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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 5: The Charmed one truth

"Jiji! Stop this alarm!! Ugh!! What the hell is it?" Khushi and Payal had been living in Raizada mansion for a week now and they had the weird feeling from this house at the starting but slowly they got used to it and they were very fond of Anjali. Anjali became like their third sister. She was so nice and bubbly but her brother Arnav was Arnav. Being all stubborn and the person who thinks he only could rule and Khushi disliked him but she didn't showed it to anyone except Payal but Payal told her not to do anything as it would effect her and the job as they are doing work for him. Everything was going great but Khushi was pissed, she was hell bent to kill that person who made her wake up in the morning. "Jiji!! What is this?" Khushi said getting up from the bed and found her sister peaking from the curtain. "Khushi Arnavji told me that there is some witch in the house and right now Anjali and Arnav are trying to fight. I know why Anjali is unaffected by the witch powers but why is Arnavji not affect by witch powers. That witch is trying her best, throwing her every strongest attack but he is unaffected." "Oh that!! It is because there is some shield going on from generations in Raizada family where man gets this shield. It is very powerful but it is very weak too because it is very old. Haye Devi Mayya!! I should go help him before that shield breaks." Khushi ran out of the room before Payal could stop her and before Payal knew it they both were standing in front of Anjali and Arnav like their protectors. "What are you guys doing over here? I told you to stay in room. You know she is dangerous!!" Arnav said trying to move them from the way but they were like stuck to the ground and eventually they were. Arnav rolled his eyes when he saw this. "Don't roll your eyes OK. And we are not that weak than you think OK" "Aaahhh the witches!! Shame on you! Helping the hunter to protect him" Witch said when she sensed that they both have powers too and witch also felt some powerful power that made her scared but she didn't let her show it on her face. "I see you are scared from inside. Come on!! What are you going to do now? Kill us. Let me tell you that you are one and we are two of them well actually I could take you with my magic easily too." "Move you guys!!!" Arnav tied to push them but as soon as Arnav touched them Khushi pushed him with his magic powers and he went flying and sat on the sofa and out of no where the curtains came and tied him. "What the f**k Payal let me go" "What I didn't do anything Khushi..." Payal suddenly stopped and Anjali and Arnav were shocked to here that. That means these witches lied to them. Arnav was hell angry at them but he couldn't do as Khushi tied him to the sofa. "You made my game easy to kill that Anjali now." "Oh please I'm sure you can't even touch her and I would love to kill you but we not like the bad, nasty, ugly witches like you so I don't want to be mean but I will trap you. Yes I will trap you." "Witch can't trap witches you little witch" "Khushi she is not lying" Khushi just ignored her sister and replied the witch showing her angry eyes which sure made witch scared "We will see about that" and with that witch didn't knew what came to her and it her so hard that she turn into a smoke and in another moment on Khushi's palm the small glass bottle appeared and she opened and the smoke find it way to go in the bottle and witch was trap. To say Anjali and Arnav was shocked was an understatement. When everything was done Khushi moved her hand towards Arnav commanding curtains to leave Arnav and they instantly left him and Arnav got up and it truly showed that he was mad at them and he was walking towards Khushi when unexpectedly he fell on the sofa again but this time he went to sleep. "OMG Chottey!!" Anjali ran towards Arnav and hold his face "Payalji.. Humara matlab hai Khushi ji inhe kya ho gaya? Chottey uthye na" Anjali was concerned for his chottey and that didn't go unnoticed by Khushi "Anjaliji don't worry I just did a forget spell on him and he will wake up in 2 minutes and he will only remember what I will tell him. Since the day we were here he doesn't know how we met or anything so don't worry." And at that exact time Arnav woke up and he was confused to see to ladies standing over there "Hi I am Khushi. The charmed one you have been looking for. We just got here and it is nice to meet you. I hope you protect me good. " Arnav was shock to hear that and turn his head to his Di who just smiled at him and that assured him that everything is fine.

Note: I'm pretty upset because of the new entry that is about to come in #IPKKND 😭and that sure made me sad. I know you guys would be like relax and I will be relax but I keep thinking that the fighting will lead to divorce😭 and I don't think that will happen as LM status told us the "sun will rise"😊 but still I have doubts in my mind and in my heart😭. I hope as Shyam used to bring them closer this brings this closer too. I hope everything will turn out to be fine. I hope you liked my update although I didn't liked it as I don't think it's my best one. I'm upset so I'm so sorry and think the fighting would have been awesome if I have been described it more. Hmmm well have fun reading it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS on your first ever writing!! (:

I really loved it as its your first fanfiction. Well I still have tons of loop holes that I'm hoping will get cleared up when the story blends in with more chapters & secrets revealed.

Awesome! The idea of a new perspective of having witches & hunters is great :D
Different from the always common "similar on the show" tracks that people write based upon.

Cool what's in that witch book, I so wanna know. Also the secret about how a charmed one is connected to a Raizada girl has gotten me going bananas. So does that me when Arnav <3 & Anjali's ancestors killed all those charmed ones, the Raizada girls became extinct along with them?
Yes, silly question that was you can say but I'm just scratching my head here!


The mini notes you've made, it's a lovely idea where you say a little but please...can you not say what we might find confusing or what we haven't understood, yourself cuz because of that there isn't much that I can comment with here =P #justpullingyourlegA

Keep up this great new hobby of yours, improves everything! (;
thank you for the PM's!!!

PS. You haven't updated in a while dude, where's the rest of the story that's gonna bind my holes? Quick :P

PPS. How'd you find the episode yesterday, I don't find anyone better than you who I'd discuss it with! ): Miss the old talks A... (November 5th)

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