MayUr FF: Secret swan (Chap 3- pg 9) 8/12

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A/N 1- Hey, Deepika (deepikavasudeva) here, In case you remember by any chance 😆

Here comes just another dramatic fan-fiction. Would try to update every week. If I could. This one goes for my enemy who lurks behind all the evil in the world You-Know-Who. Who inspired me for this fanfic 'unknowingly' 😆.

BTW here's the link to my MN OS gallery

Plot synopsis: Nupur and Mayank knew about each other's existence since ever through old family ties.


A successful architect, Nupur bhushan didn't wanted to marry, specially not Mayank sharma. She was happy designing homes for others, but one for herself was not her idea, till now. 'Low expectations from people leads to high self satisfaction'. One can only be heartbroken once in your life, right? After that, you got to pick up the pieces and move ahead stronger.

Mayank on other hand married only for the sake of his family. 'Love is for fools and marriage for the one who is in possession of some wealth'. Of course one needed a wife to come home to. And idea of an arrange marriage suddenly didn't sound that stupid.

PROLOGUE

"Do you, Nupur Bhushan take this man, Mayank sharma as your husband, to love him and to honour him, to nurture, serve and support him, in times of joy and in times of difficulty? Do you promise to remain by his side regardless of what trouble befalls you, and in the presence of temptation to forsake this love, do you promise to remain steadfast and true? Do you promise with all your heart and soul to honour this vow till death do you part?"

"I do" she knew her fate was sealed as soon as the words left her mouth.

"Do you Mayank sharma take this woman Nupur bhushan as your wife, to love her and to honour her, to nurture, serve and support her, in times of joy and in times of difficulty? Do you promise to remain by her side regardless of what trouble befalls you, and in the presence of temptation to forsake this love, do you promise to remain steadfast and true? Do you promise with all your heart and soul to honour this vow till death do you part?"


She waited as he took his time to comply. Maybe he would have a change of mind now, she wouldn't mind being left at altar. Even she didn't want to marry him anyway, not when she knew he was here because of parental pressure. "I do" she still heaved out breath that she didn't realized she was holding.

"You have declared your consent before the Church. May the Lord in his goodness strengthen your consent and fill you both with his blessings. What God has joined, men must not divide. Amen.
Ladies and gentlemen, friends, family, loved ones; it is with great pleasure that I now introduce to you for the first time, Mr. and Mrs. Sharma. Groom may now kiss the bride."


She bit her lip, she had forgotten about the intimate rituals. She looked up. Her doubtful ones met his neutral eyes. She hoped he wouldn't find her as repulsive as she thought. She sucked in her breath as he bent over her, eyes still locked. It was just a brush when his lips touched hers and left. She blinked twice, maybe he found her too ugly to linger on at least for the public display.

He felt dizzy with all heat in church and specially that emanated from his bride. He hated family gatherings and this day he had to stay in the limelight. He just wanted to get it over with.
He glanced at the girl that stood beside him, 5' 2" hardly reaching his shoulder, clad in white dress that covered her from neck to toe. She looked up at him sensing his weighing gaze. He couldn't help noticing her big, brown, talkative eyes. She was beautiful.
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(Thanks to faria for suggestion.. The chapters goes on like below)

Chapter-1 - Page 1
Chapter-2 - Page 2
Chapter-3 - Page 9

Thank you😊

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The chosen one, Seriously? The girl who lived... Come to die. 🤣

On a serious note, I'm so happy to see you here. Reserved. :)))
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The chosen one, Seriously? The girl who lived... Come to die. 🤣

On a serious note, I'm so happy to see you here. Reserved. :)))



Damn! i thought no-one will notice 😆
yeah.. kind of coming back.. i missed writing and forums.. so.. just trying :P
if you are voldy i gotta be your enemy right 😉

missed you my ak12 😊
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CHAPTER 1

Nuptial night? honeymoon? words rang in her ears while she sat beside Mayank on their way to airport.

I should have known it. His family wasn't going to make this marriage a small affair. A Europe trip for 3 weeks. Which meant existence crisis with 'The Mayank sharma' in close vicinity for 3 long weeks.

She watched sideways as he flicked through a business magazine. She regretted for not putting her 'currently-reading' book in her handbag. She made a mental note to always do that before any another travelling session along him.

