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Posted: 12 years ago

Arnav leaned against the doorframe, looking out at his garden and reflected on Anjali's words. The emptiness inside him, the feeling of loneliness, of being incomplete was always with him but never more so than now.


A rough gust of wind swept through his garden retreat. It jolted awake the plants which had fallen into a soothing slumber in the cool Delhi night before swirling around Arnav reminding him of his own humanity.


If Di was right, were these lonely nights coming to an end? Would he have a companion, a friend to sit beside him and fill the ache in his heart? Would she soothe his bruised soul with gentle kisses and loving words?🤗


But how could he give so much power to someone else? How could he let his happiness, his existence and his world rest in someone else's palm? I THINK WE ALL ASK THIS QUESTION BEFORE MARRYING SOMEONE I KNOW I DID



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'Khushi, only a crazy man would marry you.'😆


Khushi knew exactly the kind of man she wanted to marry. A man who would know the value of small gestures; a man who would appreciate a saree worn just for him, would buy her packets ofchanne on his way home from work and eat the heaps of jalebis she would make him with a smile on his face.🤗


She gazed up at the stars, wondering if her deceased parents already knew who she would marry. Perhaps they were watching him at this very moment, checking to see if he was suitable for their daughter. VERY TOUCHING


Perhaps he was in Lucknow this very minute waiting for her. Maybe she would meet him as soon as tomorrow, when they finally returned?

THIS WAS FAB CAN'T BELIEVE U R HV STOPPED HERE 😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a brilliant Nayika Ending Shu. Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Uhh :/ Vryy mch hurt nd disappointd.. arshi didn' meet till the last :/
Kuming 2 chap wise responses.. 4th 1 wz totally unxpctd fr me.. the gal whose appointment letter fell down wz khushi and thn the gal who got the job in AR wz Sonia.. !)
5th ws adorable yarr.. arnav nd khushi in their own lala land.. waiting nd thinking bout their imagionary cmpanions .. !)
Luvdd itt :P With lil bit of angst too :/
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love how you potrayed the first five meetings! LOVED ❤️
Kaash this had happened in that show #DreamyLook
Thankoo far tha PM
-V
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Posted: 12 years ago
nicely done!

loved all 5.. you brought back the best moments.. and angst,, gussa.. chalaki and shaitaani!

Especially the last video... it still makes me chuckle!!

Ahh they have come a long way...

Thanks for writing this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
U have no idea how much i love this...cant wait for them to meet...Thank You😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hate to think that they did not meet...they missed meeting their soulmates and the worst part is they would never have known about it and regretted like us now regretting!! OH..it is a scary thought..

The 'Tu hi bata mere maula' verse was so apt for these snippets...

Great writing..


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Posted: 12 years ago
Great end to a great series. By the way I love the episode links they remind me why I love these characters soo much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
This brought me down memory lane but with your own style
I love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey ...Loved it..
while reading ur post I recalled all the moments. I felt like I'm in that place...
Loved it

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