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awsum... update soon plzzz xx
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Rey-vo. . . Swayam mujhe kahena hai ki. . . .
Sw-are bolo na rey. . . .
Rey-ha me vo. . .ha mujhe window seat pe bethna hai kya tu mujhe vaha bethne dega?
Sw-(me janta hu rey tu kya kehna chahta tha. . .ab kitni der sach chupayega?)itni si baat ke liye kitna time laga diya rey???le beth ja. . . . .

Rey is now looking at taani and see that she is laughing. . . . . Rey sat at the window seat.
suddenly his phone vibrate. . . .he saw taani's msg. . . .taani ne likha tha-mene kaha tha na aap nahi bata payenge. . . . .

Rey replied. . .tum dekhti jao me bata kar hi rahunga. . . . .

Taani replied-ha dekh hi rahi hu. . . .

Rey-thinks(kaise batau swayam ko??)

Sharon messeges swayam-mujhe tumhare baju me bethna hai. . . . Do something. . . . .
Swayam-ha me kuch karta hu. . . . Swayam sees that all are sleeping. . . .exept him,sharon,taani and rey. . . . Then swayam says to rey-rey ek baat kahena chahta hu. . . .

Rey-ha swayam bolna. . .

Sw-kya tum thodi der ke liye taani ke baju me beth sakte ho?

Rey-kya sharon ko tumhare sath bethna hai?

Sw- ha. . .

Rey-ok. . Thinks(taani ke sath bethne ko to mila) And goes beside taani. . . .
And sharon sit besides swayam. . . Rey sits and sees that taani is watching outside the window. . . So she doesnt notice rey. . . Rey stares at her and lost in her beauty. . . .

Here sharon places her head on swayam's sholuder. . . . Swayam is very happy. . . . He took sharon's hand and both sleep. . .

Here rey comes to his sense. . . . Taani is still looking outside. . . She is thinking something. . . . Rey comes near her and kiss on her cheek. . . . Taani turns and saw rey. . . .

Taani-rey aap. .but rey put his finger on her lips and said-shhh. . . .jyada loudly mat bolo sab log jag jayenge. . . . Taani looks and sees that all are sleeping. . . . .and swaron are sitting together. . . . And then she again looks outside the window. . . She is rembering what happened in the bus and comon room between them and blushes. . . . .

Rey sees that taani is blushing and rey said-taani. .
Taani-hmm. . . . Rey-kiske bare me soch rahi ho?
Taani-vo me aap. . . (and she stops. . .)
Rey-to tum mere bare me soch rahi ho. . . .
Taani- nai vo . . . Me. . .vo. . . .kuch nahi bas ese hi. . . .
Rey-ese hi kya taani and he comes closer. . . .
Taani -vo me soch rahi thi ki. . . And taani lost in rey's grey eyes. . . .
Rey comes closer and closer. . .taani closes her eyes. . . . He take taani's face in his hand and,taani could feel his breath. . . . . .but she thinks about swayam.
Taani slowly pushes rey and said-rey bhai jag jayenge to problem ho jayegi. . . .
Rey -ok thik hai. . . . Vaise tum taiyar rehna. . . .
Taani-kis baat ke liye mujhe taiyar rehna hai?
Rey-vo me aaj swayam ko hamare baare me batane vala hu to tumne vada kiya hai ki jo me kahunga vo tum karogi. . . .
Taani-pehle aap baat to karo. . . Rey-vo to me karunga hi. . . .
Taani-ha thik hai. . . Aap ko nind nahi aa rahi?
Rey- thodi thodi. . . . . .tumhe? Taani-ha mujhe aa Rahi hai.
Rey-ha to so jao. . .
Then Taani sleeps. . . .

While sleeping she put her head on rey's shoulder. . . .rey saw taani and stares at her.. . . .she put her hand on rey's hand while sleeping. . . .rey took her hand and intertwined his fingers with taani. Then he kisses taani's forehead and put his head on taani's head and sleep. . . . . . .

After some time rey got up and saw all are still sleeping. . .then he looks at taani.because of the wind taani's hair comes on her face.rey tooks her hair and put it behind taani's ear. . . . Rey's fingers touches taani's cheeks and taani thinks swayam use utha raha hai.

she speaks -bhai 5 min aur sone do pls. . . . .and she put her hand around rey because she has a habbit to hug her teddy bear while sleeping and she again sleep. Rey smiles at this action of taani.

Vo ab college pahochne hi wale hai. . . ...so he wake up taani.

Rey-(softly touches her cheeks)taani. . . Utho. . Hum pahochne vale hai. . . . .