Was this how newlyweds acted around each other? Okay given it was a arranged one, for him at least. Still, she doubted that arranged marriages meant boring your partner to death. With a sigh she fidgeted trying to get herself in more comfortable position to travel still for hour and half or two.

He was finally relaxed. After a whole day of being centre of attention he felt at home even in this rental car. What could be better than to get your hands on favourite latest edition of 'Business week' to keep from making an failed attempt at starting a conversation with the one beside him. It wasn't that he hadn't ever talked to her. He remembered the time after he graduated when they used to talk. She was starting with her bachelors and him being the family approved 'know-it-all' was consulted quite a times in her case. Even in college, she was 2 year junior to him and he used to tease her a few times along with her brother Samrat...

A honking horn pulled him out of his reverie. He would have plenty of time on this long stretched honeymoon to have a good conversation with his bride. He smiled inwardly at 'his bride'. His own, forever. Only his.

"Nupur" he called softly, not recognizing his own voice. She didn't even stir in her slumber.

I don't need to be scared right?

"Nupur bhushan sharma" he called out a little louder. oh yes! I like the sound of it, He thought with a grin.

Her eyes flew open not registering her surroundings, confusion clouding her thoughts. She watched him smiling down at her. Maybe I heard it wrong.

"I woke you up because we have reached airport. Come on, let's go." He said while moving away to get out of car.

If he had waked me up a little earlier, I could have freshen up a bit.

Tugging at her stray hairs and rubbing sleep out of her eyes she came out of car. Once inside airport, checking in, security formalities hardly gave them time to think and soon they were sitting in plane, awaiting their take off.

The awkward silence. He watched her looking out of window, noticing closely the texture of her skin, the way her lashes swayed with the blink of her eyes, her perky nose that somehow looked a little big for her face. Maybe I should have brought that magazine from taxi. Then I wouldn't be staring at her so shamelessly.

"Ahem!" He cleared his throat. And mind. She turned instantly looking at him like she saw him for the first time. He smiled. This should break the ice. "So, ever been to London before?" Well, he already knew the answer, didn't he? He knew she had been the indoor girl whole her life, studious, introvert, never present at any gatherings and if present then withdrawn from the groups. He knew much about her family, her brother but not quite knew 'her' in person. A little chat here there, merely twice-thrice a year doesn't much makes up to be called a 'good friend'. Contact once lost can be difficult to resume back.

"No." She tried a small smile, she appreciated that he took the initiative, finally. "Actually as a matter of fact I haven't been out of India yet. In architecture field, we do have frequent trips every now and then but haven't yet got a chance to go out of country."

"Oh! right. So, which places have been explored by Miss Architect till now?" He remembered how she disliked being called so, in college days by Samrat, but still he just had to tease.

She had this immediate urge to correct him. It is Mrs. Architect now. Still, she pushed aside the thought. "We have mainly been to places that are either known for good architecture specimens or to places that are in need for some renovation. Places like Orissa, Udaipur, Mount Abu, Kovallam, Munnar, Jammu, Bhopal, are there to name some."

"Wow! that's a lot. You almost covered whole India." He was impressed. He didn't knew this, but then there was little he knew about her. "Honestly, I haven't been to so many places neither in my college life nor corporate one. Even the places I have been can only be counted for namesake, since I never really travelled because I wanted to, just cause I had to."Looking up he merely caught her staring at him with eyes that said volumes, but only he couldn't read.

Mayank paid the bell boy while she ventured into the depths of their honeymoon suite, looking around with weighing eyes. He has been noticing her all the way. How her eyes wandered towards every building, every details from where ever they passed, like she was trying to etch everything on the diaries of her memories. He liked that she was enjoying this trip as much he was enjoying though for slightly different reasons.

He went after her into lobby that was quite like a usual balcony but this one was covered with glass, enabling the person to enjoy the scenic beauty of London and yet shielding them from the cold winds.

She was so immersed in the skyline which presented before her eyes that she didn't notice when he came and stood beside her.

"So what is our plan of action after this?" She later realized how her words seem appropriate rather for a business meeting but not when she trying to strike up a conversation with her newly wedded husband for the first time. But then he should done it. She already had had her shares of being the first one to say 'hi' or 'what's up?' in past.

