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melanie

@Black_kittykat

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Surprise for Khushi, could it be the Gupta family come to see her 😃

Khushi is improving so much & now starting to converse with Arnav is such a big step for her. Loved the way Arnav is understanding her & encouraging her to feel free to do what she wants. Khushi & Anjali's bond is getting more stronger by the day. Khushi has indeed found an elder sister in Anjali.

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#392

Amazing. I loved the jalebi making part.one thing that make me glued to ur story is its unpredictability.it is becoming more and more interesting.i love every bit of it.you are doing an awesome job.keep it up!!!!!!!thnks 4 pm.can i ask u how many more chapters r left of this ss??the reason i m asking this question is that i want to read full ss again and again.i m crazy fan of ur this ss.to b honest i dont want this ss to end ever.enough of my blabering.thanks once again 4 writng this fantastic ss.

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Sanj

@-Sanj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#393

Awsome Update...loved it...Finally khushi bolne lag gayi...Room me khushi ko na Pake Arnav kitna Dar gaya par acha hai usne khushi ko chilaya nahi aise bina bataye jane ke liye...aur Khushi kitchen me Jalebis bana rahi thi aur bhi Roh rahi thi kyunk usse jalebiya nahi ban rahi thi...Par usne khayi kyun nahi...Arnav Khushi bahut care kar raha hai...Anjali is very Sweet...kya Suprise hoga khushi ke liye...waiting for the next update...

Edited by SanjArShi-ASR - 12 years ago

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#394

I saw it updated in my posts today n i read it didnt received any pm yet but i just loved the update i cant say anything wht she should do with arnav ... The part tht she couldnt make jalebis was touchy n when she said tht she dont want to eat felt so bad... I hope its her parents

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#395

thanks for the pm love
both the chapters were fantastic, the length just perfect
there was this one bit that I absolutely loved, the way he pulled her on top of him, locked her in his embrace and slept peacefully but then when he woke up he actually gave her the chance to pull away, move off of him and that was the most beautiful thing for me.
also how she has started interacting with anjali is endearing.

the jalebis bit had me smiling, such a sweet encouraging gesture.

and even if her family had been wanting to give the Money back since long ago, they still did sell her off to a man they barely knew. there's no forgiveness for a sin like that nor for the sin arnav committed, the man should be in a mental institution for his actions but I do love khushi and if her future lies with that beast then forgiveness he shall receive.
cheers
sonia

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Milsha

@Dandelion.

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#396

RES

I miss reading this :'( Will find time to read and edit :)

Unres

10th chapter

It was very sweet how they both found peace in each other's arms. How sweet. And Khushi couldn't see tears in his eyes. That explains how much she loves him.

Khushi spoke! Yes! Finally. And that too for their baby. I hope Arnav keeps his promise.

11th Chapter

This chapter was very touching. How Khushi couldn't make jalebis and how Arnav reassured her that she can. It was very sweet😊

Sorry for late comment. I hope you have read my PM about my in-activeness due to my on-going exams.

Edited by BarunliciousGal - 12 years ago

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meettu

@meettu

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#397

Awsome update
khushi is getting bwtter day by day
bt arnav relationship wid di is not going good...

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#398

Loved the part. Specially the jalebi making one. Khusi was not able to make perfect one and finally she did. That's really lovely to include in the story. She started to speak to Arnav too now .
I don't know i am so divided now. One part i really really want Arnav to suffer a lot n more but in the other part seeing how Khusi act with him i guess his suffering will make Khusi suffer too. I just want Khusi to be normal and healthy again.
Was a GodBharai function coming up next.. I can't wait her family to some n meet her.