Wheels Of Fortune Thread #2 Chap 11 Updated pg 47 - Page 28

Originally posted by: sweetshab

awesome update shana!

Loved it :D
Aah aah ye docs saarey churailshi ki paksh main lagte hai bar bar mere princey ka dil toot toot jana hai...:(
Aww princey regretting loving his wife unconditionally believing manya to be his manyata :(
And the apology ..</3
UV cant stand the mere thought of his manya to be with any1 else ..
Aww manya is soo loving cannot see UV downfall coz of her

Yeh dono ek duje ko beinteha mohabbat karte hai..shaksiyat se nahi roohaniyat se ..and u still give them pain and separation in abundance :(
poor UV his world is turned upside down
Ishq ne pal mein badal di meri saari duniya
Main ne dekha k meri zaat na thi pehli si ...
and the worst situation he cannot share his pain

Unnzie to dada's rescue ..
But manya marrying any1 else beside UV ..iski ijazat UV ka dil nahi dega..:(
Soon rajparivar to arrive dat will be shocking surprise to the devgarh family

Cont soon

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Shana u broke my heart. I know Manya is manyata but phir vi fake DNA report woh vi dobara. I guess vikram is a good person now. Manya has still a long way to go. Amazing update cont soon

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

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Okay shana I have so much to say that I feel my fingers are moving slowly
I was waiting so I could switch on my lappy 2moro and then comment on this beautiful piece of writting but I just could not resist so I am typing though my phone and that is the reason I have not yet liked it but I promise to like it 2moro actually I have LOVED it in my heart
Coming to this wonderful piece of writing I don't have enough words to praise u okay let me try to find words to praise u enough WONDERFUL WORK, FANTASTICALLY WRITTEN, BEAUTIFULLY POTRAYED EMOTIONS, AMAZINGLY EXECUTED , ADORBALEY THOUGHT , and last but not the least MIRACULASLY AWESOME PIECE OF WRITING
And shana all those words above are still sounding like understatements when it comes to ur work
Okay now as the doctor said manya is not manyata and we as an audience know that manya is manyata and I know that will be revealed later on for sure I TRUST UR BIG BRAIN SHANA and I don't mind this manya and manyata confusion it adds spice to the story and manveer can also consist of man for manya ( see the connection between names lolzz) though I love manyata too so I am good with all of them
Udayveer is now feeling all guilty but some where he knows he loves manya and does wants to get married to her also I mean I know he is super guilty but he better marry manya then marry MINAKSHI
I loved the brother sister relationship and the way u write makes me feel the way I am actually watching the scene infront of my eyes that sometimes I fail to remember whether I read or watch the scene I love ur writing did I ever tell u that u are my inspiration in writing U ROCK BIG TIME
I am very happy that manya agreed to stay in udayveer's place and I LOVED the fact that she rejected the proposal of udayveer that did so many things
A) it made udayveer respect her more
B) it made her gain self respect
C) it showed udayveer that manya is NO ordinary girl I mean if I put myself in the boots of manya I also would have never agrred for the marriage
Now coming to the precap which for me personally was the highlight of the film in the true sense
First of all shana I would really like to thank u for taking up my request for jealous uday ( he will really rise the trps lolzz)
Now I love vikramjeet I imagine him as karan tacker and I love him and he and manya would make a great pair I can't ask for a threesome so I would like manveer better
I am done with my comment shana hope u like it lolzzz
Loved this work
Thanks for PM
LOvE U MUAH