Taani-pls thodi der sone do na bhai. . . Rey-me swayam nahi rey hu taani. . . . Taani-hearing this taani open her eyes and sees that she hug rey while sleeping. . . . . Taani try to wake up from rey. .. . . .But rey hold her tightly. . . Taani-rey kya kar rahe ho aap?6odiye mujhe. . . .
Rey-nahi. . .
Taani-rey plz. . . . Dekhiye bhai hame hi dekh rahe hai. . . Hearing this rey leave taani. . And looks at swayam. . . He is still sleeping. . . And then looks at taani.she is laughing. . . Rey try to hold her again but Now all gang member also wake up so he cant. . . . .

Vicky-finaly pahoch gaye. . . . .
All goes out of the bus and go home. . . .

Rey's house. . . In his room. .

He got out from shower. . . And thinks about taani. . . .he remember room scene. . . . He thinks something and then call swayam. . . . . Swayam recieve his call. . . .

Sw-ha rey bol. . .
rey-ha tu kaha hai?
Sw- vo me sharon ke ghar pe hu. . . . . Rey-ok. . .
Sw-kyu koi kam tha?
Rey- nahi yar koi kam nahi tha. . . .bas ese hi tujhe phone kiya tha.ok bye . . . . Sw-bye. . .

Then rey thinks taani akeli hogi. . . Uske ghar jata hu.then he goes. . , He goes in the house through the window. . .to surprise taani.but he saw that taani is not in her room. , . . So he search her . . . And he saw taani is in the kitchen. . . . . .rey stares at her. . . here taani is cutting vegetables. . . . .

She felt that someone is staring at her.she look there and saw rey but she thinks that its her imagination. . . . And go back to her work. . . .

Rey-taani mujhe dekh kar bhi ignor kar rahi hai. . , Taani speaks-hey krishnaji ab rey mujhe kitchen me bhi dikhne lage. . . Hearing this rey smile and goes near taani and from back he says in her ear. . . .taani. . .

Taani heard this and says ab mujhe rey ki aawaz bhi sunai de rahi hai. . . .hey krishnaji ye aap kya kar rahe hai mere sath. . . . . Hearing this. . . Rey catch taani from back. . . . Taani turns her face and sees that rey is here. . . Now taani thinks (rey to sach me yaha hai. . . . .)

Taani-rey aap sach me yaha hai?

Rey -ha me sach me yaha hu and he kiss on her cheek and said ab yakin hua. . . Now taani push rey and said aap yaha kya kar rahe hai?bhai dekh lenge. . .

Rey comes closer and hold her waist and said-swayam to ghar par nahi hai. . . .

Taani-apko kaise pata. . . .
Rey-mujhe pata hai. . .
Taani again push rey and say-aap hatiye mujhe khana banane dijiye.bhai aate hi honge.and she starts to cut the vegetables. . . . . .
Rey goes in front of taani, stand there and stares at taani. . . . Taani sees rey staring at her. . . And she lost in his eyes. . . . . Taani is still cuting veges and cuts her finger.blood is coming out from her finger. . . . .rey saw this and run to taani and said-taani tum dekh ke sabzi nahi kat sakti thi?and take her finger into his mouth. . . .taani smiles at his action and said rey kuch nahi hua. . . . .thoda sa hi dard ho raha hai. . . .
Rey-chup raho taani. . . Me kuch karta hu.
He runs and comes with first aid box.he bandage taani's wound and goes to put the box back.

Here taani is doing something and taani se paani gir jata hai.
Taani-oh no. . . . Ise jaldi se saaf karna padega. Rey is coming to kitchen.
taani saw rey and say, . . . . rey sambhal kar vaha par paani. . . . .
Is se pahele ki vo apna sentense pura kare rey slips. . . . . And he fell on taani. . . . And he lost in her eyes. . . .

Taani-rey mene kaha tha na ki sambhal kar chalna. . But rey is not in mood of hearing taani.he puts his finger on her lips. . . . . Taani thinks ye rey kya kar rahe hai. . .
Taani -rey. . . .
Rey-shhh. . . Taani kuch mat bolo . . . . .And he touches taani's cheek. . . . . Taani closes her eyes. . . .
Rey take taani's hair on one side and start kissing her neck. . . . . .he take taani's hand and put them around his neck. . .. . . . slowly rey comes to her shoulder and kisses her shoulder. . . . .
Suddenly they heard door bell and taani said-rey . . . .lagta hai bhai aa gaye. . . .plz uthiye. . . Wo to jante bhi nahi honge ki aap yaha hai.
Rey stands up and help tani to stand up. . . .
Taani-ab kya hoga. . . . Aap jaldi se kahi chup jaiye. . . .
Rey-taani . . . . Relax. . . Kuch nahi hoga. . . . .vaise bhi me yaha swayam se hamare bare me hi baat karne aaya hu.
Taani-agar bhai nahi mane to. . . . Rey kiss taani's forehead and hugs her and said vo jarur man jayega. . . Ab jao and darwaza kholo. . . . .
Taani goes to open the door. . . .
Edited by pari1521 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohhh so im the first one for this part...yippee😃
this is realy very interesting pari...i realy wish aisa hee ho jaye...dhonom apni pyaar confess kar le...n i badly want rey n thani alone in thani's house ...you pictured everythng ,the sweet moments 😳between them when they r alone n rey starng at her when she prepares food n all that...great job.👏..n continue soon...
Edited by zuna308 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zuna308

