Arshi-o.s. Noon After their first Night**comp** - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shraddha honey wats ur intention darling ???
that was a really hot update but from Arnav it was xpected !!!!
he really is shameless !!!!

HP and Laxmi 🤣

loved the whole OS...u have made all GCGoans proud !!!!!
by the way paaws are u reading this...looks like ur sweetheart is quite wild 😉 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
kya baat hai shraddha!!!! loved it!!! ;) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tia.o

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#330000">Arnav is a virgin????????????????????????????????????????????? What the? To kya La ke saath Ludo khelta tha?</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#330000">Anyhoo... Arnie likes strawberry lip gloss... Lol... my gloss is strawberry. But Khushi should buy different flavours.\ Just to check...😉</font>



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don't know what he played,but i wanted him to be first loyal. .so Khushi was his first. .😛
and strawberry lip-gloss,that dialog is originally from the movie "kambakht ishq". .no credit to me. .😉
and Di,glad to know you too use strawberry gloss. .☺️[;)|
ahem ahem,she will surely try other flavours,but not in this thing. .😉
use your gutter imagination. .😉
thanks for reading and commenting Di. .😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: momo121

ohhh!!!


wah wah :D

kya baat hai is story ki😆

gutter hi gutter involved hai😆

if u dont mind
BUT PLXXX CONTINUE!

we need more🤣


😆 told ya its gutter. .btw,i am planning to continue it,just waiting for a good response,but not sure if i will get enough time to post it. .
thanks for reading and commenting. .😊
Edited by trivedishraddha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Wowww...Kya amazing OS thaaa...Khushi gayi thi mannaane aur kaaam kar gayiii...
So nice...
Shradda are u going to write an OS of ARSHI's life after marriage, like u wrote about their first morning, their first night...now start with their second night and also their honey moon trip, atleast till they become proud parents of two kids u can start continuing this OS...which will b a very goood romantic FF...with some twists and turns...THink about it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Beautiful, gorgeous and awesome, so romantic and hot! Loved how he teases her by answering everyone downstairs, loved that he is shows how much he loves and wants her in every way..love that she matches him at every step! Emotionally and physically, it was brilliant, thanks for the pm.



Awww,i feel to happy to get such good comments. .thank you. .
and ya,i like to make it emotional,but i end up with just gutter. .😆
trying hard with each update,and your comments say that am not that bad. .😉
thank you again. .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Hey loved the udpate and Madhu is one of the best writers on if man i love her work

and i loved this squeal as well was hawtt



yeah,Madhu Di is my favorite too. .🤗
and thanks for your comment. .😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: dimple288

that was a super hot update..

</div><div>omg. arnav is really shameless..
lakshmi was back... finally, hp found got his premi...😆



ya. .shameless,i know. .my imaginations were going too wild. .😆
and ya,i wanted to add some humour so. .laxmi and HP. .😉
thanks for your comment. .😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Shraddha honey wats ur intention darling ???

that was a really hot update but from Arnav it was xpected !!!!
he really is shameless !!!!

HP and Laxmi🤣

loved the whole OS...u have made all GCGoans proud !!!!!
by the way paaws are u reading this...looks like ur sweetheart is quite wild😉😆


😆 my intention was to provide a gutter update,which i guess i am successfull in doing. .😉
and thanks for tellin that i made GCG proud . .☺️
Paawani my jaan,when she will read,she will comment. .she knows i like it wild. .🤣
thanks for your encouraging comment Di. .🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Chotttiii???

Tu toh sach mein chota packet big dhamak hai...

gutter hi gutter all the way... my god...one month leave?? hai reDM...

lolzz i loved laxmiji wala part...

bold arnav my god...

awesome work... chaa gayi tu toh

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