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tokyo

@tokyo

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Just loved it. Waiting for the next update.

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shillu.arshi

@shillu.arshi

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow ria dalg this is ur first writings..

It is really awesom dear all the best🤗

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preetika

@baRunmYlove21

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Ria i am really proud of u darling ..Its an amazing start u know ???😳😳😳
And also the character sketch was awesome and the story is quite diff 😊
what ?? ASR N KHUSHI separeted ??
why ??? we will now the reason at last ?? wow !! nice one ..😊
and NK is here too 😆😆😆😆, khushi needs NK on her date 🤣
Lolzz eagerly waiting for the next update 😳
Love u ria 🤗

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Raksha

@mizzraksha712

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

lovelly !!!
interesting storyyy =D
continue soon ^_^

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Pooja

@pooja_shineStar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Beautiful part...the start is superb...continue soon..

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neha

@nehusashhh

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awsum ria!!!!!

i cant wait 2 read more!! sumthin new!

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

awesome start

loved the flashback

really want to read more

continue soon

thanx for the pm

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Avi64

@Avi64

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

great yaar! Love Love Love ASR!
and Kriti's just adorable! when she said unbelievable I couyldn't help but laugh... yas! Artnav's daughter i exclaimed!
continue soon!