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">ohhh so im the first one for this part...yippee😃</font>
<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">this is realy very interesting pari...i realy wish aisa hee ho jaye...dhonom apni pyaar confess kar le...n i badly want rey n thani alone in thani's house ...you pictured everythng ,the sweet moments 😳between them when they r alone n rey starng at her when she prepares food n all that...great job.👏..n continue soon...</font>



thank u so much. . . . . I thought that it was bad then the other parts. . . . But u like it. . . . So thanks again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aapko pata hai? Mai apki taarif karte karte thak gai hu.. Aur kitni taarif karaoge?? Itna acha kaise likh lete ho aap?? It was awesome as usual.. Loved it.. Will wait for the next part.. Swayam's reaction.. Although he knows.. It'll be fun.. Hats off to you.. Pm me when you update!!!!!
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Originally posted by: Taareyforever

aapko pata hai? Mai apki taarif karte karte thak gai hu.. Aur kitni taarif karaoge?? Itna acha kaise likh lete ho aap?? It was awesome as usual.. Loved it.. Will wait for the next part.. Swayam's reaction.. Although he knows.. It'll be fun.. Hats off to you.. Pm me when you update!!!!!




Thank u thank u thank u so much. . . . .

And i surely pm u. . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!! pari !! awesome update👏!!!!! updatee soon!🤗
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NICE UPDATE PARI😊
LOL CHIPKU TAAREY😆
UPDATE SOON 😳
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vry vry vry nyc update...u wrote it beautifully...good job..n thnx the pm dear..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for your support guys. . . .
Here is part 8. . . . This is the last part guys...
Enjoy it. . . .



Taani goes and opens the door...

And sees swayam...

Taani:bhai aap aa gaye...

Swayam comes in and sees rey and ask:rey tu yaha kya kar raha hai???

Rey:vo me tujse hi milne aaya tha...

Sw:itni rat ko ...???kya bat hai???

Rey:vo..vo...mujhe tujse kuch baat karni thi...

Sw:ha bol...

Rey:vo...baat ye hai ki me...me...

Sw:are bol na...me... me.. kya??

Rey:ha tu pehle yaha beth...

Meanwhile taani goes in the kitchen and prepares food...

Both sat on sofa...

Sw:ha ab bol kya baat karni hai??

Rey:ha meri baat dhyan se sun...aur pls gussa mat karna...

Sw:are ab bolta hai ki me andar jau??

Rsy:nahi nahi kehta hu na...vo me aur taani...

Sw:(smiles a little)kya ye baat taani ke bare me hai??

other side taani thinks:(hey krishnaji pls rey ki help karna bhai ko sach batane me)

Here...

Rey:ha swyam baat mere aur taani ke baare me hai...me taani se pyar karta hu...

Sw:(finaly tune keh hi diya...acting lyk he is angry)what???ye tu kya bol raha hai??aur kya taani bhi tumse pyar karti hai??

Rey:ha vo bhi mujhse pyar karti hai...

Sw:(called taani)taani...taani...

Taani comes...

Taani:ji bhai kya hua??

Sw:kya ye baat sach he ki tum rey se pyar karti ho?

Taani:ha bhai me rey se pyar karti hu...

Sw:what??taani esa nahi ho sakta hai...maine tumhare liye dusra ladka choose kiya hai...(just to tease them)

Taarey:kya???

Sw:ha...

Now taarey looked at each other shocked...

Swayam looked at them and burst into laugh...

Taarey now look at swayam surprisely...

Taani:bhai aap has kyu rahe ho???

Sw:tum dono k face ko dekh kar has raha hu...are me to sirf mazak kar raha hu...

Taani(with little teary eyes):bhai aap ne to mujhe dara hi diya tha. ...

Sw:(goes and hugs taani)sorry taani...m so sorry...me to ye dekhna chahta tha ki tumhara reaction kya hai?

Taani:ha to dekh liya na...me sirf rey se pyar karti hu ...aur kisi aur ke bare me nahi soch sakti...

Rey:dude...tune to sach me hame dara diya...aur dekha meri taani bahot zyada dar gai...

Sw:vo meri bhi behen hai rey...

Taani:tum dono ki taani...and she hug both of them...

And then she says :chaliye khana khate hai...rey aap bhi dinner kar ke jaiye...

Sw:ha rey...dinner kar ke jao...

rey:ok...

