Originally posted by: ...navina...
Awesome update Andy, Very cute!š³ aw!!! thanks so much naviš³ Manveer's blooming love , them becoming more comfortable with each other ... displaying some very naughty traits were exceptional. Great writing Andy. i wasn't sure how it would be ... i am very 'inexperienced writing such things"
I remember in Joaw(bk1) , I also had Manyata call Uday a vampire as he used to bite her all the timeš. Reading your update now, reminded me of that , and it brought back some fine memoriesš³.i know... i never remembered that . i am really sorry about that
Oh God, Giriraj and Vasundra were too much. Poor , Shy Uday was getting so uncomfortableš!he he he, even i liked writing that partš
Manyata really is too wild here, Man, I can't believe how bold she was.he he he, i like to make her wild,,, who doesn't like a change I mean just that morning she asked Uday to turn the other way when she wanted to dress ... now suddenly, she stands naked in front of him - AND BLINDS HIMš”!he he you gave me the inspiration for that part š³ Felt sorry for Uday ... he came home tired and hungry; and instead of feeding her husband , Manyata is having other ideasš! manyta was "hungry" so she will have other ideas naš³š
Oh by the Way ... If I was in Manyata's position in the end, and my husband was not catching my double meaning sentences ... HE'D BE SLEEPING ON THE COUCH THAT NIGHTš”š¤¢!!!i pity that poor guy...š³š
Enjoyable update Andy, loved it to bits!thanks sooo much navi!!!
Thanks for the credit, though it was not required; U did it all by yourself.if you had not noticed manyta's dialogues were all your, silly girl. you deserve the credit
Do continue soonš.yep, posting a promo at the earliestš³
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