ArhiFF:Destiny Games # thread 1

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kamtokdin

@kamtokdin

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#571

Finally, things began to get interesting. I know you were trying to set up the story in the previous 3 chapters. However, I feel that it was dragging a little bit.

The premise is most interesting. Looking forward.

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#572

Arnav's mind works really well; at the same time he's not one to play with someone's life, good to know that.

Our Khushi is a good Samaritan...nice!

I've worked as a medical representative for some time, so if you make any mistake I'll correct you okay? 😉

I don't think the last updates were getting dragged; as a reader I might want the story to go ahead fast, but as a writer I also know how important it is to lay the foundation, as you explained.

Good going, continue soon!

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Superb update. I really wanna knw y sashi ve raizadas property papers. So arshi meeting atlast (properly) hahaha nce.

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Sanjana

@sweet_sanju

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Nice update
So all d property belongs to Shashi gupta now
Khushi came to meet Arnav
update soon
thnx for d pm

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#575

Yaayy, waiting for the fireworks to happen coz Khushi sure did not seem to be in a mood for anything less tame.
Really interesting update,surprised that not only RM but all the properties of the Raizada's are in Shashi Gupta's name!! It sure did bring in a tsunami alright.

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#576

nice part...

arnav really doing this wid khushi...

truly unfair...

so shashi areested...

arnav khushi heat convo coming.,

update soon...

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#577

This really was the update that we needed... Khushi and Sashi have a bond, but I am still wondering if that could break anytime due to the property issue...

Khushi is definitely a tsunami, and hopefully she is just as strong as I am expecting her to be! I don't want to see a weak Khushi! She has an advantage of the fact that she owns the properties. Maybe she can make Arnav succumb? I am very impressed with Arnav and his ethics!

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#578

Wow! This is getting so good. Can't wait to see the conversation between Arnav & Khushi.

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#579

that was really good!!!
loved the way arnaav stood firm to his morals...
w8ng for next!!!!

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#580

oh this is very confusing... how come everything is transferred over to shashi gupta??? oh n im so waiting for Arshi confrontation... pls pls update soonnn... pls dont make us wait...

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