😆
n me enjoying it fully😃😃
me lvd the name geet gave maanu khadoos...😆😉
maanu confessed his feenings bt geets' ego😡😡
geet ne jo kha kar dikhaya she said na she will made him hate her one day lo ho gyauff ye piya jldi nhi mnanega
lvd it

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

loved it Anu...really fely bad for Maan and Geet

Geet you know why but also felt bad for Maan...I still think it was their parent's fault completely...such a relationship without love was disastorous...

even I want past to be over so that manaoo part is more in focus but then i guess it will not have enough zeal if past is not clear...

a tough balance act for you and hats off for pulling it off so well...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Thnx for double updates….lovedboth parts and the way you emoted his past and current is really awesome…both parts required how they are poles apart….her rudeness, arrogance, her ego, her disinterest in him alongwith his love for her, doing anything for her and his parents everyting is perfect….

He just rejected the post of director, small small events like her muhdikahi or his talikg with gilrs or his asking forgiveness from her mother everything stated the real situation both were in

I liked the idea of finishing the past….as I too wanted the present and how she is going to 'manao kaise'part

TFP

Cont soon

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fantesy

@fantesy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

wow double update...geet was realy vry vry rude in past...feeling sooo bad for maan...

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shabnam

@shabnam22

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

awesome... Just read all parts... its really hard for maan to understand n believe her remembering d past...its going to be tough for geet n have to work hard to win him back...but a very long way to go...

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nafisa_kazi

@nafisa_kazi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

uh oh, it's an uphill task for geet, good update...thank you...

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nafisa_kazi

@nafisa_kazi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

thanks for another great update...

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

awesome updates Anu...

I really like the way you are expressing the roothe piya part... The reason behind his change in attitude is completely justified...

Even now, its not that he is stone hearted... just that he just couldnt get himself believe in Geet and get hurt more... And Geet has done so much in the past that she needs to really try hard to manofy her hubby...

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

so beautiful parts ! the way you wrote each ones character is awesome. maan, so understanding, simple and in love both with his parents and his misty. love this maan. geet, not at all understanding either maan's situation or her in-laws, only concerned with her prestige . loved the way girls talked with maan, not insulting him but in a friendly way. geet has long way to go in manaoo her piya.