"Well I guess right now you must be tired because of the jet lag and long hours of travelling. So I'll advice you to take a nap for an hour or two. And for the plan of action... We have 2 days stay in London, we leave on 3rd day's morning. So I selected a few places that are on must-visit list as per few friends like London eye, Madame Tussauds, Tower bridge. Of course you must be knowing them, Miss. Architect" He paused to see her reaction "And that reminds me, I have already booked tickets at Natural History museum, Tate modern and science museum. I thought you might be more interested to go to museums than amusement parks" He concluded with a smile.

The specific Mayank sharma smile, disarming, mesmerizing and honest. Smile that could stop heartbeats. At least that was what I used to think. Since a long long time. Maybe still do.

She was really very much surprised that he took pains to plan all that out and keeping in mind about her likes dislike. Taking a deep breath she nodded. More to herself than him. "Okay. I'll just go and change then, maybe take a nap." She turned around to leave but stopped "Thanks.". She said and turned around almost fleeing away from there. She must not let the ghost of past haunt her now.

He watched her till she walked towards washroom and vanished inside. Closing his eyes he leaned over the railing. Flashes started appearing in jumbled order. He didn't remembered how old were the memories, maybe about 7 years ago. He was sitting in the party hall with his cousin Uday and her brother Samrat. Uday was around his age and Samrat being even younger than her was almost like a kid to him. They were discussing their college and school lives. For a change, he was being interrogated by Samrat regarding studies and not girls. And he saw her, not for the first time; hell he knew she was daughter of Bhushan's since he was a kid, but really saw her in person after a long time. Nupur was coming out from girls room along with Dia and Gunjan, Uday's sisters and few more girls from his known clan.


Her eyes downcast, hair half clutched at back of her head, still few rebel tendrils made their way out to frame her face. He wondered, how come someone can stand out uniquely even when surrounded by people? Other second he knew the answer himself. She wasn't really part of that crowd. While all other girls were busy talking to each other animatedly she stood beside Dia, holding her hand and thinking to herself. She did smile, a small one, every time someone called her. She seem depressed. And then it happened. She looked up running a gaze around the hall and at once stopped at him. He didn't remember what he was saying to Samrat at that moment. There must have been something wrong with his face, for her eyes widened with horror and she again went back to looking at floor. Next moment he felt huge urge to look into mirror because all of sudden she had flushed all over, shuffling on her feet. He was sure now, he must have been looking something really horrible.


Another flash back was from a movie hall. About 6 years ago, he guessed. They, Samrat, Dia, Gunjan, Uday, Nupur and himself, were out for an evening together. He only remembered the feel of a mere brush of her hand, while he passes her popcorn. He wasn't able to catch the look in those eyes because Gunjan was sitting between them. He somehow knew that arrangement was forced by her, maybe he still seemed scary to her.

The next image had him sitting beside her on dining table, the same evening. He still remembered how he had tricked Gunjan and forced her to sit with Samrat instead of Nupur, while he slipped beside Nupur, with him on one side and Dia on other side. He sensed she was getting uncomfortable, but he couldn't let go of this opportunity. Few 'accidental' brush of hands, bump of knees and overhearing her little conversations with Dia were satisfying enough for him. Maybe my actions weren't too convincing that Dia had asked me"Mayank, what is up with you? Why are you falling off your chair over Nupsie?"

"I am trying to overhear your girly talks sis. Since you both would rather talk to each other and not to all of us." He had pointed towards other four people on table except Nupur and Dia. His answer was honest, though lame. Her voice was soft on ears, much like a whisper in storm of other voices all around. He was just innocently trying to hear more of it.

"How shameless? how could you so simply admit that you were 'overhearing' us? Anyway, that's not the word for it!" Dia retorted back, her voice taking a teasing tone.

"Really? so what would the correct word be Miss Dia Bose?"

"Find it for yourself! Mr. I-sold-my-manners!" She threw it back at me with a wink.

I was trying to give her my standard 'you-will-see' stare when Nupur turned a bit towards me, not yet looking at me, and said "Eavesdropping."

I was surprised to see her talking to me. Surprised and dumbstruck. Did I mentioned Pleased? But I was confused for I had lost the track of argument."What?"I asked somewhat dazed. Then it happened for the second time. Her eyes..

She looked up and met his stare. "You were eavesdropping on us?"

