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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

Just when I thought the cliffhangers were taking a break, wow! The thought of an impromptu wedding in Kasmir is so romantic. Can't wait till the next chapter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Naina! Naina! Naina!

What do I say right now? You know its quite funny that every time you update, I feel like writing so much in the comment but then I realize that with every update, you outdo yourself and that leaves me completely speechless. As I start to write something in the comment, am all clueless.

Mere words cannot express how beautiful this story is. It's all together a wonderful novel in the making! I can see all a mix of Harlequins, M&B et al in this one fic. Needless to say that the couple being ArHi here is a cherry on cake!

Right from the beginning to this 56th chapter, there hasn't been a loose end. Every update has left me wanting for more. And now, its getting too much to handle -_-

You're a brilliant writer. This story screams this fact throughout. Arnav, here, is to-die-for man and Khushi, well, she is exactly how I love woman to be - strong, independent, compassionate and self respecting. ArHi's relationship is amazing (I cant get tired of saying this!) The way he's there for her in all roles is endearing. From mentor to lover to fiance and soon-to-be husband, Arnav is a dream guy. What a girl won't do to get this Arnav - a heart stealer!

Coming to this update, every bit was lovely. Started from Arnav to ASR and then back Arnav, this guy (or rather you) is full of surprises. The last few lines left me breathless. Such a dream! Beautiful one at that!

I seriously don't mind whatever Khushi's reaction will be but just popping this question is something akin to bliss. I would love if this happens. Prince sweeping his Princess off her feet! :D

Oh my God, I really cant wait for this one. And a request lastly, *shuts eyes and asks*, would YOU mind being my story teller every day? [read: Updates] 😳😆

Keep up the great work! You're doing awesome ;)

love
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sairam03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

I am thrilled...marriage in Kashmir...well I don't think khushi will agree without her parents. But u know we never know and can't predict Naina and the her fictional characters arnav and khushi. Anything can happen even sr 😉

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Reader_Hobby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

❤️❤️❤️Hey!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! I have a lot to say, but because I'm super excited about how things have progressed with Arnav and Khushi, I don't think I can muster my words together 😕 ... but I'll give it a go 😆

WOW!!! The description of Kashmiri breakfast was perfect. Infact it felt like I was reading about food that was fit for royalty. Having said that, our Arnav and Khushi are no less than that. Beautiful. Charming. Elegant. Loving.

Ahhh ... the list is pretty much endless. 😊

I think its something to admire really that the charming, loving and caring man in question can be Arnav one minute, then ASR the strong businessman the next.

Oh yesss. As Khushi was coming out if the bathroom in a towel, I thought that Arnav would pop up behind her to tease her. Surprisingly that didn't happen. He decided to be a gentleman and leave her clothes, inner wear and toiletries on the bed for her to get ready. Sweeet 😳 >>> Then the little note from Arnav. That was super cute! Especially when it read about turning his fantasy into reality. Just imagine what other fantasies he'd like to turn into reality once they're married. That'll be fun, considering Khushi's reactions ... 😆

Anyway, another magnificent chapter. Beautifully written. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks for the PM.