ArHiCollabSS:The Mistake#2,#3 link- Completed

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#891

Suprb update...
They r so wild yaar...
Bt last part...Wats that??
Payal?? Who s she??
Ow she relatd 2 Arnav??
Whose baby s that??
Cntinue soon...

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Summer99

@Summer99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#892

To read this part i had to read all parts, really enjoyed it, i love ur way of writing and always need more

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#893

Just read all the chapters of The Mistake ...

hats off to all you beautiful girls ...

Loved each and every chapter ...

Thanks K for letting me know of this SS or rather FF ...

Who is Payal now and whose baby is she carrying ???

what a twist ... waiting for the next ... 😆

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fraser

@fraser

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#894

Fabulous part
luved it... Everything going smooth here until last line
m thinlking y not in this ff raizadas n guptas doing there famous wrk INTRUPTIONS ... I didnt by mistake my intution cms early
khushi is itched to beat arnav... If she link payal pregnency to arnav
funny cliffhanger
wait for nxt

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#895

whoa... they had quite a nt😳 who s payal and she s pregnant? and how does she know arnav?

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umama shahid

@umamashahid

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#896

I know it has nothing to do with arnav..prove me right plzzz

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#897

what the!!!

who is Payal? and why is she telling Arnav she is pregnant?

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maana

@maana

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#898

Yayy finally an update.. Superb

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Barun_Riti_LMH

@Barun_Riti_LMH

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#899

Lemme start frm end...
Same ques as others..
Ye payal kahan se aayi???
She iz pregnant!!!...dats ok but why she z screaming at Arnav???
Dnt temme arnav has to do sumthng with this...
Kya twist hai...fab...
And arnav khushi...it seems they are out of the world...
Loved the update...

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#900

OMG!!! lol what??
where did payal come from??
lets guess...she mayb friends with arnav and maybe pregnant with akash's kid or someone else's ,,,but khushi will misunderstand...right?? i dont know lol!

anyway,, once again u gave me proof of how well u can write intimate scenes!☺️