And they goes and take their dinner...little eyelocks between taarey...

Taarey are so happy that swayam said yes to their relationship...

After the dinner...

Sw:rey ab tumhe jana chahiye bahot raat ho gayi hai...

Rey:ri8 dude...ok bye...bye taani...

Taani:bye...

Sw:taani tum bhi jake so jao...

Taani:ji bhai...and she goes...

Rey:ok swayam bye me chalta hu...

Sw:bye...

Rey takes his car from swayam's house and then stops and goes back on foot to meet taani...

He climbs on a pipe and go into taani'room through window...

He saw taani is not in her room...he thinks...taani room me kyu nahi hai???and suddenly taani comes from bathroom...rey hides behind the curtains...
Her hair are wet...

She ware a nitesuit...which has a white top...with a string back side and a white night pent...

Rey stares at her...he lost in her beauty...he saws that taani trys to take the string in her hand but she cant...so he comes and vo dori bandh nne kki koshish karta hai...

Taani is shocked to see rey here...she asked:aap??aap yaha kya kar rahe hai??aap abhi tak gaye nahi??bhai kya sochenge??aap...

But rey put his finger on her lips and said:sshhh...kitna bolti ho tum...swayam ko pata nahi hai ki me yaha hu...

Sw:agar pata chal gaya to problem ho jayegi rey...bhai maan to gaye hai par vo aapko ese mere kamre me dekhenge to kya sochenge???

Rey:use pata chalega tab na...aur abhi tumhe meri help ki jarurat hai...tumhare top ki dori bandhne ke liye...

Taani :nahi me khud kar lungi...

Rey:ha thik hai try kar lo...

Taani trys but she cant...so rey comes and help her...she can feel touch of rey's finger on her back...after tide the string,rey smoothly touches taani's back...taani shivered and try to leave from there...but rey hold her waist tightly and pulled her...taani's back hit rey's chest...

Taani:rey...pls chodiye mujhe...ye kya kar rahe hai aap?

but rey is not in mood of liisten to taani...vo thoda piche jata hai...some hair of taani are on her back so rey use hatata hai...he still holding her waist and now his hand moves to her stomach...then rey smoothly touche taani's back and started kissing her back...taani close her eyes and place her hand on rey's hand...rey intertwind his fingers with taani...now he hold her with both his hands...and comes to her shouldre and showered kisses...then comes to her neck and kisses there...

Now rey turn taani and they are so close to eachother...they can feel each others breath...

Other side swayam sleeps so he cant hear taarey's voice ...

Rey says to taani:taani tum kuch bhul rahi ho...

Taani:kya??

Rey:me shart jeet gaya...swayam ko mene bol diya so tumhe vo karna padega jo me kahunga...

Taani:kya ye jaeuri hai...

Rey:ha...because I won...now kiss me...(and showes her his right cheek...)

Taani:rey...kuch aur karne ko dijiye...

Rey:nahi tumhe mujhe kiss karna hi padega...

Taani:ok...but aap apni aankhe bandh kijiye...

Rey:ok ok...

Taani kisses rey's right cheek...now rey shows her his left cheek...

Taani:nahi ab nahi...and she try to leave but cant because rey hold her tightly...dekho mene jo kaha vo karna to padega varna,me tumhe jane nahi dunga...

Taani kisses his left cheek...and says...ok?ab mujhe chodiye...

Rey pulled her more closer and take her face in his hand and gently kisses on her eyes...

And cute eyelock beetween them...taarey bg tune...they comes closer unknowingly...their lips are about to touch and taani runs...

rey:taani...

Taani:itni aasani se nahi rey...

Rey runs after her...

But there is some water on the floor...

Taani stands near the window...and smiling...

Rey slips because of the water but he doesnt fall...because there is a wall...now taani is locked between rey's both hands...

Rey:ab bhag ke kaha jaogi taani??

Taani:rey aapko jana chahiye...she cant look in rey's eyes...

Rey took her both hands and put them around his neck and he put his Hands around her waist...he comes closer and closer...taani can feel his breath...rey kisses near her lips...taani closes her eyes...now rey stares at her lips and in some times rey put his lips on taani's soft lips...he kiss her gently and she responding back...as soon as taani responce,rey started kissing passionietly...taani also responding him back...both tight their grip on each other...they broke their kiss after 10 mins...
Now taani cant see in rey's eyes and blushes...rey smiled seeing taani blushing...he took her face in his hand and gently kisses on her forhead and said:i love u taani...me tumhare bina nahi jee sakta...agar tum mujhe na milti to me mar...but taani puts her hand on his mouth and say:pls rey age se esi baat mat kijiyega...rey kisses her hand and then hug her tightly...taani hug him back and said:i love you too rey...

Now both are happy because no one can seprate them...


The end...

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