Originally posted by: ananya123
Girgit, I'm just bowled over by your knowledge and creativity. Knowing facts is one thing but being able to incorporate those facts into something to create a story so beautiful is another thing altogether. You are brilliant! Needless to say, I loved how you pulled together the Radha-Krishna facts/information into a narrative. Incredible! I also got an insight into your unique vision of the Gods.Coming to the protagonists in this story, it is interesting how love has started breaking down some barriers, love that exists yet it is unknown to them. The way you've conveyed this is amazing, these barriers are being broken down to give way to feelings that ASR did not even know existed within him. It's crazy how we sometimes discover our true selves through the help of another individual even without them doing anything. This is exactly what's happening to ASR.The story's pace is just fine! I like to look at the positive instead of focusing on the lack. I'm happy that there's at least some progress and by that I mean ASR listening to his heart/hand for once and not his brain.This was a wonderful effort by you, karmachameleon and you pulled it off wonderfully. I would highly recommend this story to anyone who loves to read, regardless of whether they know anything about IPKKND or not.This story is a magical and engaging work that I know I will read again and again.Thank you for the PM, Karma.With love and light,An ardent follower of your work.
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
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