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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Wonderful update :) Thanks for the PM :)

Loving the progress you're showing in Khushi and I really hope she can overcome the pain which she has gone through in the past few months.
Lets see what the next chapter has in store for us :) Update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Simply breathtaking! I know Arnav has wronged Khushi in an inhuman way, but I cannot help feeling a little sad for him too! I wonder if Khushi will have it in her heart to forgive him and make a life with him! Sigh!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Amazing Update... Sach..😉

want to see mushy Arnav..😳

though i know he deserved but cant able to tolerate tears in those chocolate brown eyes...😭 😭 😭😭😭😭😭
Na na na...

Please let Khushi smile more...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Awww!!!such a cute update!!!
i totally loved it!!
n thanks sooo much for the long update!!!
muuuaaacks!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Congrats for the new thread...was waiting for the chapter and it was worthy the wait...khushi after a long time has started speaking eventhough it was a mono syllable...Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
"Sach" - finally Khushi spoke... Perfect like always. Enjoy reading your updates!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Arnav is repenting good ...

1.Khushi slept peacefully in his arms,

2. She nodded when he talked her

3. she turned and look at him

4. even he tried to hide his tears, she finds his tear in his eyes...repent(I am confused)...Oh God she is really an angel she don't want to see his tears.Love you Khushi

5.Sach...a word

6.Smile

7. tears...

Improving her condition and she is really waiting for her baby and she wants it...

One doubt isn't indication for future that LET HER MOVE AWAY IF SHE WANTS... means he will give her full right to take a decision if her family asks her back and leave him... hopefully she won't leave him...slowly but she will forgive him...

No need to say amazing update Zehra.Thanks for long update.Thanks Kurup too her haar naam per 😆.I must say thanks for giving such a long update for us as a 4th thread treat.Lovely treat like it very much.Thanks for PM.Eagerly waiting for next update.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
She finally spoke! That was such a strong moment and really well written. I do think Anjali might be the best thing to happen to Khushi at this point
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
ah.! it was beautiful,!
and the most touching moment was when
he hugged her inorder to welcome his sleep.!
it was wonderful. do continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A red rose which got trampled, even before it got a chance to bloom. Such a beautiful, powerful line. When Arnav cried, I felt a bit teary eyed too. And when Khushi lifted her fingers to his tears, I think that nanosecond he might have stopped breathing, or what they say the heart might have stopped beating to absorb the beauty of that tiny moment. And now I feel Khushi has fallen into this habit, a dependence on Arnav to do those tiny things for her. And she is responding, slowly, but still. Forgive for looking too much into things, but this chapter was terrifically written, and beautiful. Thank you for the PM!:)

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