Soft. Her voice was just like a feather brush. That tranquil expression and glossy eyes, they felt like they were exclusively for him. He smiled sheepishly at her. "You don't mind it? do you?" Maybe he had imagined but it seemed like her eyes changed colour with in a moment. Gone was that girl who just talked to him and back was the girl who seemed scared of him all over again. Her face yet again turned crimson much like the curtains of the restaurant.

He clearly remembered how they used to chat on phone or another means after that day. He had tried conversing asking about her studies, later on family. Even asked names in her list of boyfriends, by which she had at first been offended and then which had politely declined to have any. He had even went on about how he was thinking of having girlfriend now, in desperate attempts to seek her interest, which never really came.

Images that occurred after this were mostly with her at some distance sitting with Dia or Gunjan or Samrat or her mother or anyone else but him. He knew that their usual chatter had died short after it started, since he got into job, because those days he had been stressed for his future and hadn't talked to much of people for a long time. But till the time he decided to come back out in world she had gone back deeper into her shell. She actually had stopped coming on family gatherings and had avoided all kind of social activities, even with Gunjan and Dia. He never came to know the reason. He thought they had become friends, may not be good-friends, but friends none the less...

Now fate has turned tables on them. Or else why in world full of girls, his parents had chose her, daughter of a family friend. Not that he was complaining.


Now that she was his wife, he was all the more curious and determined to fell her walls for once and for all. He wanted to find reasons for her being locked inside a shell and was sure enough looking forward to eliminate them too.

She woke up to find him still lingering in balcony. With his eyes closed and sweet smile cradled on his lips, maybe remembering some long lost good days. Or maybe some long lost friend. Or love. That hurt. Went deep inside cutting like a knife, sliced open some bitter wounds, that never quite healed. She wondered why he married her when he could have married his love, Chavi, about whom Dia had told her. She had decided never to get married. Architecture was enough of a commitment for her.

But Mayank could have married Chavi, but he didn't. The knowledge made her uneasy..

Next chapter: Chapter 2

Edited by The-chosen-one - 12 years ago
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too good!! continue soon 😊
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too good!! continue soon 😊

Hi, just updated.. :) You may refer the first post again.. all updates will now be posted in same post from now on..
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Updates will now be posted in the first post only... Blue is the latest updated part :)
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Previous chapter: Chapter-1

CHAPTER 2(a)

London eye seemed a neutral affair for him. He had been there twice a times. About her experience he could only guess with horror and unease clouding her expressive eyes, wasn't as good as he anticipated.

London's eye is the one of the most prominent element of London's skyline. A Ferris wheel that takes its occupants to height of 135m, giving them exquisite view of London city's famous landmarks, many in one glance, as much as up to 40 km radius on clear sky day. She kept remembering as much of facts as she knew about the horror ride she was taking. She had mild batophobia- fear of heights. Mild enough to let her tour mountain terrains but not, as she figured out quite recently- 10th minutes ago to be precise, to let her relax when she is hanging in mid air with Mayank sharma and one more couple, in a cabin huge enough to occupy 20 more people. The total weight of the wheel and capsules is 2,100 tonnes - or as much as 1,272 London black cabs. She wondered if it ever had broken down. Each rotation takes about 30 minutes, meaning a capsule travels at a stately 26cm per second, or 0.9km (0.6 miles) per hour - twice as fast as a tortoise sprinting; allowing passengers to step on and off without the wheel having to stop. She glanced at him and caught him looking intently at her, this time it didn't made her blush alike older times, whenever he starred at her. The 32 capsules on the London Eye are representative of the 32 London boroughs, and each one weighs as much as 1,052,631 pound coins. Despite there only being 32 capsules, for superstitious reasons they are numbered 1 to 33. For good luck number 13 is left out. She wondered if her birth date- 13, December had anything to do with this fact. Maybe she should tell him beforehand, in case she faints or worse throws up.

"Nupur are you alright?"

She stared for a moment and shook her head. "My head is spinning". He stared at her. "I feel dizzy and..", gulping the last knot of hesitation she said "I have phobia of being on heights"

It took him 2 seconds to widen his eyes and say "oh!"

"I feel sick."

"Oh."

"I am sorry" she said looking at her hands embarrassed.

"Oh." He thought she must thinking of him as an insensitive jerk who couldn't speak any other word." No! No! No needs to be sorry"

He looked around as if searching for something. Maybe an emergency exit to throw her out. She thought.

