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Posted: 12 years ago
part 10
awesome...
Khushi is reacting...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
You always manage to move me with your updates on Unconditional. I get so emotional that every time after reading this ss, I have to take a break to compose myself in order to continue with my work further.
I'm tired of praising you. Every time I feel that you outdo yourself.

Just fabulous!
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Posted: 12 years ago
congo on the new thread zehra - excellent update dear - loved it to the bits
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all an Apology from me..
I know I havent commented after the 4th chapter that was dedicated to me and so am sorry for that..
PS :- Again Sorry for a Lengthy comment :D
[ Ho sakey tho maaf karna... AISE MEIN KABHI NAHI KAHOONGI :D ... because you got to read it *winks*] Pls dont think that I left it on the half way, it was all because of my class..My class resumed and had a tough time maintaining class studies etc.. so sorry for that!!!

Now to the most awaited which I craved for it like anything in these days...
I think its good that I went inbetween, so that I could read all the chapters continuosly without any wait... *winks*

for all this I just got 4 words to 2 people
first one to you -- I LOVE YOU DAMMIT .. FOR CONTINUING IT ...
second one to My Dearest AMAN -- *I LOVE YOU DAMMIT.. LOVE YOU SO MUCH !!!*
He is the STAR of this FF ... ONLY HIM ... !!! Am sorry to say this but in THIS FF Aman took over Arnav !!! [ It hurts me to say that some one taking over Arnav but afsos I had to say this *cries* *bangs the fist on the table * oouchh !!

So Aman was supposed to get married to Khushi but fate had a different story for them as Arnav - Khushi are meant to be with each other..
Here the Hero is an evil while all the rest characters are at their best and kind ones!

He raped her for the past three months made her into a living corpse without any mercy shown atleast did he bother that she too was a human being just like him...???
*sigh* ...!!!

He has committed a grave mistake to a lively soul of 18 ... shattered all her dreams ... can he amend the emotional and mental torture he gifted her ??? but then ''... agar sache dil se chaahe tho har kaam ho jaatha hain ...'' He is guilty for all his actions and is trying to amend them... and so my heart falls out for him... but then the Chapter 5th.. last part, that was really touchy ... Gosh it hurted me so much that it brought tears to my eyes... and again *angry glare at Arnav*

Now Its all upto Khushi to decide... I think she will forgive him because she is NOT Heartless as he is.. she can forgive her husband as he repents with wholeheart alot for his actions...

Lets see how it unfolds... just want the lively Khushi back and I want her to leave Arnav and go away but then its not possible as you have already mentioned * hamare Rajkumar * which means she had already dreamt of Arnav as her Prince Charming but hell sake had she ever knew that her Prince Charming would be a Rakshas ... ???

Zehra, even am confused of my feelings now... half of my mind says * Arnav repents alot for his misunderstanding so he needs to get Khushi back * but then thinking of what he has done makes me think * Arnav should never get such a Girl like Khushi who never meant to harm anyone * !!!!

Chapter 6 was the best of all... !!! Speechless👏 !!!

And a slow progress in Khushi because of family and a Baby!! A word after soo many torturous months *Sach* that shows how she loves the *unborn life* in her whomsoever its creator might be !!!
Anjali is always DUMB for the show but in this she is the true wife, a true woman, a true mother, and a TRUE SISTER !!! Her actions are fully justified.. Arnav deserves it !!! Khushi's actions makes me think that she has forgiven him, the last chapter (10) was touchy! How she slept, their conversation through emotions!!!

Zehra - Kya Kahoon Yaaar... *Jhapppiii*

Looking forward for the story to unfold... Continue soon... cant really wait for it... !!! Specially now when Arnav is all set to make her word *sach* a reality !!!

Congrats for thread 1...2...3... but 4 !!! 3 chapters in each thread !! Wohoo... !!!

PS:- Kurup agar tumne aise kasmein vaadein peheli hi kiya hotha tho hamesha hamein aisi updates milthe 😆... Anyways Thanks dear for that comment 😆
Love ya !
Edited by sanaroxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
God..i am so happy that finally khushi uttered a word..!!!! Excellent update dear..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
absolutly beautiful update...loved it ...hope arnav keeps true to his promise
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow i cried "such" continue soon.loved ur all update,so hearttouching.
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Posted: 12 years ago
PLEASHHH Continue Continueee 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
arnav was truely repenting.. and i luved this..The ever innocent khushi still cared for tears in arnav's eyes ..Aww was feeling sadi for khushi how she had almost lost her voice.. but really luved the silent saree choosing conversation.. And anji is really swt here, dev too... but what's between aman and anji.. one more rabba ve??? well i luv aman here so I'll b more than happy
sach hayeee
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh she finally spokee!! Thankk god.. I thought since she stopped talking she will forget she can even talk... But Awww the baby brought her voice back atleast.. now her own baby will bring her back.. Great updatee =)

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