KR SS | *Childhood Romance* (Ch 1 to Ch 4)

Nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Nice prologue and please pm me when you continue :D

Nikki <3

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Ameena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

The prologue was Superb 😃...

Kria a 'Tomboyish girl' falling for Rey 😉...

It is really interesting...

Loved the concept ❤️...

Continue soon...

N do pm me 😊.

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

loved it...

but u already know it...

matlab literally here it is ppl are keeping me at gunpoint for the comment... *rolling eyes*

chal tereko tareef sunni hai na??

le sun...

loved it... fir se...

awesome...

a nice concept...

the description u gave for the characters especially the words u used for it... were so apt ...

rey ko pakka pata hoga kria ke existence ke baare mein...

but couldn;t come in terms with it...

lets see what u have in store for us...

waiting for it...

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BedOfRoses

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: kriyansh24
loved it...

but u already know it...

matlab literally here it is ppl are keeping me at gunpoint for the comment... *rolling eyes*

chal tereko tareef sunni hai na??

le sun...

loved it... fir se...

awesome...

a nice concept...

the description u gave for the characters especially the words u used for it... were so apt ...

rey ko pakka pata hoga kria ke existence ke baare mein...

but couldn;t come in terms with it...

lets see what u have in store for us...

waiting for it...

Like you already don't know! 😉 😆

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

apparently ending mein difference hain apan donon ki...

plus ab tune comment karne ko kaha hai so thoda toh comment jaisa banana padega na usee...

u know like what i am expecting and la..

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BedOfRoses

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: kriyansh24
apparently ending mein difference hain apan donon ki...

plus ab tune comment karne ko kaha hai so thoda toh comment jaisa banana padega na usee...

u know like what i am expecting and la..

Bhaiya mujhse jyada expectations mat rakhna.

Cause you know I'm a sadists.

Kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar sakti hun.

Plus, abhi tak mere dimaag mein puraani waali ending hi hai! 😛 😳

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

doob ja mar ja chullu bhar paani mein...

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BedOfRoses

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Arey what can I do in that.

Practically socho toh it is a perfect end! :P

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vaishali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

practically padhna hota toh fiction nhi padhti main...

haan nhi toh...

plus tujhe na jute padenge uss end ke liye...

and plzz spamming ke liye partner leya...

aise akele karti hai toh mereko accha nhi lagta... that u r doing so much..

ek toh likes bhi kam ho gaye inne... 🥺

and u gotta comment now

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BedOfRoses

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Arey..

Chalo jab end par pauncheinge tab dekheinge