SS: Magnetism {Chap 4 PREVIEW Pg 24} 05/06/13

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neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Love the start. I'm guessing that it's going to be daggers drawn from the start!

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Breath-Mark

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Liked it ! She is a nerdy one here.
So let's see how they start off from the bump.
Do update soon. 😛

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

dear continue soon and pm me dear

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Khadija

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Nice character sketch Ghausia! Count me in when you do PM next. I like Part 1 as it sets the whole scene and setting of the story. Oh, Khushi kinda sounds like me here...knowing who to talk to and who not to. I also joined college thinking I'll just study and leave without any drama. Life has other plans. Aha, bumping into Arnav! Interesting 😊

One more thing Year 12 externals means 12th grade, American system yeah? Sorry not familiar with other systems.

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Nehasupnfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

YESSS!!! An update! I like the idea of a school romance!! :) Thank you for the PM!! :) Can't wait to read more... :)

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ArHiLover-x

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Fab start!! I loved it, do continue!

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Sia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: SaRunLicious
I loved this! A great start 👏
So ASR as always is the suave, rich but arrogant type! Me likes! 😉 and Khushi, all innocent! Wanna see how their first takraar will be 😃

Eagerly awaiting the next update! 😊

Thank you! Arre yaar, can ASR ever be anything other than that? 😆

You'll find out soon enough 😉

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Sia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Aveiro
Great start!

Ahhh so she doesn't want any drama!

I feel for her she's going to get stuck with Mr Arnav

Thank you!

😆 I know right?! Poor Khushi, getting caught in this web of drama after wishing so badly for things to be different!

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Sia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Shariqa_here
GHAUSIA..THAT WAS MINDBLOWING UPDATE! LOVED IT HUNN!

oK now calming down..I really loved the way you described everything. I could picturize all this well. The speed dating game was an icing on the cake! And Khushi bumped into ASR Wow...how cool is that?

This is insane but you have coincidently put something in this ch that I am putting in my next ch. LOL

Anyway absolutely loved it! And can't wait for you to continue.

Thank you Shariqa! 😳

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted it all to seem as real as possible, hence the long introduction of Khushi's first day.

Oh, the speed dating... officially the worst ice-breaker of all time when you're in a room full of socially awkward students! 😆

Khushi bumping into ASR... yeh toh hona hi tha 😉

Oh wow, that's awesome! Great minds think alike! 😆

Thank you!

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Sia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: diva.deluxe
Aww hi hi hi^^
I'm so looking forward to this one, Ghasia!
It sounds like a teenage-story, which I always enjoy!

I had this huge smile plastered on my face when I read the last part about Khushi bumping into someone's chest. ASR's :D I'm really looking forward to the interaction between them. Please tell me that Khushi won't just run away from him. I hope they'll exchange a few glances, or maybe even a few words?😳

Hehe it is a teenage story 😊

Bechari 16-year-old Khushi bumping into Laad Governor ASR... 😆

Now that would be telling 😉