"Okay. Just relax. No need to panic. We'll do something." He said more to himself then to her. "Just. Just don't look outside, close your eyes and lay your head back."

She cursed herself. Maybe she shouldn't have ruined his mood. She wanted to tell him she was ok and he needn't worry, but couldn't. The circumference of the wheel is 424m (1.392ft) - meaning that if it were unravelled, it would be 1.75 times longer than the UK's tallest building - One Canada Square in Canary Wharf.

He smacked his head virtually. He could have asked her first, if she wanted to come here at all. But he wanted to make her trip memorable, like she would now ever forget how he put her through this misery. He chided himself. He must do something to put her at ease, or maybe divert her mind from feeling sick. He had an idea, but wasn't sure if it should be executed or not.

Nupur did as he said, laying her head on headrest, she took deep breaths, trying to calm down. If she could control this in earlier times, then she could do that now too. The London Eye can carry 800 people.. She felt something. Not the bubbling in her stomach, but a feathery touch. She froze. It was soft, warm, hesitant yet daring. His fingers sent a jolt through the body, right from the spot where his finger-tips rested on back of her hand to very end of her toes.

His hand moved, cautiously covering her small one with his relatively huge. He squeezed her hand, letting her know he was there, with her, by her side. The movement of her eyes didn't go unnoticed by him, even under her eyelids. Her eyes squeezed rhythmically with increasing movement of his hand. Her trembling eyelids spoke of her dilemma whether to open her eyes or not. He hoped she wouldn't or he may not be able to continue. His hand moved further to turn her hand in her lap, palm facing upwards, this time grazing his fingers on her palm in random patterns. She seemed a bit relaxed now, maybe she fell asleep, for the lines on her forehead had vanished and face no longer held any expression, that gave away her easiness or discomfort. He traced the lines of the natural criss-cross of her hand, darker ones first then moving on to lighter ones. Soon after he ran out of lines to trace, he started etching alphabets, because he still didn't felt like letting go of her hand, now that he had been able to hold it for once.

"N" she said in her head. "U" she was liking this new sensation of playing the old game of 'read-the-touch' with him. "P" She guessed the following already. "U". "R" she felt victorious in that little moment, before he started etching some more. "M". "A". "Y" she knew it again. "A". "N". "K". Again, she won. He went on "S". "H". "A". "R". "M". "A". "Nupur Mayank sharma" She couldn't help but smile on his little tryst.

He thought she had slept, but then she had this beautiful smile on her face and her eyes opened the other instant. He noticed her face had the same tint of colour he knew when she was scared of him, but this time she didn't look horrified or even offended. It was confusing, but he was happy that he was successful in diverting her mind off her fears. Dude, She even smiled at you. He smiled back at her, feeling a flutter in his body. Butterflies? Yuck! That was a girl thing. Oh maybe he was hungry, yes he must be hungry. But he didn't feel hungry. Ok, this was not good. Confusion in head is not good for a man with a working chunk of brains.

"Are you feeling any better now?" he remembered, it was least naturally human thing he could ask.

"Yes." She said looking down, remembering how he went out of his way to do 'non-Mayank- sharma' things to make her feel 'better'. Only she knew what all that made her feel.

Edited by The-chosen-one - 12 years ago
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Damn! i thought no-one will notice 😆
yeah.. kind of coming back.. i missed writing and forums.. so.. just trying :P
if you are voldy i gotta be your enemy right 😉

missed you my ak12 😊


Why wont anyone notice? Of course they would!! And why would you not PM your readers is beyond me, D!😲

Anyway, I'm sorry for doing this so late; I had exams. The point is this is awesome. Drama or not, you write so flawlessly, so naturally, I envy you! :P

The story already has me curious and anxious for more and more and if you leave this UNFINISHED I will kill you (virtually).

I'm so glad you decided to come back and try writing here again. Believe it or not, I had stopped having the butterflies for MN for a long time now. And this story of yours brings me back to it all. I feel like a teenager all over again!

Once again, sister, you are awesome at this. This genre, is where you rock. You're subtle, and you never overdo it and you make me feel evrything and I love you for it. I missed reading you terribly, your stories, your one shots...everything!!! I hope you continue this one till the very end!!

Love and hugs!
You-Know-Who...(BEWARE the chosen one!)
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super👍🏼

thanks akanksha for the pm😊

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