Fate-Mate Thread 5 Chapter 33

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shivi.10rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#391

res.
wll read n comment soon
i hope so

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Akorshi Oroni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#392

thts so lovey dovey update...

i loved the update a lott...

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cozy_mango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#393

Yaaay you finally updated 😃!! Loved it, he's so cute bringing her ice-cream when she was craving it awww. Continue writing, you are a fantastic writer! Your detail in this FF is amazing especially the way you describe their feelings - it's great! Keep writing and update soon...

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Koeli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#394

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KC i am so sorry for commenting late.

It is so nice of you that you waited patiently.

KC i hope you are not mad at me for asking about that Kiss FB . sorry yaar if i have hurt you. but it just came in my mind and i wrote that flatly.

Ok coming back to the update oops updates.

remembered? i have talked about Radha kishna thing in the pm. you know when i was reading the update i was like what the? KC i dont know whether you remember of not i once told you that i am participating in I-F IPKKND marriage contest and i was the barati??? well we had a task where we had to make preparation for marriage decor and i have choosen peacock theme *sigh* lol can you believe it? dude something is there between us you know how can so many things matches yaar?

I absolutely loved their conversation on the theme thing. i loved how khushi explained the sacred relationship of Radha ji and krishna ji. I heart bleeds thinking about their separation though. Oh KC i so feel these guys are so real and part of my life. I smile with them i cry with them each and every emotions i just loved it. i specially like ASR's character in this FF. too intense actually.

(ps radha was married to krishna's uncle. but it is said that she was a part of laxmi ji as lord vishnu could only marry laxmi ji. His all wifes were part of laxmi ji. thought we only know Rukmini as his wife)

I loved how ASR wrote so many A's in her head. i am so damn excited reading that part and later khushi cherishing and drooling those A's. uff kya imagination hai KC. really. small A's big A's, stylish A's but all are "A" for me it meant what ever it is however it is her life is only field with him and that is so true.

KC i dont know why at the end of each and every update i become really emotional with Fate-Mate. See i am havig tears now also while writing happy parts. i think i have gone crazy with this FF. but i seriously love this and i can say that in every update no matter how bored you are with the same 3 words "I LOVE THIS"

Again thanks for making people aware of the Plagiarism it is truely disturbing and disgusting.

KEEP IT UP KC will wait for more.

Edited by Appy_Indy - 13 years ago

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#395

Amazing part 33...they have so fallen for each other...can't wait for them to realize what they feel for one another...KC...simply awesome!!!...can't wait for part 34 ;)!!! :)

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shamin1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#396

beautiful update...ASR is so cute...now he is her genie...hope khushi stops being so confused...but dear u write so good...a heart filling update and the FF is everything u want or ask for...simply beautiful...continue soon❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#397

Absolutely love this story...beautiful emotions...superb,,,,waiting eagerly for her to find out abt ASR...want to know her reaction to finding out...

Thanks for the pm!

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Ashakalyani

@Ashakalyani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#398

aww...he is so sweet...he brought icecream for her...i am deeply in love with this ff KC...

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henamani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#399

You might have never needed anything so bad……but there comes a time in everyone's life when there is that one thing that you really want…….and you just can't seem to get it…..not on your own at least…..you will know what I mean one day…..when that happens to you…..that one day when you yearn for something and you can't get it……not even a big shot like you…….then you will understand this song…….that yearning….that desperation……that longing……and asking God for help……trying anything and everything possible to get what you really want…

how i know this feeling; even though i havent read the whole update, im crying. how i wish love was as pure as you have envisioned.

how i wish people in love would never be separated

bless you KC