IPKKND SS: Droplets {Chap 1 - 8} #2 link PG 146

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medha

@medha16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

a powerful update!

oho!so the husband is akash!!!

i hope arnav n akash dont turn out to be brothers!!!

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Another amazing update !

Haa !! So I thought right ! HEr hubby had to be Shyaam or Aakash !
And the talk with Arnav, has given her a hell lot of courage !

And the way she puts it right in front of him, that simple !
Loved it !

And the ending ! Thunder inside and outside the house !

Loving the way you are taking this Liya !

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#373

here i was scared it wd be shyam but akashhh!!!

wow

amazing

missed arnav

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@PersieV

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Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
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For Part 2: Tears-

Vivid imagery. These two words popped in my head while I was reading your update. I could imagine everything as if it was happening right before my eyes. 👏. If that is not good writing then I don't know what is.

You really think I write well! Saachi? Really? :O Sniffs thanks <3

Next the connect. When it is there it is there. Two strangers who don't know each other seek and provide support. That was beautifully done dear.

Thanks! Experience helps at times when it comes to writing 😆

I am not as interested in knowing who Khushi's husband is as I am in knowing how will Arnav and Khushi meet next.

Well go to part 3 and you will see who her husband is ;) Next meeting erm that will be soon. I plan to have a meeting in every chapter

Sorry for the late edit. I know I must sound selfish to you but this was the only leverage I had against you 😉

Haha! I edited FS ages ago! And I even told you but you just didn't notice my comment in the CC

Thanks for commenting